/lit/ - Literature

>>21863197
No one listens to classical musical anymore<div class="xa23b"><span class="xa23t"></span><span class="xa23i"></span></div>

The Baddest Book in History by Joey Vimsante
A dystopian satire, looking at a world impacted by a great prodigy Sheprofsiah. She was a genius who altered a planet with incredible inventions, theories, and ideas. She transforms the world forward with thousands of years worth of development in just 8 decades.

https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B07HG54R3R

>>7877028
Hmm... Try writing short then, one sentence at a time.

>>7875212
Apparently you're a reader but too stupid to know what day it is.

>>1722848
it shows me a blank document, sorry

>>1722843
The ambiguity of the weeping is a nice touch. The only part that I would consider changing is how clean the urinal is. I don't see how it fits in, and it seems like it should because it's somewhat unrealistic.

>>1722835
That sounds great.

By all means, post what you please, but I will treat whatever is given me with the same effort and respect that I can see went into it.

>>1722817
While all styles are appreciated, I am more interested in work that has had a substantial amount of effort put into it. While I am not saying that all "flash fiction" is bullshit, most certainly is. Especially when I need to feed you ideas, especially when you are writing it specifically for this thread. If you have anything that you've been working on for a while, it would be much appreciated.

>>1722804
No, I have not read any. There was a link to a story posted last night, and I am trying to regain the link. all styles are appreciated.

>>1722797
Please do not post in the thread unless you want to share stories/poems. This is not a discussion thread, unless we are discussing a piece someone has shared. Also, please, only constructive critiques.

>>1722777
Do you have something to share?

Also to the person who sent me the link for the shakespeare fanfiction if you see this could you resend it? I lost it, sorry!

I posted this thread last night but thought I may as well do it again. Any aspiring writers out there that want to share their work? Short stories, poetry, whatever. If it's too big for posting here we could exchange documents over internet. If you want to read my work please leave your email. Thanks!

>>1720786
Thanks, I will certainly read it tomorrow. I started, but I think I am too tired to read it all now. If anyone wants to read my stuff I can email you a word document. Goodnight everyone, and thanks to all who shared.

>>1720770
It sounds very cool! I am so intimidated by the thought of writing historical fiction. Also I haven't really read any Shakespeare, will I still "get it"?

>>1720750
American Pie duh! Not the scene, but the theme.

Whatever the first words are is the intro. It's going to have have an intro.

>>1720690
It's a little bit confusing, especially the last two sentences.

>>1720746
yeah, I know, it kind of goes in circles. Maybe you should write jokes, or short short stories in this style instead of long stories? I think the going back on each aspect/ sentence thing might not work in a longer piece, y'know? Then again, it would be a very funny book if you could pull it off without it becoming tiresome.

>>1720738
your explanation is dectracting imo because the story can mean different things to different people. While I had a similar view of the underlying theme it certainly wasn't a perfect copy.

>>1720732
This is very good. The only thing I would recommend is changing/cutting the wordy intro.
The symbolism of the cherry pie is especially deft.

>>1720719
HAHAHA this is like a joke and that's a compliment! Do you know Jack Handey's stuff? similar style of humor. Very witty, and lots of excellent word play!

>>1720702
Oh gosh I'm so sorry dear! I read the first line and got to the "slightly happy" line and then skipped and read the Booth Tarkington thing and I thought you were being sarcastic. I was thinking more along the lines of trading word documents because my stuff at least is a little bit lengthy (3-5 pages) to put in a post. Thanks for sharing, though! I just feel weird giving you my edits publicly like this.

>>1720704
It's fine if you don't want to share but there is no need to be rude.