/vr/ - Retro Games

looks like shit
you wasted your time making it
consider deleting asap

While I'll say not to promote your stuff on here, that was pretty good. Malon's walk cycle could use a bit of smoothing out, but nice job overall. Were those your models?

Yep I modeled all that appears in the video ;)

>>5129620
Sorry, I don't want to promote myself but only want to have some critics to improve myself :/ I can delete the post if I have to

>>5129615
>:)

>>5129615
now make the rest of the game in isometric with those graphics

>>5129615
horrible place to get critic,anon.
i'm not joking,try any other site,unless you can stomach the newfags >>5129626
or the shitposters>>5129619
>>5129654
this is just the beggining..

It's ok, them characters need to be a lil bit more... superdeformed? Cartoonish proportions, you know what I mean?

>>5129615
Well Max, it was better than anything I could do. My biggest criticism is when the girl moved Link's body; It looked like it was three separate segments

Marin a cute! Cute!

I think it looks pretty good, but I think maybe the models should be a bit more chibi to better fit the original aesthetic. Perhaps that'll make rigging the animations easier, too? Malon's walk cycle is a bit stiff.

Good job though, everything can get better with time. Also take note of >>5129701, normally I'd just ignore a post like yours but you seem refreshingly earnest.

>>5129615
Remake the music as well

>>5130020
>>5129723
I agree with making them a little more cartoony.
Also, see if you can somehow learn to remake the music. The 8-bit was kind of jarring in comparison to the shiny new graphics.
Overall it's pretty cool, I'd like to see you tackle some of the other 2D games (like the intro to Oracle of Seasons/Ages).

>>5129615
jesus h christ.

why would you update the games visuals in some hideous, ugly, unity engine looking piece of shit.... but leave in 8bit 'chiptunes'? I mean, the game already looks hideous but you have to layer 'retro' music over it to highlight how jarring and abominable it looks. You'd be better off leaving in ambient sounds with no score. this is horrible.

I've disliked the video and given you criticism, do what you will with that.

it good

>>5129615
I liked it but Marin walking cycle could use some love.

>>5129942
Not canon, she becomes a seagull at the ending.

good job, man!

>>5130141
Check out this pleb who couldn't clear the game without dying.

>>5130141
Nothing in Hyrule Warriors is canon.

>>5130163
that never happen.

>>5130163
>>5130186
Oh, I've finished the DX version... this only happens in the GB version. in DX she becomes a seagull.

>>5130169
Hyrule Warriors is its own canon.

>>5130208
I kind of agree. You really can't argue against it being its own era in time like all the other games.

The ocean looks more like oil rather than water. Otherwise it's alright. Make Marin shorter and a bit stubbier to fit the chibi esque art-style. Keep it up!

The only thing i didn't like was how fast and flat the ocean waves are. I couldn't help but stare at it and i felt my heart racing in sync with the bobbing.

Despite the few trolls, there are really great returns that I will keep in memory to improve!
In outline, I need to do more details, spend more time on the animation and pay attention to the design of the characters, and music. I thought there would be less constructive comments, but thank you, you are the best!

>>5129615
Why the ever loving FUCK did you think it was a sane idea to promote here? Are you dense?

The boat looks like a toy floating in the bathtub. I don’t get the appeal of making something entirely with stock assets. Very generic looking.

>>5129615
c&d in 3, 2, 1 ...

trash and not retro

>>5130186
wrongo
I did it loads of times by savescumming

Should be hand drawn in Katsuya Terada's style.

>>5129615
The animation is a bit stiff

>>5134158
this