/sci/ - Science & Math

>>12310938
consider that the place isn't in the US or any other english speaking country
>no hereby
What do you suggest i use instead?
>applying for admission to the
oh shit right
>The word "program" goes here
so internationa master's program? done
>Remove the "I will explain why"
done
>Remove the "the"
right, done
>in
done ("to" is just wonrg there, though? I thought it was ok)
>"Will" before describe.
Done, should i add "i will" or just "will"?
>"The" experiences.
done
>Confronting them is a shit word for this. Use comparing.
yes, I went for confronting in order not to repeat myself with "coomparison" later. but since i deleted that aprt it's ok now
>Remove "as a (x nationality) comparison.
done
>I graduated in (x) at the University of (x) on the 12th of October 2020, with the final mark of (x).
i think you forgot the correction, what's wrong with this sentence?
>Remove exactly.
done
>Covered.
done
>"The first year focused on."
done, sounds better
>Remove the more.
ye
>Contemplated.
haha ok
>A great extent.
right, done
>He didn't make you assist him, he allowed you to assist him.
right, changed to "who allowed me to assist him "
>Super gay comment in the parenthesis.
I'd say, "a weird flex" haha
>>Some of the laboratory and sampling techniques I worked with are (x).
what's wrong here?
>"said" professor implies it's the samw profssor from earlier.
yes he is, what's wrong?
>named "(x)".
sorry, it's "(name of the thesis)", does it seems like it's the name of the professor because of the "said professor" thing?

thank you a bunch anon, really helping me a lot ily.
Since i doubt i'll get doxed anyway i'll post even the parts I excluded since you are so kind, just in case.