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All word and pixel /tg/-related lewdness is welcome here, so long as the rules are followed. Writefags, consider pastebin/1d4chan rather than dumping for long stories. Drawfags with uncensored pictures need to host their images offsite and link to them. For those of you visiting from other boards, err on the side of censorbars and spoilers if you're hesitant.

People especially appreciate it when you give them meaningful feedback and criticism, so make sure to do so. It's easy and both writefags and drawfags will love you for it.

In any case, enjoy! Remember to play nice and that all contributions and requests are welcome!

>> No.33472188

DISCLAIMER: While these threads are quite tolerant of many different forms of /d/eviancy, you can't just assume that everyone will automatically share your kinks. There's nothing explicitly preventing you from talking about your fetishes, but if someone has one that you dislike, please do not derail the thread with a flamewar- there's plenty of smut for everybody here.

Master smut list:
(/a/'s monstergirl fic collection is in here too.)

Smut list, 1d4chan edition:

A guide to constructive criticism, because "Your writing/artwork sucks" doesn't help anyone get better at it.


Need some help coming up with something to write? Here's a few requests that haven't been filled yet.


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We're too busy over in the culinary thread getting sweaty over dryads watching salad dressing be poured all over them. Sorry.

>> No.33472539

Link to salad dryads?

>> No.33472648

it's the cooking thread right on the front page

>> No.33472651

needs the new pastebin link

>> No.33472667

Master smut list says its down - any way to reup?

>> No.33472955 [DELETED] 

Todays Thursday. This is exactly the kind of thing that turned everyone against ERP threads. Stick to the weekends like you said you would.

>> No.33473692 [DELETED] 

To be fair, it's past 9 on a Friday morning somewhere in the world (or past 8, if they don't observe DST).

>> No.33473710 [DELETED] 


This. Friday NIGHT is fine, but this is fucking Thursday. Get it together, people.
Sage because only a doofus would think Thursday night/Friday morning counts as the weekend.

>> No.33473743 [DELETED] 

but it's not consistent with when it always comes up, which is 9 on saturday morning by that same timezone its apparently based off of now.

Besides that, nobody considers friday morning "the weekend".

Also, nobody cares how you justify it even if you could. The ERPfags just kept creeping across that line til they said "fuck it, we'll make threads whenever we want".

I kinda respect you guys, don't do this

>> No.33473800 [DELETED] 

I agree, if you don't stick to weekends you'll just be as bad as the ERP threads. And I know you're better than that.

>> No.33473887 [DELETED] 

Seconded, thirded, whatever. We really, really, really don't need to go the way of QTG (be terrible and always up) or /erpg/ (be terrible, draw attention, get exiled).

>> No.33473927 [DELETED] 

I think it's been said enough, guys. Just let this thread die

>> No.33474013 [DELETED] 

where'd the ERP threads get exiled to?

>> No.33474083 [DELETED] 

they were told to go to /soc/, but they rejected it because they don't like weird people trying to do sex stuff to each other.

They tried /d/ because obviously, but /d/ only allows imagedumps I think. I don't know how all their off topic discussion went over.

Last I heard, a lot of them were arguing that /vg/ was the place that made the most sense for them.

They also make pretty blatant threads here sometimes.

please sage all responses until this thread is cleaned up

>> No.33474133

Just posting this and I'll go to bed

A mermaid's apology ( Human x Mermaid, no smut yet, Hugs and cuddle, WIP)

I would appreciate some feedback before I continue, especially from monster, from whom i borrowed the characters

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>> No.33474179 [DELETED] 

/vg/ actually USED to host the Tera x WoW x Maplestory x Flyff x whatever else ERP players in their own thread but were exiled here. Or rather, they were banished there.

>> No.33474180 [DELETED] 

This. You really jumped the gun this time.

>> No.33474200 [DELETED] 

stick to at least friday afternoons

>> No.33474205 [DELETED] 

>Wow, smut thread's up early.
>I wonder what's going on in there today?
>Talk of ERP threads being banned
>You can't do X. You can't do Y.
>My attack mod friends are gonna ban everyone because I have a stick up my ass.
>Nothing new here.
>Back to work.

>> No.33474232 [DELETED] 

Sex is bad and you should feel bad

>> No.33474284 [DELETED] 

I remember when /tg/ was about fun and good content. When did the rules lawyers and no-fun-allowed jerks get here?

No sage because fuck you.

>> No.33474314 [DELETED] 

>they rejected it because they don't like weird people trying to do sex stuff to each other.

But isn't that exactly what ERP threads are, anyway?

>> No.33474364 [DELETED] 

I Was trying to point out how dumb it was

if this thread wasn't going to get deleted for being too early, it's going to get deleted for ERPfags trying to continue the war they lost and getting meta

>> No.33474367 [DELETED] 


>Literal circlejerking
>good content

It's not about hating fun, it's about respecting people who don't got to /tg/ for porn.

>> No.33474422 [DELETED] 


>literally one mouse click to hide a thread.

You must be an Amerifat if you think it's less effort to sage, report, and bitch than it is to just hide the thread.

>B-b-but the rurrs!

We both know that if it was something you personally enjoyed, you couldn't give shit number one about the site rules.

>> No.33474533 [DELETED] 

dude, it's over. The Mods told you to go to /soc/ stay there.

You guys pretend to be diaper wearing amputee foxes who only speak in rhyme to help jerk each other off, do it somewhere that isn't a blue board meant for board games and miniatures

>> No.33474563 [DELETED] 

He was talking about the smut thread tho.

>> No.33474618 [DELETED] 

/erpg/ just fit the definition of literal circlejerking so well

We should all stop posting here. I know I will. Good day.

>> No.33474724 [DELETED] 

I enjoy porn as much as the next guy, but I don't try to force it on others, and I know what a blue board is. If that's too hard of a concept to wrap your head around, then maybe using a computer isn't for you.

>> No.33475172

salad dryad link >>33463193

>> No.33475424 [DELETED] 

>they were told to go to /soc/, but they rejected it because they don't like weird people trying to do sex stuff to each other.
There's an ERP thread on /soc/ now >>>/soc/19773408

That thread's being badly trolled by both anti-ERPfags from here and /soc/ posters who don't want ERPers there.

>They tried /d/ because obviously, but /d/ only allows imagedumps I think. I don't know how all their off topic discussion went over.
ERP threads on /d/ get deleted even when they do have image dumps (more images:posts than /d/ quests, etc).

>You must be an Amerifat if you think it's less effort to sage, report, and bitch than it is to just hide the thread.
Pass users.

>> No.33475703

Master list has been removed

What is happening?

>> No.33475764


Evidence this is a troll trying to mess with the /wst/.
If he was a regular participant, in addition to not posting on Thursday night like a jerk, he would have known the new link to the master list.

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Or an eager new guy.

Anyway, I'm bored, anyone want some mildly non-serious/comical smut writing done?

>> No.33477243 [DELETED] 


Well then, my quarrelsome young buck
Off is the direction you are ordered to fuck.

>> No.33477520

I'm surprised that there's not more m/m (and more m's)available, forced or otherwise. Surely some squires have busy lords and elves need showing what men can do ;)

>> No.33477802

Don't go jumping to conspiracies. Maybe some people are busier on the weekends.

>> No.33477990

Which one is it?

>> No.33478197

So we gonna get any stories on it soon or not? Afterall, it would be too cruel to leaf us out on a limb.

Afterall,i think having some writing on this would be absolutely delicious

>> No.33478913

Guys, I need some advice.
I've lost the fire to keep writing smut, but I've got a few RP players who are looking forward to our next sessions. How do I let them down gently?

