/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>61154089
Hey thanks for reading! I can definitely see how the chapter was low on the tension side of things, likely a product of my early story weaving and not being practiced in trying to properly draw things out to be a little more tense. The problems that arise were also meant to be "low level" in a sense, and not require impressive feats to overcome. If I may though, Anon and Watame were not exactly doing anything illegal, just questionable for a normal citizen, the knowledge was more so just older and forgotten rather than forbidden. I suppose back then I wasn't thinking about how I could add twists to the chapter that might have made it more entertaining, and mainly worked off the initial and simple outline I had that would lead the story to where I wanted it to go. I will certainly be mindful going forward of how I might approach future conflict resolution and building proper tension. It's easy to say that I've definitely gotten better since those days, but I can still get better. Thanks again for the read and the review! I hope you like what you read next and maybe have some feedback that can keep helping me improve.

>>36574494
i imagine the duality of being this cute knight vtuber and an actual softcore porn actress on the side can make for a pretty hectic mental lifestyle. Even the ones just dedicated to vtubing get fucked up by social media.

As I've been writing I find the potential in the cute muscle knight that has retard strength so its sad to hear shes losing her grip on sanity.