/vr/ - Retro Games

>>4596719
demo:
http://s000.tinyupload.com/?file_id=67919139656850447143

nice map, fun to play, bit overdetailed/realism for my taste (were the benches/ashtrays really necessary?) but still full of sloppy construction (many two-sided walls that don't need to be two-sided and then confuse the player as they look like doors on the automap) and stuff even noobs should know not to do (transparent textures on single-sided walls creates "tutti-fruitti", lots of warnings about unknown textures on map load). both your previous maps had the same kinds of errors, but you've apparently ignored previous feedback. also the wad is full of cruft, there are multiple instances of map data without map labels, obviously an attempt was made to delete maps from the wad but it failed or left incomplete. there are two dehacked lumps. PP_START/END markers appear to be messed up. you are obviously a promising mapper but your technical skills/knowledge are lacking. please learn how to manage wad resources properly.