>> No.33479306

>joined Aetolia recently because it advertised mature RP and beast races
>map is godawful
>just don't have the drive to learn all the history and shit of it anyway
>back to SL...

I kind of miss HellMOO.

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There is a dire lack of lewd to match with the phoenix lords pics.

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>> No.33479495

B-Baka, its not like I want you follow my Aspect. Just stop being so weak, sheeeesh.

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>> No.33479781

Shit, I missed the hypothetical dryad cheesecake.

At least I have my imagination.

>> No.33479864

its archived at foolz, read it there

The best part was when they put lettuce on a bacon sandwich

>> No.33479875

What is this Aetolia thing? A cursory look at the website makes me think it's a sandboxy kinda mmo with vampires, sounds kinda neat...

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Wasn't much, just Greentext about a Dryad getting flustered by watching people eat salads...

...Speaking of nomming that biomass...

>> No.33479925

It's a MUD...

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>lettuce on a bacon sandwich

>> No.33480016

>The best part was when they put lettuce on a bacon sandwich

Did they follow up with the tomato?

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But they did add some pork...both literally and metaphorically

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I have a mighty need.

>> No.33480259


Pork? A BLP?

Sometimes I think I don't understand the younger generation.

>> No.33480328

Dryads getting hot and bothered over salad dressing makes as much sense as humans finding BBQ sexy.

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I don't know, I find it rather attactive

>> No.33480377

Here, have fun

>> No.33480389

Notice it isn't on the girl.

>> No.33480443

just come out and say it, apologize, maybe have some light snacks available

Fuegan a best

>> No.33480477
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This better?

>> No.33480522

Some people are attracted to feet, a part of the body that has almost nothing to do with sexual intercourse.

Since when did fetishes have to make sense.

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>> No.33481100
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>peta says one night stands are inconsiderate
>public sex is fine though

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>this is how PETA defeats the heroes

>> No.33481408

What the fuck is this.

Are the /ERP/ fags trying to sink the /wst/ by making it appear sooner and all ?

>> No.33481823

what's the source on this?

>> No.33482025

Gonna have to second this. Google and iqdb give no results.

>> No.33482068


Some Fate spin off, if i am not mistaken, where the little girl with Hercules is th MC

>> No.33482090

Much appreciated Anon. That's all I needed to know.

>> No.33482343

ArchiveAnon reupped it last week. PB mods deleted it.

>> No.33482537

That one got wiped, too. As did ArchiveAnon's own reup of the list.

There's nothing to this thread for now. Do nothing with it until ArchiveAnon makes his move.

>> No.33482597

didn't know porn wasn't allowed on pastebin

they should change that

are there any other sites where you can upload stuff like this and read it without having to download it again?

>> No.33482640

We could always just use the 1d4chan list.

>> No.33482770


The 1d4chan list has just about everything.

I do have all of the raw data from the end of last Monday, but I'm not reuploading it just yet. Our hypothesis was that PB noticed the Master List because it got close to 50k views. However, both ArchiveAnon and my own reupload of the list have been deleted between now and then. Something else is looking for this list specifically. If there's something not on the 1d4chan list that you remember from the "new addition" section, leave a post and I might see it.

>> No.33482846

>Something else is looking for this list specifically
That is too spooky man.
/wst/ is being hunted by virtual ghost monsters

>> No.33482879

Are you dumb?

>> No.33482904

It could have just been looking for copies, we don't know.

That being said, check and make sure your favorite stories are still alive.

I've lost a few.

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>> No.33483161

Sorry I'm late. Didn't expect the thread to be up so soon. Also, finding that the reuploaded list got deleted is a bitch- figures it would get canned right as it hit the 50k hits mark. (Perhaps that's what woke them up in the first place, in retrospect.)

As far as I know, all the other pastes on my account are acting normally (for the moment at least). Nevertheless, I'll go and back everything up again to be on the safe side.

>> No.33483186

Dumb, gotcha.

>> No.33483190

You're not late. This thread was put up unreasonably early.

>> No.33483219

So I was told to come to this thread (took me a while because I was otherwise occupied), and now I'm here.

What exactly am I supposed to do? What do you guys do?

>> No.33483241
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Welp, this is an odd thread to start the weekend with.
Anyways, heres my absorption paladin fic.
Or, "Goddamn I am bad at titles."
>The Faith of Inimel: Shining Vainglorious
Tags: Absorption, m/f/f, PaladinxBanditxWorshiper, Threesome, oral (male, female), titfuck, teasing

Feedback/criticism/gross-outs appreciated. Welcomed even.

>> No.33483247

Tell you to stop making /b/ threads on /tg/

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>> No.33483266

Pardon? I'm really not looking for an argument, and I didn't start that other thread. Something tells me I should just go. Enjoy your... thing.

>> No.33483293

But that's just not true.

>> No.33483311

If it was our "friends" from you-know-where, there would be a lot more metadiscussion here. Fortunately that doesn't seem to be happening.

Don't worry about them, they're a bit on edge. We write fapfics here, plain and simple. If you want to write one, post it here when it's done. Also, be prepared to take requests.

>> No.33483357

Maybe make it unlisted this time?

>> No.33483393

I don't think that will work- its probably a script so it would be picked up anyway, and I'd rather not risk a ban and lose everything. Best to keep the list on 1d4chan.

>> No.33483407

That why I asked if >>33481408 was dumb.

Is there supposedly some culturally over-emphasized Big Divide between the WST and the late ERP general? It all seems rather silly to me...

>> No.33483434

They're bitter about us staying here when they couldn't. Let's just keep it at that before things are derailed even more than usual.

>> No.33483546

Makes sense. I'd be bitter too, I suppose, though I imagine there was a fair bit more cross-over than people are willing to admit.

Putting that to rest, why are people so on edge? What kinds of things am I allowed to write and post, or link or whatever? Why are people mad about the thread being made "early" as if that was some kind of real concern?

>> No.33483738

The list being deleted from pastebin was an unpleasant surprise, since it had gone unmolested for nearly a year- nobody saw its deletion coming.

As long as you can make whatever you're writing about relevant to /tg/ in some way (e.g. using a setting like 40k or even something sufficiently fantasy-esque), it's free game. Take a look at the request list if you want to get a few ideas.

As for starting early, the general etiquette here is to hold off on making threads until Friday evenings- although a fair number of our people are Eurofags, even they're probably asleep right now. Needless to say, a thread with no stuff being made in it is not a pretty sight.

I for one hope you enjoy your stay here and look forward to seeing what you can come up with.

>> No.33483817

I think I'll pass, actually. There seems to be a lot of social strictures and abundant tension, with very little return. I'll just keep my smut to myself for now, until I learn more about the community here and whether or not I want to be a part of it.

>> No.33483984

Conditions here aren't representative of how things normally go on. Check out some of the older threads on foolz and keep lurking on here. Things will calm down eventually.

>> No.33484069

Isn't that what they just fucking said?

>> No.33484090


What >>33483984 said. /wst/ is usually a laid-back and freewheeling place, filled with folks making stories and art, usually with naughty bits.

>> No.33484135
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I prefer these kind of threads over ERP threads. I feel bad, since I just don't have the time or ability to do ERP, but I absolutely enjoy and am able to throw out little "what ifs" or short stories.

Or just pointless lewd speculation about stupid things in fantasy settings.

>> No.33484278

> time, ability
Is it that different? Writing a bit of smut for a crowd making requests, vs writing smut for a crowd of one? Not that I will ever know myself now that I hear that other thread is KOS now.

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I can spill out 20 lines of nonsense about a dyrad losing her mind over salad dressing and the sound of croutons in a soft titillating effort. It's a whole other story and devotion of energy to have an entire one-on-one hardlewd with someone across several hours when I already have 90% of my time devoted to games, work, a relationship, and general writing.

