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>> No.7465337 [View]
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35P here.
Glad to see your girl join in on GTA today.
Hope we get to see more of her in the future.

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>person complained about lewding Nade
>Nade takes it into her own hands.

Welp that question is sorted.

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>Playing Tetris with Suisex with Mion speaking for her
Unironically top tier stuff

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>>7011771

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>>7040737
Hey anon, I wrote Foxfriend. I like your story a lot personally - as an ass man and a fan of cute innocent-looking girls being deepthroat champs.

It's hard to give you an analysis (because I'm just not good at it) but despite being kind of short I think you got great use of how much you wrote. I feel like it gives enough direction so that the imagination can fill in the gaps before you move on to the next step. But it doesn't feel too cut and dry to be boring, like you're going down a checklist which is something I sadly see in stories where the author isn't that into writing the whole sex portion and does it out of necessity. I guess my advice would be to just write down what you want to write, then fluff it up later on if you feel like you're lacking in the description or interaction department. Sleep on it, re-read it and give it a few more passes before you mark it as done.

I hope you find inspiration to finish the Aqua fic, I definitely want to read anything that involves giving her fatass a nice drilling.

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>>6939925
Yes

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>>6824655
Nice taste anon

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>Ina
Finally a mom I can get along with

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Finally finished writing for the amebrap anon...! Though i shall also wait for all the thread bullshit to be solved. Will post tomorrow..

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>>6755945
nice

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>>6743816
Naisu

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>>6705567
naisu

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>>6501907
based

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>>6250846
Ohhh Sank You!

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>>5990034
I guess I like voyeurism and ntr.

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