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>>75245783
You are putting the cart before the horse.
If your intention is just incest sex, then you are adding way too much plot to something that doesnt really need it. You should compress the story and prepare the stage for the scene

If you want something akin a story arc, like ALS, then you need to plan around the structure of your fic,
Pic rel is very basic and can work as your framework, and you dont need to go step by step with it.
>Act one
You have the beggining, in this case Reine and her nephew and some semblance of the inciting incident.
You cant just jump to sex right now because it will feel weird, even if in your brain it makes sense
Stablish the scene in order to create
>Why would reine fuck her nephew
>Why wouldnt she?
>Why has she decided to do it?
>How does the nephew feel about this?
>Why would he say yes? why would he say no?
>what are the pros of doing this? if there is no pros, why is she doing this? what are the cons?
In general just write, stop and think "does this make sense for someone else?" and then adjust. that's why youll see writers post "finished" scenes when asked for their wips, its the ones they are confident are done.

One advice i got a long time ago is "never explain what you mean, because explaining means you did it wrong."
Putting ALS on the spotlight again, the author never sat and did a FAQ of "why is fubuki touching her nephew?" or "why doesnt kenji just inject bat-serum in his balls? is he stupid?". We all understood what she did and some of us thought the husband was a victim, some thought he was guilty and others thought he deserved it. The author never went "well what i meant is that..."