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I can't stop laughing at this fucking chick

>> No.33484464

>soft titillating effort
It was my understanding that there was demand for all wares, of all levels of intensity and duration in the flesh-and-mind market that was the other place.
>that image
Now I'm just legitimately forlorn I have nothing lewd to read and nothing lewd to write and no one online to read and write it with.

>> No.33484506

Clear case of rolling to resist her Fetish and failing because of how big the TN to beat was. It's more hilarious because after she's all "OH MY GOD ARE YOU OK" even if seconds before her brain was 120% "Yeah, yeah, kiss that slut, oh God yes, take that mana, hold her in place oh my god her tears look so warm and genuine oh my God RAPE HER WHORE MOUTH WITH YOUR TONGUE YES, YES, YESSSSS" and just does fuck all.

>> No.33484524

I don't lewd that hard in public. I'm not going to describe ruining a sloppy syrup pussy with 14 inches of GREEN FURY from an orc so much as I'm going to lewd over a dryad suggesting she make an openface BLT with an orc with the bed as the bread.

>> No.33484543


>> No.33484563

well people find putting desserts on girls sexy, why would this be so far fetched?

>> No.33484585

well go ahead and write something for fun then, even if its short it will be appreciated.
I do feel you on not having enough time to write all the things you want to write, its tough to be in real life sometimes.

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>being forcibly kissed until you grow weak and exhausted and helpless

>> No.33484618

>sloppy syrup pussy with 14 inches of GREEN FURY from an orc
I am laughing pretty hard now. I'll admit I've done a bit of time on the dark side and I didn't run into anything like that unless I was looking for it. Is food a common theme for you?

>> No.33484654

No, I just blew my proverbial load on the comedy food thread that's gone now. Plus I was exaggerating like the animes for effect. My hip are moving etc etc.

Which is why I can't write much now. Plus I need to get some sleep for work.

>> No.33484707

>hips are moving etc
I always did like that vein of exaggeration, but is it really distinct to chinese cartoons? Pretty much any written "talky" porn ends up coming out much like that.

>> No.33484766

Hentai has a very DISTINCT flavor of absurd lewds, anon.

Someone post the image of like 300 quotes from various doujins, I don't got it handy


>> No.33484835


John K. Peta agrees with you

>> No.33484885

I've been waiting for this! I've got stuff for you!!!

>> No.33484910

Oh boy!

>> No.33484945

No, I've read them. I guess I've just read too much western talky smut to give any one country the dubious honor of "most bizarre".

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And would you believe there's actually more like this?

>> No.33484976

Most of the western fetish stuff has dialogue like this, actually.

>> No.33485000

No. No it's not. At all. Like, ever. It doesn't talk about breastpussies getting pregnant.

>> No.33485190

Yeah, there was a guy on /tg/ a long time ago who wrote some smut based on some comments that "Thri-keen arn't sexy"

He did a few sories. I know him. I got them and put them on pastebin.

If you anons who do more archiving then reading and fapping to the /wst/ could ensure these are properly backed up, I would appreciate it.

Sahyagin Porn - http://pastebin.com/H4jik2GJ
Satyre and Aranea porn - http://pastebin.com/WvXvd4UJ
Thri-Keen Porn - http://pastebin.com/S2LQtPSu
lillend and dryad porn - http://pastebin.com/H6qxe5Ty
Prometheus and Bob porn - http://pastebin.com/UN5q6s5M

>> No.33485264

I can do that, though tags might be nice. Dont want anyone to stumble over any unpleasant surprises when reading them, now.

>> No.33485265

Whoever created this needs to get out of my head.

Men and women in hentai do seem to never shut the fuck up. Some of them get weird but others just keep talking about the same thing over and over. I get it!

>> No.33485312

Yeah... I don't know what to do there... I mean
Sahyagin Porn - M/F, captive, cleric , xeno
Satyre and Aranea porn - M/M, trap, bondage, xeno
Thri-Keen Porn - M/F, Xeno
lillend and dryad porn - F/F Xeno (I really don't remember it's been so long since I read it)
Prometheus and Bob porn - I just didn't read this. I put it up for competitionist sake.

>> No.33485322

Speech bubbles are just a cheap way to fill space and not draw more than necessary. It works (kinda) but leads to stuff like this >>33484959

>> No.33485332

(Cont >>33485312)

With all of these, I could be wrong on the tags. I'm too tired to read through them all and list off every single thing, so I hope my quick once over is good enough for now.

>> No.33485384

It gets passed on to the videos as well. Annoying as hell.

Wait, wait, wait...

Prometheus and Bob porn? Like the Prometheus and Bob Tapes? No...no...

>> No.33485390

Well, for example, from the image at >>33484959:
>apologize to the god of sex!
>impregnate my ass!
>do it! do it! pout your come all over my unborn fetus!
>I-I'm sorry I kind of raped you...
>it's as if my entire body is turning into cum!
I've seen all of these, word for word, in western stuff - quite recently, actually. Well, okay, the bit with the unborn fetus is paraphrased, but the phrase "unborn fetus" was there and the meaning was the same.

>It doesn't talk about breastpussies getting pregnant.
Like, do you not read 70s smutty science fiction?

>> No.33485433

>I've seen all of these, word for word, in western stuff

... where, exactly?

>> No.33485485

Yes, the author in question is also one of the most genius trolls I have ever had the pleasure with associating with.

>> No.33485507

If people are interested, I was going to Write some more write faggotry on the blind date with slaanesh front.

>> No.33485539
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earlier parts plox?

>> No.33485551

Okay... NOW I read it... I still can't do tage for that... just... just...


>> No.33485606

If I can find it I will.

>> No.33485619

>apologize to the god of sex!
Samoan war god domination stuff.
>impregnate my ass!
Pretty run of the mill S&M (hetero, even).
>do it! do it! pout your come all over my unborn fetus!
One of those "written-for-women" episodic things from the go go era.
>I-I'm sorry I kind of raped you...
Older-man type fetish stuff.
>it's as if my entire body is turning into cum!
Same go go era thing.

I wish I had links, but half of those weren't even online. I don't take such rigorous notes when conducting this kind of... transient research. I should start saving up these kinds of quotes when I find them.

>> No.33485683

starting the thread that early is reprehensible. please do not do this. there's good reason we do things from friday evening to sunday evening and not beyond.

self-moderation is very important

>> No.33485702

Just posting this and I will go to bed.

A mermaid's apology ( human x mermaid, no smut yet, WIP)

Feedback would be appreciated since its my first attempt at smut, especially from monster, from whom I borrowed the characters

>> No.33485703


But those ones are like, among the least weird things in that image up there. Or even the stupidest. "Your bad dick is eradicating my police pussy with your bad children!" is dumber than any one of those.

>> No.33485708


What are they going to do, delete us? There'd be a riot.

>> No.33485719
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>> No.33485732

Forgot link



>> No.33485761

>Your bad dick is eradicating my police pussy with your bad children!
That's just translation awkwardness, anon. You should read translations of some of the eastern europeon pos-soviet smut. I think there was a sale on a whole bunch of them for kindle or kobo or something recently. My friend has a million of them.

>> No.33485853

I need to go sleep myself. I'll see if I can't add them by tomorrow morning (or next thread- they may be the same thing).

>> No.33486479

It's friday afternoon in Vietnam.

And I am writing an Eldar/IG ss-thing.
Does someone care for that?
It's gonna be pretty femdom-heavy but not become too dark (I hope.) I'm 3 pages in and my Eldar is already pretty insane. I hope that is not a problem for anyone. If it is, tough luck.

