/vr/ - Retro Games

>>5269592
https://www.dropbox.com/s/6f0ph2jwab8cwmi/lotx-ms5.rar?dl=0

Baseline instructions:
1: Play the maps to your own desires, taking in reasonable criticisms without getting angry when I fail to understand. Make notes, draw images, screenshots, etc. Try to get into my mind and understand my intent for the level
2: Share the notes and/or edit the map, implementing tags/comments on them, like pictured. This will help understand consicely and may serve as inspiration/understanding
3: Take the conversations to heart and note, and prehaps see what the other person is doing and go "Aha, that's neat/cool, why didn't I think of that?"

I didn't ask for all the work to be done, nor attention or spoonfeeding.. I just asked for help in a way I could properly comprehend, and would benefit us both.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/6f0ph2jwab8cwmi/lotx-ms5.rar?dl=0

Basically; Conceptualization/sketch based feedback, Think of like when a concept artist submits various sketches for edit or improvement, and the person who asked for them goes "well, I like A, but B looks funny and could look really nice with certain elements of C and D, maybe E could be repurposed/recycled or based into something else?"

Whatever, waste of my time and effort, Comments are going to get deleted and people will continue thinking the same.