/sci/ - Science & Math

>>11599657
Topology or group theory. Sound good?

>>11572836
Put like this, it sounds like an adaptation of a Hermann Hesse story.
>>11572890
Put like this, it sounds like something I could actually find myself reading. Are you still in planning phase or have you already produced something?
>>11572919
>What do you think makes a good dialogue
I'd say a big part of it is consistency with both the characters and the story. When it has been established what a character is like, then their words should be compatible with that. If they are not, then this deviation must be either established by what has happened before, or acknowledged by other characters and linked to upcoming events. Another component that would improve to the dialogue is to include some everyday life stuff in it. You want your characters to feel like they are alive, not like that they exist solely to further your story.

>>11573049
The best name for those is municipality.

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