/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>21648990
I hope you are ready, I'm not gonna hold back. I'm going to roast you out of love. Don't take it too hard, I'm doing it for your own sake. and because It's fun
>mouth is still too forward and still too pronounced. He looks like he is making a weird face at all times, frankly, it makes him look stupid. The lip should be more subtle and more backwards
>Sleeveless blazer with shoulder pad makes him look like a dunce. It looks like he is going too far for fashion points for a warrior.
>There is only one carry belt for presumably two swords. Even if somehow he has double entry for both the swords on the strap in the back, the belt better be in line with the much heavier sword, otherwise it would just strangle him at all times
>He's got warm clothes covering him from head to toe but rolled up sleeves, why?
>His belt is on his sweater so it does not really hold anything. Kazuma's also has this stupid belt, but it's made of leather with a tight strap and it's the only out there part of his design so it's mostly fine. The belt goes into the sweater, making it a corset. It is extremely slack, making it another design element with no function
>Those scarfs usually got a pin on them, otherwise they should be wrapped on tight. This guy will lose his scarf the moment he draws his sword.
>This guy is wearing heavy clothes and heavy swords but he doesn't have an ounce of armor. This guy doesn't even have a steel toe.
>This guy's big sword is at absolute best a 2 hand sword for his size and muscle mass. This guy may not be able to swing the big one alone with control, let alone carry them both into battle
>What's the point of a high quality leather battle glove if you are going to carry your sword in your gardening glove?
>Why does he have a gardening glove? Seriously, it's clear that he is in some sort of faction and has their stupid themed clothing from head to toe, so why did he exchange his battle glove for a gardening glove?
>This guy carries nothing essential. This guy has no food, water, pouch, anything. He has pockets, small ones. Guts has a bag, Asterix has a water pouch, an adventurer usually needs something.
>These clothes are difficult to get out of, difficult to get into, and especially difficult to wash
Basically, this is a cosplay. This is a comic relief character that loves himself and doesn't get eaten by orcs because they take great pity on him for trying hard.

hello /asp/,

i think this will be the final time i share progress on the model since it's been slow either way, but it's also close to being done!

now's your last chance to get your opinion in, but I'm fairly happy with the result so far. if you think the character looks "generic" then that's my intention, i have no interest in adding more design elements and frankly i do believe a lot of the chuuba designs are a little bit too extreme. I'm a simple guy and i just really like the adventurer aesthetic anything more wouldn't fit me as a person i believe.

also thanks to the anons who gave feedback in the past it helped a lot.