>> No.33486548

Yesh pls.

All shotas love "special kisses" on their no-no parts.

>> No.33486571


>Not Eldar shota getting his ass fatally ripped open by the superior cock of the Emperor's finest.

Do you even 40k?

>> No.33486605

>not making the Shota-Emperor taming all of the female Eldar Pantheon and Tyranid Hive Queen with his MIGHTY DONG.

Pls, are you even trying.

>> No.33486627

Hm. I'm leaving th age a bit ambiguous but I'm not going for thaaat young.
He's drafted as a soldier, after all. Not to IG standards, though...
Maybe around 14ish but stunted development because war-torn world.

Nah. This one didn't eat his vegetables. And hasn't seen a decent piece of meat in his life.
Or much food anyway.

>> No.33486646

Well looks like he's gonna have a nice big slice of Eldar Buttocks.

>inb4 he marinates it with his own 'gravy'

>> No.33486666

Yeah, he gets to eat that...
Forcefed, actually.

>> No.33486685

Mmm, well I hope that happens while he's getting a "mouth hug" from the Eldar cougar.

>> No.33486832

That's what certain other lewd-related threads on /tg/ thought, too. Better to be careful and circumspect about things.

>> No.33486991

Those threads were against the rules. We're not. Timing has nothing to do with it.

>> No.33487130

Soooo, Paladin of Joy Quest has got me imagining the Nephilim Paladin having sex with pretty much everybody, like her having sex with the werewolf guy as he goes into a frenzy, but later turns sweet and docile midsex (licking her all over, like her face, the places where he scratched her, and other places), or teaching the 10'0" 14-year-old frost giant about how to pleasure a woman, and then how to pleasure a woman in his regular size of 30'0" (don't worry, her paladin powers grant her a giant's invulnerability), or looking at her party member's special tattoo on her butt while they're bathing together, and then heavily bathing each other while the party member is ranting about how slutty she thinks the paladin's body is and being envious of her bust and falling for her.

Problem is, I haven't written any smut in my whole life. Uh, I'm making a request for at least one of these scenarios.

>> No.33487282

Nephlim = Half-Angel, which means she's got wings, which are expressive and capable of lifting her body up into the air a bit with just one flap. Could come in handy when she's on top.

Those wings could get dangerous when someone's eating her out and she's flapping her wings hard with someone's head trapped between her thighs...

>> No.33487320

Fate/kaleid liner PRISMAILLYA to be exact!
>In a world where Illya von Einzbern is raised as a normal girl, her life is suddenly changed when she is forcible recruited by Kaleido Stick Ruby to be her Master and become a Magical Girl!


>Or just pointless lewd speculation about stupid things in fantasy settings.
It's mostly this for me, probably the biggest problem people had with the ERP threads was how it was mostly used as advertisement for F-list.

Indeed, good ERPing can take a lot out of you...

What makes it better is that the Kissing Girl is her Magically Created Clone that formed using the Archer (AKA Heroic Spirit EMIYA) Class Card as a base, and the girl being kissed is her parallel universe counterpart and that Shirou's biological sister!

It's Nasu-verse Anon, she's getting her Prana Drained!

>> No.33487358 [DELETED] 

This is another reminder that this is a troll thread aiming to get the real WST banned from the board.

Do not respond here if you're a contributor or WST regular. Wait for the real thread to come up tonight.

Do not listen to anyone claiming this thread is authentic or people discussing things here.

Now let's wait until the real WST begins tonight.

>> No.33487398 [DELETED] 


Just a warning Anon, flying smut has been attempted before, and it did not go well for that poor soul...

Meh, it's Friday now, might as well use the thread anyways...
If the Mods had a problem with it being early, they would have culled it like they did the other week when the last thread ran long.

>> No.33487417


This. We could make one every day of the week and they wouldn't do shit.

>> No.33487445

Well they probably WOULD, since the reason we keep to the weekends is so we have content to post, and without constant content the thread quickly devolves into a shitstorm.

>> No.33487481

But we shouldnt, and we wont.

>> No.33487490 [DELETED] 


Once again a warning that THESE PEOPLE ARE TROLLS out to kill the WST.

They are well aware that mods deleted the WST two weeks ago for being up outside of the weekend and hope to get it permanently banned by spamming it.

Do not reply, do not read, wait for the real WST tonight.

Thank you.

>> No.33487501

>Sireyi screams out in joy when she at last reaches her peak for the first time in like, ever. Her pleasure can be heard for miles. As she comes down from the temporary euphoria, her lover, Jianxi, looks up at her. "Oi, slut, was it good for you?" Jianxi asks.
>"Of course it was, love," Sireyi says as she pets Jianxi's head like she would a cat.
>Jianxi would appreciate this contact, but more pressing concerns are on her mind at the moment. "That's great, slut. I have something to ask of you, though."
>"What is it, my belovedest?" Soreyi says, wondering what other fun acts of pleasure Jianxi has in store for her.
>"Can you put me down now? It's fucking cold up here," Jianxi says as she observes a flock of ducks passing underneath the two of them.
>Sireyi yelps in surprise as she finally realizes that she brought her lover up with her into the sky. "Sorry about that, hahaha..." Sireyi laughs with a sheepish grin.
>"No wonder she was groping my butt so hard," she thinks to herself.

>> No.33488003 [DELETED] 

You're a troll trying to stop us having the thread.

If you think it shouldn't be up, report it and stop spamming. If the mods really don't want it outside the weekend, and don't count Friday as weekend, they'll delete it for you.

>> No.33488058 [DELETED] 

>and don't count Friday as weekend

In what alternate reality do you live, where Friday is considered weekend?

>> No.33488086 [DELETED] 

Everything between closing time on friday and monday morning is weekend.

>> No.33488168 [DELETED] 

>If the mods really don't want it outside the weekend, and don't count Friday as weekend, they'll delete it for you.
Indeed, you are only forcing more meta drama, which is what I think caused the demise of the ERP threads in the first place.
So sit down, shut up, and get your smut on!

>> No.33488280
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I love that image. I think my favourite still has to be
>now that I actually came in my little brother's face, all my fears seem to have vanished

>> No.33488300 [DELETED] 

>meta drama, which is what I think caused the demise of the ERP threads
The mod was very clear that it was because ERP isn't a traditional game.

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>> No.33488345

I love how there's a heart at the end there.

I don't see the connection to the filename though.

>> No.33488420
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Several file names in my folder are relics of a lost moment in time where - then and only then - they made perfect sense.

It can't be helped.

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>> No.33488563 [DELETED] 

But it goes hand in hand with traditional games! Book of Erotic Fantasy and all that, who doesn't love ERP in their favorite settings?

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>> No.33488864

>And I am writing an Eldar/IG ss-thing.

>It's gonna be pretty femdom-heavy but not become too dark (I hope.) I'm 3 pages in and my Eldar is already pretty insane. I hope that is not a problem for anyone. If it is, tough luck.

>Does someone care for that?
Oh god YES!

not /ss/, now if a few sisters of battle decide to have some fun with a captured eldarshota before they purge the xeno (or take him back to the monistratry for more "interogation") thats another story

Nah, we'd have no content then, and then the threads would just be shit, weekend only is nice

>But it goes hand in hand with traditional games! Book of Erotic Fantasy and all that, who doesn't love ERP in their favorite settings?
Really depends on the tone of the game and your group, there's quite a lot of fetishy and ERP stuff in my group's games but it's a sorta comedic setting and we're all comfortable enough with each other that it's not a problem but there has been several groups and campaigns which I wouldn't even think of ERPing with or inserting a magical realm into.

>> No.33488915
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It would make my evening.

