/vr/ - Retro Games

Hey, can you guys critique my WAD? (Just the first level, the others are all works in progress)

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BxmKDpnylHpweTQzeERvQW1BZGc

It's my first wad which I've publicly let people try out, every other thing was usually just experimenting with GZDoom builder. I'd love some constructive criticism and stuff.