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>>12310892
>I am hereby
Using hereby is super gay.
>applying for the admission to the
Applying for admission to the
>international master’s degree
The word "program" goes here.
>in (x), (x) specialisation, offered by the University of (x). I will explain why
Remove the "I will explain why"
>I believe my academic background is suitable for the
Remove the "the".
>participation to
Participation "in".
>the course and describe
"Will" before describe.
>the ETCS and experiences
"The" experiences.
>I have obtained during my BSc, confronting
Confronting them is a shit word for this. Use comparing.
>them with the University of (x)'s BSc in (x) as a (x nationality) comparison.
Remove "as a (x nationality) comparison.
I graduated in (x) at the University of (x) on the 12th of October 2020, with the final mark of (x).
>My full-time course had a total of 180 ECTS spread over three years, exactly
Remove exactly.
>like (x)’s, and it went over
Covered.
>roughly the same subjects, with very few exceptions.
>In the first year the focus was on [...]
"The first year focused on."
>The second year was more centred on [...]
Remove the more.
>The third year included [...]
Contemplated.
>The English exam, the internship, the research project and the thesis dissertation amount to 24 ECTS in total.
>Most courses included laboratory activities, but great extent
A great extent.
>of my laboratory experience was provided to me by the tenured professor in (x), who made me
He didn't make you assist him, he allowed you to assist him.
>assist him and work on different research projects in the course of the last two years (well over the length of a standard internship, which lasts for a few months on average).
Super gay comment in the parenthesis.
>Some of the laboratory and sampling techniques I worked with are (x).
>My thesis was a personal research project accepted by said professor,
"said" professor implies it's the samw profssor from earlier.
>named "(x)".