/sci/ - Science & Math

Guys, anyone, need help asap. Is this e-mail asking a prof if i can do my research project (thesis basically) formal enough and not rude or pedant?

Good Morning Professor Anon,
I am a first-year biology master's student here at 4Chan University, I am writing you to ask if it would be possible for me to join your research about synthesising anime catgirls for my research project.
I am not sure about what I should add to this e-mail, I asked my tutor but she has not answered yet. I am willing to meet (physically or digitally) to discuss details.
I will keep this e-mail short for now, and just let you know that I am very much interested in your research.
Being hopeful that I will hear back from you, I thank you for your time.
Best regards,

Anon.

Is this good enough? please help a bro out