>> No.33488958

Oh, thank you. This means a lot in terms of motivation.
But now I'm really afraid to hit the wrong fetish and scare everyone away.
Ah well, full fap ahead!

>> No.33488997

>But now I'm really afraid to hit the wrong fetish and scare everyone away.
>Ah well, full fap ahead!
Don't worry, /tg/ is basically a less futa obsessed /d/, no matter what you write, more than a few people will like it

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I like forcefulness within the realms of what isn't outright violent/bloodletting/otherwise damaging. Being scared or confused by own desire is also good.

The IG char(s) could easily have a bit of the latter, and Eldar desires easily work with the former. You needn't worry, I think.

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>> No.33489026

I'd love to know the moment that name was perfectly sensical.

>> No.33489042
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The moment it was posted, actually. Some guy posted this photo of his bird tits statue and I inquired about it. Turned out he'd found it in El Paso on a vacation trip, and I decided the added text and file name might make for a useful image in the future.

Lo and behold, I was right. Just as the avian mammaries predicted.

>> No.33489055

Well of course it's awkward to do in person but online tabletop is valid for /tg/ purposes is it not?

>> No.33489074

That explains it. And it was a chicken in need of explanation.

But actually I was asking about the net-cafe heart one.

>> No.33489120

Well, that will be one satisfied reader at least!

I'm not saying this will be painful to read, but that someone gets it up the poopchute till he likes it.

>> No.33489128

Again, can vary, even online some people aren't really good for ERPing though that's more due to them being assholes and not making sure their partner(s) have some fun also

>> No.33489191


Sorry, son... Even online, there are people who want to play a damn game, and just aren't interested in furnishing you with material to fap with.

>> No.33489202
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Oh wow aren't we up early today.
Oh well, one more thing to look forward to after work.

>> No.33489308

No, I mean stuff like trying to play a bitch breaker futa with someone who specifically said they don't like futa, that sort of thing, it's not nice to force a magical realm of yours into an ERP game with someone's asked for that to not be in it just like it's not nice to force a magical realm in a nonfetishy game.

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>> No.33489539

Nice one.

>> No.33489612

to be an attention whore, but i would REALLY like some feedback on my first fic. I'm not sure either if i will end it with sex or cuteness overload. What do you guys think ?

>> No.33489621


Not bad, except for the "fchat". >>>/a/, >>>/b/ and/or >>>/d/ would be more pertinent.

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>> No.33489881 [DELETED] 

Which one was it?

>> No.33489927


Fukkin' saved, will use as pic for one of the next threads.

>> No.33490170

Funny, that's how I always pictured you.

>> No.33490188
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It's not the first time he's depicted himself as such.

>> No.33490232

Yes, but also constantly thinking of harpy butts?
Hes just like me!

>> No.33490515

>smutomancer out for vacation for another week


>> No.33490683
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...I'm so totally boob guy...

>> No.33490759

Maybe he'll use that time to write something.
Or not.

>> No.33490807

I won't bet on it. It would be nice if he did, but if he would rather enjoy his time doing other things first, I'd much rather he not bother even thinking about us for a while.

>> No.33491066 [DELETED] 

Alright, here comes the Eldar x IG /ss/.


Give me criticism and I will see what I can improve. I wanted to write this since forever but such stupid things as life and the internet kept getting in the way.

>> No.33491273

>120+ views in 10 min
We ARE legion.

>> No.33491300

Will read and review tonight but looking forward to these two

>> No.33491337


Did you paste it as a public paste?

>> No.33491354

holy walls of text batman

first things first, I'm not going to bother trying to read it in such an unfriendly format, space that shit out, linebreaks exist for a good reason, use them generously

>> No.33491391

Going to read it now.

>> No.33491394

...yes? is that a problem?

Er, well...
I'm used to writing university papers on word and am usually not allowed to use spacing too much. I'll see what I can do.

>> No.33491456


As long as you understand that 90%+ of those views are from bots, and not real people when you make a public post, none at all.

Unlisted posts are better if you want to know how many /wst/'ers you managed to hook.

>> No.33491542


Part of a story I'm working on. A superheroine named the Amazon has been captured by a group of villains intent on breaking her will. I'd like to hear some feedback.

Warning: Involves breathplay, belly punching, and a healthy dose of sadism.

>> No.33491754

Alright. Now unlisted and with spacing.
Hope that makes it easier.

>> No.33491925 [DELETED] 

Why are posts being deleted for merely mentioning it? I mean I know it's you because it's after the self-delete time limit.

It's okay if you changed your mind on policy, it happens. Nothing to be embarrassed about.

>> No.33491972 [DELETED] 


Because it's off-topic to the thread.

>> No.33492029 [DELETED] 

tg is always off topic. If they are going to delete every post that isn't on-topic with the thread, they might as well delete the entire board.

This is tg. Going off-topic is pratically our job.

>> No.33492040 [DELETED] 

/wst/ is no more your mandated personal garden to carefully trim and tend then any other place was. I mean, have at it I guess, but I have to say your motivations are suspect and your methods are bizarre.

>> No.33492153

Just a heads-up- you appear to have made it so the link expires in about a week. Was that intentional on your part?

>> No.33492161

Is there any interest in parasite/symbionts smut, or is that too close to botfly territory

>> No.33492188

At least one person here has done it before and got a good reception. Go on ahead.

>> No.33492194


I'm down with parasite and symbiote smut. Do you have any setting in particular in mind?

>> No.33492197

If you mean parasites as in mind control, yes.

>> No.33492211

Space. The outer kind. Probably in a ship. That flies through the space.

>> No.33492219


yeah, it's still a rough draft, don't want it there forever.

>> No.33492224


Seems legit, space-man.

>> No.33492240


As usual, it will depend on how deep/detailed you go. Even "heavy" fetishes garner support when written tastefully.

>> No.33492282

Maybe I should add tags here.
>Imperium of Man
>Straight Shota

>> No.33492293


First a few things. Is English your first language? I am assuming it isn't, because you mess the verbal conjugations quite a lot, using present form where it should be the past form, using him where it should be "it" or "them". Also, the way you build your sentences are... off. They don't come out natural. It just sounds weird. it might sound good in your language, but it doesn't in English.
These are things that usually happen when someone whose first language isn’t English tries to write in english for the first time. It is fine. The best way to fix that is by writing more and reading plenty of books in English.
Now for the actual writing, not your style.
You give too much info, too soon and too fast. For example, you didn't need to say the name of the dwarf right at the beginning. It didn't matter then and it didn’t matter until the end. You could have just mentioned that there was a dwarf, because the reader doesn’t give a shit about a character that doesn’t appear. If he is going to appear later, but just for a few seconds, then he doesn’t need a name. If he is going to be important to the story, then you say his name when he fist appears.
Same thing with Briar Rose. She is important, but she doesn’t appear, so you could just mention her name in passing, but you repeated it three times in the first two paragraphs.
You use too many periods, when you should youse commas a bit more, being careful not to use those too much too. You also don’t need to put “……….” Just “…” is enough. There are some instances where there are capital letters where there shouldn’t and spaces before commas and question marks, not after.

I think that is all. You said it was your first fic, so don’t freak out with all that I said. Everyone is bad when they first start.

If anyone could read and comment on it to see if they agree with me of if I said too much bullshit, then please do. It is good to help newcomers whenever we can.

>> No.33492360

I would recommend two pieces of reading (terrible for learning to write smut, but pretty useful in this situation):

1) The Organization Shadow (couldn't find a link, sorry)
>Organization Shadow is understood as facts which organizations or communities wish to deny about themselves, due to the threat posed to self-image and self-understanding and, more generally, the need to be viewed in a favourable light by others. The Shadow is repressed, and, as unconscious content, is projected onto others, often those who are incapable of resisting it. Three studies are used to highlight the potentially grave consequences, in practice, of the Organization Shadow. The need to assimilate the Organization Shadow is discussed, together with the essential difficulties of the assimilation process.

