/vr/ - Retro Games

Well the second draft of the video is finally done.

I chipped away at this thing for two weeks now, and I addressed almost every piece piece of feedback best I could, there's still some glaring omissions in the selection but I think its a pretty good primer for showcasing what Doom can do these days.
The editing is MUCH tighter, its now 10 minutes long while having double the content, and I even tried to sync the intro footage to the music.
Will add all the links in the description later, I have to take a bus in one hour.
I would like to make this the final version, I'm feeling a bit burned out and I want to move on to other videos, but I still have some concerns

*Is it 2fast now?
*Can you actually read shit?
*Does the end bit still work?
*Should I get a better thumbnail?

If everything's okay I will put it out there for good, I left it unlisted for now.

https://youtu.be/je0YYkck9go

Old video for reference
https://youtu.be/xV6bLT8SgWg

Well the video is "done", I uploaded it as private, but If Im not mistaken you should be able to see it with the link
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xV6bLT8SgWg

Theres still lots of stuff missing I wanted to include, but I decided to reach a compromise and go for the 15 minute mark, not overly short but not so long as to drag on for too long
From here I could just add everything else I wanted to cover and make a long video or just make a couple of riveting sequels like "SO YOU WANT TO PLAY SOME MORE DOOM" and "SO YOU WANT TO PLAY SOME MORE MORE DOOM"

As I mentioned before It started as a ripoff of the prodoom monster strats, but I decided to cut back on that a little, make it a bit more of its own thing instead of trying to capture lighting in a bottle.
Im not entirely happy with the middle section, Im not opposed to the idea of redoing that entirely, but I wanted some feedback before going back to the drawing board, this has been pretty much a learning on the fly sort of thing.
If any of you are actually video editors: Im sorry