/sci/ - Science & Math

>>11777508
I don't think that is too verbose, far from it. You are explaining what you do and why, but not writing a page for every single thing you do. I think that looks very good. You should also notice that you are comparing yourself, a soon to be bachelor, to profs with years of experience. I'll actually copy-paste a bit of what my supervisor told me, a bit of censorship to avoid getting doxxed. We were discussing the lengths of proofs, so he told me this:
>The short version: My first substantial theorem achieved independently took 10 pages in print. If you look at my thesis, it's the - theorem. It also took about 2-3 weeks of hard work.
>Some time later I gave a talk about it, with B in the audience. B liked the theorem. That's good news.
>Two months later he met me and F in a conference. He handed F two sides of A5 hand written with a proof of my theorem by a different method.
So don't worry. If your supervisor thinks you should shave a bit off from here and there, then do that, but I think that looks fine.

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