2) PDF related
>Communities play an under-appreciated role in organizational theory – critical not only to identity, knowledge transfer, sense-making, social support, innovation, problem-solving and collective action. All organizations live in the shadow of communities, and the reverse is also true to a greater or lesser extent.

>> No.33492363

>Choose your own adventure - Time Travel and Mind Control

For reasons unknown to you, Satan himself decided to visit you on your deathbed, giving you the option to live your life over again.

He will allow your soul to travel back in time, to possess the body of your 15 year old self. Whilst possessing yourself, you will retain all the knowledge and memories acrued during the rest of your life, up until your death in 2015 following a car crash (you were drunk driving)

In addition, Satan grants you powers of Mind Control. People will follow any command you give them. They may not want to follow your commands, but will feel as though they have to, and will end up forcing themselves to do so, whilst not understanding why.

In return, Satan promises that your soul will remain yours after your original death in 2015, and only asks that you perform certain "favours" for him in the meantime. He does not specify what the favours are.

>Ready to play?
I'm posting it on /b/ here:

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Oi, oi, whoever keeps erasing the posts: you are a massive cunt of epic proportions. Stop trying to play Dicktator with /tg/

To stay on-topic, would anyone be interested in a consentacles fic? Everyone knows that consentacles are best tentacles.

>> No.33492404

I requested a venom symbiot story a while ago, it's on the Master Smut list somewhere and it seemed pretty well receipted. I'd love to read a similar one, what did you have in mind?

>> No.33492595

" And here I am, cleaning the deck on this god-forsaken ship, while the crew drinks, eats and whores himself to an early grave"
did you mean "themselves"?

every now and then you're missing words to certain sentences: "suddenly changing as eyes became watery", or use odd phrasing "Their close contact had some erotica , but not in Enough amount to make Renz cringe."

otherwise it was quite nice, I actually felt sorry for Rens, and the cuddling was sweet.

next time give it an hour or two then come back and read over your work, other wise I liked it. sorry if I come off as sounding too harsh.

>> No.33492647

harpy butt <3

>> No.33492709

this , hioe he enjoys his vacation

>> No.33492717

/r/ing a harpy facesitting story

>> No.33492763

Space cadet unknowingly brings back some sort microscopic alien life form from a planets surface. Over time it grows and expands, its body becoming noticeable. It excretes substances in its host that compel them to hide the parasite and develop parental feelings for it. When it reaches maturity it breeds with its host, causing them to release the same microbes it grew from.

Gender of host is up in the air right now

>> No.33492836

all dat cloaca, gimme gimme gimme

>> No.33492916

For future reference, it's usually a good idea to do that part first. The...egglaying part came as a bit of a surprise, as did the pegging. On the bright side, they were both handled better than I expected them to be.

I noticed it broke off all of a sudden at the end. Are you still working on it or something?

>> No.33493000

>Space cadet unknowingly brings back some sort microscopic alien life form from a planets surface. Over time it grows and expands, its body becoming noticeable. It excretes substances in its host that compel them to hide the parasite and develop parental feelings for it. When it reaches maturity it breeds with its host, causing them to release the same microbes it grew from.
So, alien pregnancy vibes mixed with incest or is the parasite just a sort of a skin rash/growth thing? Could be nice either way, looking forward to it.

>Gender of host is up in the air right now
I oddly want the host to be a guy if you're going the alien pregnancy route, but if there's no alien pregnancy angle I'd prefer if the host was female and the alien was very feminine in appearance so it would end in alien lesbian sex.

>> No.33493021

Nah, I just felt that the important part was done and it was past midnight.
I slapped it up here at once.
Maybe I'll write up an ending tomorrow.

The scenes as written had been on my mind for half a month and needed to get out. Now they are out and I have little interest in wasting my entire night on an ending.

I hope my not being a native was not too apparent.

>> No.33493072

I wanted to write a consentacle superheroine with symbiote suit couple month of ago, but I ran away because everyone wanted evil tentacle and also school.

>> No.33493073

I was thinking a weird cyst/tumor like growth at first. I'm not sure if I want it to become mobile at maturity or not, still planning this out

>> No.33493105

I noticed that the Eldar herself still hasn't gotten fucked yet- she just fucked him. No point in letting him have all the fun, right? Just something to consider, that's all.

I couldn't tell that you weren't a native English speaker- and you're not even the only one here. Forget music, porn is the universal language.

>> No.33493160

The one we named Lacunae? I was hyped for that, regardless of alignment; consentacles are bestacles after all

>> No.33493166

>but I ran away because everyone wanted evil tentacle and also school.
I don't remember that at all, pitty you idea sounds hot

>I was thinking a weird cyst/tumor like growth at first.
Figured it'd be something like that, not sure why the pregnancy aspect struck a cord with me, usually hate Mpreg stuff

>I'm not sure if I want it to become mobile at maturity or not, still planning this out
Don't really see how the sex aspect would work other than tentacle stuff and even then it'd probably be too small for standard tentacle sex stuff, although stealth tentacle is nice

>> No.33493172

...But are their boobs?

Personally, I'd go with the option that provides the most boobs...

>> No.33493251

Well, she had herself proper knobbed with that toy so she got fucked just as well as he was. With the sam toy, even. Space-feeldo! And then she had him eat her out. I on't know. Maybe I'll write more one day.

And I thought math was the universal... ah well.

Actually I had written from the perspective of an Eldar warlock an encounter with an Earth-Caste Futau but found that the politics behind that were more interesting than the smut and found the perspective of a female Eldar psyker entirely too difficult, so I abandoned it entirely.

>> No.33493318
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>Forget music, porn is the universal language.
"Every since man first looked up at the stars, he wished to journey up to them so that he may fuck them."

>consentacles are bestacles after all

>> No.33493870
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I was/am actually working on giving a face to Maple. Didn't quite turn out the way I hoped.

Might make more 'till I get it right.

>> No.33494119

Valid points, all of them.
Probably gonna go with male spaceman then

>> No.33494157

Yay Feedback!. Thank you so much for reading this

>> No.33494785

Okay, there's 22 views now. I know somebody else read this.
Feed me back! Let me thrive on your criticism!

>> No.33494806


A lot of people open stories and leave them for a while to read later.

>> No.33494882


Well, more Drunken Peasants it is then.

>> No.33496001

Oh hey, should remember to check for this earlier nowadays.

However, I feel that is time for some education.
Education about... WORD CRIMES!

Halfling post later. Haven't really gotten anything new to show as I need to rewrite large parts of the Warlock and Demon story later.
And by later I mean Saturday most likely.

>> No.33496359
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good to see you man

>> No.33496782

Is it a word crime if I call my nigga illitrit?

>> No.33496830

Nothing got done this week. Gonna try to make up for that this weekend.

I had some ideas for a post-apocalyptic/sci-fi setting where an invading alien species failed at taking earth and left behind a few colonies without any supplies, and a few generations later humans are rebuilding and the alien population is gradually dwindling. I'm not sure what kind of story I want to tell with it, I just want the post-war tension, the human anxieties related to hating the aliens that tried to invade but now working with the aliens who got fucked over by their own people, and the aliens dealing with identity crises because they're the children of colonists and have never even seen their own homeworld and they're paying for their ancestors' mistakes.

Saving to read later because that actually sounds really interesting and educational.

>> No.33496974

Well with that spelling it would be a word crime that's for sure.

