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>>12875030
Believe it or not, I am still writing. I doubt I will ever finish.

>>12875094
All I'm saying is that if you're going to write xenophilic porn about a man being half-raped by a chitinous alien creature you should do it properly. This is a hackneyed mess riddled with spelling errors that sways between technical language and juvenile pornographic references at a whim. Shame on you.

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>>12780336
Do you mean abdomen?

Because there's no abdomen in that pic.

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>>12424921
Really, now?

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>>12153135
It doesn't make you write any faster, believe me.

Neither does cheap hard liquor but fuck you I had a long day and even Captcha is giving me bullshit

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>>11985861
Okay, I'm not.

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>>11811273
Where the hell do you think the idea came from? You remember that drawthread, don't you? How quickly it turned into half "draw me this" and half "WHERE UMBER HULK PORN?"

And before anyone asks no my BIG story is not done yet. I only just got on my ADHD meds today. It's why I was able to concentrate long enough to write the second half of this story in about 20 minutes, a much better time than the first half (about a week and a half).

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>>11225384
We all have, though.

Just because there exists something shittier doesn't mean that the style of this isn't cluttered and stilted. OP can't seem to decide between third-person limited and third-person omniscient, and there's a bunch of scientific terms that accurately describe the situation but would not come to the mind of a half-orc slutbarian and have very little emotional resonance.

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>>11201140
So... before the story started, then? And then all throughout? What precisely was so great about the first third that captured your attention before you got to polymorph scrolls and said WAIT A MINUTE, I FIND THIS PREMISE RIDICULOUS, I SHALL SAY GOOD DAY TO YOU SIR!

>>11201142
Knowing my productivity? Probably January.

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>>11058034
A bro would have delivered by now.

As it is, I'm down from 16000 words (first draft) to 12000 (latest) on part one (of three or four, haven't decided yet), but I'm still only about a quarter of the way through the story on this latest round of editing.

Fucking ADHD/low self-esteem getting in the way of my disgusting perversion. Pisses me off...

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>>10814861
Queblock, you are rapidly becoming my favorite drawfag ever. I see you drew the eyes correctly this time. The antennae should probably be a little closer together and a bit further down, but otherwise jesus fuck this is awesome.

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>>10490855
I know! It's driving me nuts, going through my head, but I refuse to write utter shit. It's gotta have some redeeming qualities. That first one the other guy wrote is, in all honesty, not that good. Predictable and stylistically awkward, revered only for its actual content. If it was about two humans nobody would give a shit. (Good critical tool: Play some cheesy porno music in the background and read your story in a porn actor voice. If it sounds like it fits perfectly, you need to do some major revisions.)

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>>9967111
*chitinfag.

Alternatively, exofag.

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>>9949211
Kreen express their emotions via body language, pheromones, and antenna positioning. I'm surprised he/she went for anatomical correctness rather than cartoon eyes.

I'm also amazed he/she didn't put tits on that one.

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>>9911662
>disgusting thri-kreen fapfic
>disgusting

Sir, I must protest.

That hat is far too silly for any self-respecting writefag to wear.

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>>9786634
Thanks, I'll be here all week.

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I write.

And talk to my therapist.

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>>9622728
Why are you called poison dusk? Don't you find a warm hole to crawl into when the sun sets?

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>>9599959
I'm getting paid by the hour.

Paid absolutely nothing, sure, but I'm gonna milk it.

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>>9523198
What I'm getting at, dear, is that you're not fooling anyone and that you know damn well what you taste like.

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>>9336598
Actually severe depression has put a serious hamper on the things I want to do to you.

I haven't written in days.

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>>9303682
>thri-kreen lesbian mudfights

Go on...

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>>9126632
Other things, too, depending on what race you are.

But we've discussed that enough.

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>>9093397
>Dranon's Delight
>child rape guro
>harlequin romance

...

Backing away slowly now.

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>>9056743
Shit, that joke would have worked better if I hadn't self-identified as a human being there.

Fuck it.



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