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good stuff writer-anon

Very spicy, very cute by the end
I don't think the smut part would feel out of place by the end of it. I really like that final conversation they have of it, very emotionally satisfying. I would say you could go even further with it, make Kiara gush about Reine, have Reine react embarrassed about it, overall expand it a bit more to really create an atmosphere of full trust and comfort. Have Kiara drop the self-confidence question then.
I believe that this would also help to alleviate your worries that the smut part will just feel tacked on. If you wholly trust your partner and set it up right, the sex becomes not just a part of the story but is integral to how they express their love and trust in each other. Have Reine stumble a few more times during it, and make Kiara catch her, Reine coming stronger and more asservative with each time.
Maybe its just me, but with the kind of set-up you have given, this isnt a wild, drunken 100% horny one-night stand; its a cute session of love-making and during such communication is important.
By the end of it, Reine will be able to kiss Kiara full of confidence, because she finally reached her dream of sexing wawa. Sex with Kiara isnt only tacked on, it becomes an integral part of Reines growth and she cant move forward and become fully self-realized without it.

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