Err, go for it I guess. Not really sure if that'd be a fitting story for the smut thread since the basis works better as a normal sci-fi story than something more focused on love and sex.
Interesting premise if anything.

Speaking of non-smut stuff I had one idea of doing an action short story based around this track from ACAH: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SAVYv-96SrQ
Then I realized I'm terrible at writing action and even worse at something involving planes and dogfighting.
Still love to do it but I am kinda lacking in the evocative writing department at times.

>> No.33497043

Every setting can have smut in it. I've always been of the opinion that good smut needs a good story behind it too.

I was thinking of using it to do the prompt about a xeno trying to woo a human with bio-luminescence and other physical displays while the human doesn't know what's happening.

>> No.33497056

An elven maiden peeing is something I would

[ ] Like to read about
[ ] Not like to read about

Your vote matters.

>> No.33497076

That is very true yes but the way the premise was detailed I thought it leant itself to a more basic Sci-fi novel rather than something more lurid. But obviously it can work for the latter as well.

>> No.33497092

[X] Not like to read about.

>> No.33497107

I like to start with settings sometimes because I can go in any direction.

[X] Not like to read about

>> No.33497118

Oh, hey Mask. Let Monster know that one of his fics now has a fanfic. No, I dunno how that works either.

(see >>33474133)

No, no, you're supposed to use Strawpoll to do that. Here, like this:


>> No.33497121

>An elven maiden peeing is something I would
[ X] Like to read about

>A dragoness peeing is something I would
[ X] REALLY like to read about

>> No.33497161

[x] Not like to read about
Sorry nope.

I tend to be the opposite and go with the scenario or idea first and then it sorta automagically turns itself into a sort of setting based on all the stuff I stuff into it.

>> No.33497253

Message passed along. Monster apparently thought it was thursday.

I've done that before too but I don't prefer it. I feel like I neglect the setting too much if I don't get it out of the way first.

>> No.33497285


I don't know man, the pee of an elven maiden is a dainty sort of thing, surely much more appealing than the steaming torrent of pressurised, hot urine that would issue forth from something as large as a dragon.

>> No.33497349

That's pretty well drawn, though based on the greentexts I'd imagine Maple looking a lot more crazy-lewd. Maybe we should summon Lewdanon to draw her.

>> No.33497364

True, but that bit last week about dragoness peeing and desperation still has my attention, especially the part where a hapless adventurer picks the wrong hiding spot and gets a very up close view.

An elf is fine too though, but that dragoness idea hits a lot more of my fetishes

>> No.33497368

Is there a flockdraw today? I need some happy stuff.

>> No.33497418

I tend to be bad at building settings to such a degree I never really care that much about it but at the same enjoy the slight mystery that building a setting piece by piece gives me. Also helps that I'm really vague about details most of the time anyway.

As an example one could say I've written up a yet unnamed fantasy setting wherein a boy has a sexual encounter with an elf in a forest that he previously took care off, wherein a dragoness in human form suddenly knocks on the door of a bard to his shock and suprise and later rescues him from a drider. It's also a setting where two siblings of a long lived race have a heated argument about loving mortals and where a husband goes to the market with his half-dragon daughter.
These are all stories I've written and someday maybe all these places and things will have names to them and a history attached to it.
Or maybe not. Who knows really.

>> No.33497481


Yes, anon. Come in.

>> No.33497495

Monster does a lot of that, writing and then later tying everything together into a bigger, grander setting as you go.

I'm guessing you don't usually get stuck doing the game mastering? Or do you stick to wargaming?

>> No.33497504


Where is it? I lost the link somehow.

>> No.33497533



Bookmark it in triplicate. Write it on a post-it note if you have to.

>> No.33497539

I haven't written a single thing.... again. I've been hanging out with /vg/ in the Destiny beta for the past two days. What have I done with my life

>> No.33497576

Hung out in the Destiny beta general thread, from the sounds it.

>> No.33497611

Played Destiny from like 2PM to 12AM yesterday, like six hours of that was with guys from the general. We all made waifus and played soccer. It was glorious, but nothing I can really add to my writing.

>> No.33497677

My attempts at Game Mastering have been massive disasters if I should be really honest. I really lack the quick thinking required for it and I'm always far too responsive rather than proactive.
I've almost been wanting to GM, otherwise I'll never play Dark Heresy again, but I simply do not have the head for it.

The same goes with wargaming, I've played 7 or 8 matches of 40k and only won one of those because I neither have the head for rules or the thinking to do huge sweeping tactics that aren't "Okay let's hold the line here and then advance slowly forward" which work really well in RTS and such but not that well in tabletop wargames.

Other than ideas for sci-fi stories maybe?
Perhaps something about... Moon Wizards?!

>> No.33497680

I wanna write about rape. Who wants rapey things? Not the "teehee I enjoy it" kind. The one that leaves the victim in a psych ward after too many suicide attempts.

>> No.33497683

>I haven't written a single thing.... again.

Various bits of IRL drama have kept me from getting much done this week as well, but I'm hoping to get the back of B&P4's second part broken tonight.

>> No.33497719


Yes please. If you like the hard stuff, how about guro?

>> No.33497740

Probably not guro. I like my suffering psychological with a nice dose of implied violence.

>> No.33497752


Real rape is a touchy subject, but that shouldn't stop you. It's not my kink, but there's an audience for anything here on /tg/.

>> No.33497789


Could you be convinced to do F/F rape?

>> No.33497795

Yes, but only if you're trying to handle emotions realistically.

What do you have in mind for a story?

>> No.33497843

I'm always late to these things. At least I missed the new thread craziness and meta.

>> No.33497904

Honestly, I haven't settled on anything. On one hand, I have that thing where a young planeswalker ignites her spark for the first time and appears in Ravnica in a one of the savage clans of the Gruuls (not the nice ones with the Burning-Tree Emissary), on the other, I know next to nothing about MtG fluff. And I generally prefer writing science-fiction about people who are already fucked in the head. This is a dilemna.

>> No.33497918

Ah yes, I did promise halflings didn't I?
Well then, prepare (your dicks) for a whole bunch of links then.


>> No.33497943

>implying we haven't seen them all already

>> No.33497974

In that case, go sci-fi. There are a number of tabletop systems in space with a variety of cultures/settings you could work with. Do what works well for you and feels right.

>> No.33497993

>makes a meta post about thank god I missed the beta

>> No.33498004

Maybe some of you have, maybe some of you haven't. I prefer to believe that some haven't and will enjoy them immensely.

>> No.33498020

Or I could go for Planeswalkery stuff while stripping the Ravnica part and create a new plane or whatever I feel like it.

I know I did.

>> No.33498043
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>based on a representative sample 75% of /tg/ is not into urolagnia

Well, shit.

>> No.33498106

I could have told you that.

Actually, that number is low.

>> No.33498121

Dustyloads, if you're out there, know that we care. Do what you must to get well, I'll be praying for you.

>> No.33498125

I still have a story in my backlog about a bara love between a big muscly fighter and a hafling/small person travelling companion. I should really write this. I want to write this but I just can't into writing lately ;_;

>> No.33498135

Glad to see my stories inspired you to write this. It's kinda nice to see Renz have a happy ending once in a while Not really, I like his pain too much. I like your ideas, but as the previous reviewer said you may be able to execute them better. Read more and look to what other writers do to help your own writing. I'd like to see more of this sort of thing from you.

Granted, the characters names were depicted due to this being a fan-work of one of my stories. Thus, it was sort of a nod to the previous works, though I agree he could have done more with the characters, though I can't blame him since he doesn't even know the characters as well as I do (yes, even Dredge the dwarf has an elaborate story and maybe I'll write it one day). That said, I feel like what you said was mostly correct and I would actually like to add one more thing.

