/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

My daughter!

>>77451146
>Play in the Rain and You get Wet
Oh this fic. I've read it before but I don't mind giving it another go.

>Pros
It's nice that Aqua has a decently long fluff fic. I like the setup, it's quite cute, and is that kind of "chance encounter" I like to see. Aqua being a blushing mess but being bold behind the screen is a detail about her that's captured really well. Aqua, in general, is done well. She has that needy and yet dumbly brashness that's characteristic of her. The prose is solid, even if it's a bit to the point.

>Cons
I remember saying this before but I don't like that the fic brings direct attention to (You) being a foreigner. Saying the quiet part out loud like that is incredibly distracting and reminds me that I'm reading self-indulgent fiction, taking me right out of the story. Aqua is way to stuttery but I'm willing to chalk that up to the fics age.

>Wildcard
I'm gonna keep my eyes peeling for an interesting Aqua fluff prompt so I can complete the Startend trio.

My daughter is so cute bros, I don't know how to handle it sometimes.

My daughter is gone...

My daughter!

Love my daughter~

>>26901335
My daughter!

Lamy seems to really like Onyon~