There is too much explanation through dialogue. Now granted, I don't like dialogue that much, mainly because I'm not too good at it and I prefer to showcase what's going on with short bursts of dialogue as well as what the character is thinking and why they would have said the things they said.

>> No.33498341


>> No.33498426

Write it for the remaining 25%, we will read it

>> No.33498456


>> No.33498495

Also true. Despite so few people liking such stories, I still got a fair number of hits on Special Ingredient.

A lot of people in /wst/ are up for whatever.

>> No.33498543


A relevant question is whether pee as one scene in a larger narrative will put people off altogether.

>> No.33498564

That is a good question. Only reference I have is for my changeling story so far. As far as I can tell, a few people weren't a fan of the egg-laying scene. It didn't seem to stop them from tuning in for the third part of it.

I can't say for sure though.

>> No.33498698

If I find something I don't like I just skim over it, Now if it's tagged in such a way that the thing I don't like looks to be a central part of the story I'll avoid it, but if it is just one part of a larger story I don't have a problem with it I may even check it out despite my misgivings

>> No.33498780

While I didn't find the egg laying appealing, it wasn't off putting enough that it ruined the fic. I think that's because you dwelled less on the physical actions and more on why it was pleasurable.

>> No.33498919

>you dwelled less on the physical actions and more on why it was pleasurable.
This, I'm >>33498698, I may not like the actual action, but as long as the emphasis is on why it feels good I am fine with any fetish.

Describe the action but go into much more detail on the pleasure it brings

>> No.33499229

This is a good point. Especially with sensations you've never actually felt (I believe most of us can say we have never laid an actual egg), it seems important to focus on the pleasure gained from it. Pleasure should be 'more' universal. Even if I can't understand why someone gains pleasure from an act, I can enjoy that they are gaining pleasure from the act.

>> No.33499307

An elven maiden peeing? Go ahead!

>> No.33499467

Is mask or Monster here today? I saw them earlier in the thread, but dunno if they left.

>> No.33499847

I'm still lurking. Remind me to make sure everything's on 1d4chan.

>> No.33499938


Cool. I dunno which one you are, but. I got some stuff for mask:


Yeah that link is fugly.

>> No.33500925

Thats something I dont see enough of

>> No.33501011

Archive anon. And yeah, it's one of the ugliest links ive seen. The masks look neat though.

>> No.33501017

To be honest, and it might be misandristic as fuck of me, but F/F rape is just "eeeeeeh" for me. Counts for shemales/futanaris too. I'm not very good at dealing with those.

>> No.33501087

That's an odd condition.

>> No.33501214

Depite my love for X-consensual thing, I'm very vanilla!

>> No.33501522

It turns out it is hard to finish stories when you have company around. That said, I still did an elf lactation story (though I think that anon has had his request filled a few times at this point).

That Heroic Cow
Tags: Lactation, Milking, Elf X Human woman

Also a factor of humiliation and maybe... voyeurism? It is hard to figure out what is best to tag.

Here is my updated log.

All criticisms, questions, and congratulations are welcome.

>> No.33501697

The writefaggotry: http://pastebin.com/DRZTs3sx

>> No.33502415

I need to lay off drawing broken up wrecks and ships.

Anyone has a request with boobs or butts in it ?

>> No.33502467
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humiliation as a tag would work I think

>“Your body has to feed that piggy little human you made.”
jesus christ i know that feel, my ma's racist as fuck

This was delightfully fucked up, this event will be included in that kingdom's history texts and that fact alone makes me smile

fuck, but this was hilarious and arousing
those fucking spectating old men

>> No.33502484

Uhhh, those sound kinda cool.
Could I /r/ some fanart of Jade, from the fic A New Queen?
>top half a busty brunette, bottom half a scorpion (though no foreclaws). It looks like her scorpion half is biting into her human half; as she was a human that was merged with the formerly independent scorpion-creature, and the fusion involved the critter swallowing her legs and bonding it's mouth around her waist

>> No.33502502

I want to come back as soon as I finish school for the summer. But I had time to think things over about the dynamic between my main characters. And /tg/ was kind of right, the suit needs to have an alien mind. It shouldn't be overtly evil, but play around the owner in an affectionate way. Have it do body modification, and the wearer agrees because she's prone to making bad decisions.

Does anyone have any suggestions for body modifications? I can only think of scan few, and most of those are cliche (increase sensitivity, or increase body part size) or extreme ( convert abdominal organs into a sex organ so she take in more ). I am looking for something playful and more in middle of the road body mods.

>> No.33502632

Changing eye color during a conversation with a a close friend.
Spontaneous tattoo/alien physiology on parts of the body. Thinking like green skin or little cilia.
Bifurcated tongue.

>> No.33502686

There's always the cosmetic (changing skin/hair color, interesting "tattoos", depending on how fast the change is she could look like a different woman everyday or even something completely exotic, like bioluminescent "tattoos" ) or subtle (making body parts better, i.e. making her stronger, faster, more resilient, better hearing/vision, ect.)

>> No.33502722

>inb4 Mask or monster tells me I can't do scorpion anatomy right.


>> No.33502755

Its a space alien scorpion so its ok

>> No.33503026

Nice. Do you know which museum that is?

>> No.33503724
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Chapter 2 of Battlefield

Two years later Sword-Brother Gravick of the Black Templars and Sister-Hospitaller Gloriana of the Sororitas meet again and renewtheir relationship.

Tags: Astartes, Sororitas, Fellatio, Anal, Forbidden

>> No.33503841

>sorin x jace rapesmut
>dumping here because where else am i going to dump it?

>> No.33503920

damn, this is pretty good, its like a black library short story, but with anal sex innit

small typo line 158
“I will hut you-”

>> No.33504133


>like a black library anything

I know you mean well, but that's just mean.

>> No.33504135

Line 11 'same his neophyte' should be 'save'
Line 21 doesn't have ending quotation marks

>> No.33504179

Is this Lt. Kitsurubami's face from FLCL after Haruko pulls the guitar out of Naota's head?

>> No.33504233


Was a good story, nice to see Jace getting it ;)

>> No.33504245

I've heard many a story, I'm glad you caught on to unfortunate parental racism.

Thank you for your comments.

>> No.33504827
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Huh, so it is. I've been wanting to save this as a reaction image for some time anyway.

>> No.33504841

Well that's it. They literally have snouts.

>> No.33505136 [SPOILER] 
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Haven't drawn smut in a while

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>> No.33505430

>Shirou's biological sister!


>> No.33505470

>Dem sphericals
You do good work O mysterious drawfag named Keys

>> No.33505505

"But- but where do I put it?"

>> No.33505545

I need a name for the Alien homeworld, I can't just keep calling it "Alien Homeworld." Someone give me a suggestion that doesn't sound too Star Trekky.

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>> No.33505597


>> No.33505613

Better than anything I had, it will be so

>> No.33505639


>> No.33505658

Sometimes I just translate a word into a language and mix it up enough.

The elf's name in the lactation story I posted today is word 'expression' in Gaelic, which is the word used to mean women self-milking themselves I guess.

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I saw what you did here

>> No.33505933

Yep, rather enjoy that movie. I also enjoy Stith too.

>> No.33506053

>tfw director's cut was destroyed and we'll never see it

>> No.33506263
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Death by SNU-SNU!

>> No.33506290

I wanted consentacle fun happy times too :(

but everyone had to ruin it with grimderp evul tentacles

>> No.33506597

That face turned me on more than the kissing itself.

>> No.33506761

Someone should make a new thread, we're on page 10

>> No.33506790

Doing it now.

>> No.33506836


>> No.33506844

that....that hurts me physically

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