/lit/ - Literature

also holy shit half the people here have fukkin turrable tastes

or should i say criteria they judge writing on, it's like shit strip out all of what makes books work as books

take this faggot here >>2904086 shitting on what's probably one of the best things posted in this thread but ~ooOOOoo~ good lord you mention that workmen love butts! instantly hard-ons baby, let's get jackhammas on that pussy STAT!

fuck outta here nerd birds, u ppl need to evaluate your aesthetic

>>2904075

now if i had not been a tripfag would you have actually said that?

or evaluated it as a normal human being?

ball game

>>2904053

smh @ filtering tripfags

sad you missed out on my immaculate excerpt? you gelatinous your pathetic anonymous genes can't hold up to those of the tripfag master race?

i wish i didn't have to troll /lit/ for insight but fuck it truth rides alone and without composure

>>2904034

what matters is the 6 objects mentioned

what are the 6 objects mentioned? walls, floor, bedspread are white
nigger and his teeth are black
who else is involved/mentioned? the man observing them
apply hemmingway: the final "black" object is whoever is observing the dead nigger

it's disjointed but it's far from clunky
also have porn b/c fuck worksafe

reposting b/c mine sucked ass in the middle

beyond darkness lies the slit nameless pests chirp through, a megaphone delivering their sounds into what room wants to hold them. not to say that every room does. take it as a product of unwieldy design, but each place in this shack catches separate frequencies. for instance, that bedroom on the far side, all away and sequestered and attracted to noises similar. magnetic magic, how ruffled owls hoot along attuned to the drawn corners and even longer faces in the blank black space, how mortared mirrors imprinting outer emptiness acquire its aurals. i can't believe it's even possible for some to sleep there, but what few repeat travelers grace my hall sometimes stop by, maybe as we're walking past a new lodging or extra refurbishment, and place solemn eyes on the doorway. on the place they found the night in at the night inn.

>>2903974

so a black man finds a black man dead?

if that's the twist that's nice tbh good shit hurr

beyond darkness lies the slit nameless pests chirp through, a megaphone delivering their sounds into what room wants to hold them. not to say that every room does. take it as a product of unwieldy design, but each place in this shack catches separate frequencies. for instance, that bedroom on the far side, all away and sequestered and attracted to noises similar. magnetic magic, how ruffled owls hoot along attuned to the drawn corners and even longer faces in the blank black space, how mirrors tuned to outside black acquire its aurals. i can't believe it's even possible for some to sleep there, but what few repeat travelers grace these halls sometimes stop by, maybe as we're walking past a new lodging or extra refurbishment, and place solemn eyes on the doorway. on the place they found the night in at the night inn.

>>2903268

this is wrong and you should know why

if there was one thing d&e contributed to /lit/ it was rebuttals to stupid subjective faggot claims

anne hathaway reminds me of an alternate universe stoya if she turned out more respectable

not on the porn tip but on the not using tumblr and getting into ~experimental artistry~ garbage

gay

this thread

i ball hard

ice, nigga sou wouuu

died @ convoluted esoteric bullshit

potential for GOAT /lit/ thread, monitoring closely

that pasta is p. funny

if that's actually him it's the first good writing piece i've seen from him in a while

>>2899892

on some light work

also i bit that from charlie clips but it's not exactly hard to put together

like a meeting of one and one

ICE!

nope b/c it's not exactly something i'm fit to write yet and i'm not going to let one of you faggots jack it like a cold night's proper attire

i don't understand not using adjectives

this fascination w/ verbs, with action, with flurries of activity seems to feed into the modern trend of constant doing. i've had someone criticize my work once b/c there was a constant use of qualifiers once throughout a sentence. like god damn nigga, do you really want to be doing something all the time? or to vicariously live through doing something? can your mind only grasp blurs and motion?

i guess it's the post-modern bullshit of people who want to write for writing's sake, who like to spin stories that go off into nowhere like they do. who don't at least shoot for something. not a message, not a feeling, nothin' - just stuff arranged in a pattern. sorry, -arranging-.

reported, saged, fuck off for bumping this.

christ, when a troll tripfag is the best poster on the board...

that sounds kinda dumb and gaie tbh

no surprise russians were fuckbois that fucked bois smh @ bourgeoisie decadence once again influencing novelists to talk bout faggot stuff

am reading this right now for college reqs and doesn't seem as insightful as some say it is

i mean it's interesting as an examination of the effects of the holocaust on people but the fact that suffering defines some people's lives doesn't exactly seem revolutionary

GIVIN' 40 OUT THE LONG FACE
GET /MU/ THE FUCK OUTTA HERE!

>>2887436

no one has heard of head ice besides a small subset of individuals unique to an ever-shrinking music genre. ice is possibly the most intricate rapper alive and undoubtedly the best at using metonymy to convey images of a culture in a competitive environment (the arena of battle rap)

undoubtedly there are rappers who are not recognized fuckboi, it is these who i am referring to when i lament the condition of a culture that permits ironic trash to pump out shitty "suburban trap music" then snark at people like shotgun suge or tsu surf...who actually do put out good trap music. these same people love this spoken word shit. it's simple, it's easy to grok, it doesn't try and substitute the lack of rhythm with another prevalent literary technique. it's a way for people to extrinsically bloat their intrinsic sense of intellectual superiority instead of synthesizing what they don't at first comprehend to expand the breadth and depth of their knowledge base.

ice provides the latter, and most love the former. that's an unfortunate occurrence, worthy of reporting the OP for off-topic bullshit.

how about we don't do this

and /lit/ reports the thread, and you go to /mu/ where you belong

i sorta got mad @ spoken word poetry b/c the fact these people get more acclaim and attention than rappers who pour their life and soul into the rhythm is kind of annoying

it's not difficult to do spoken word poetry
it is difficult to rap well

tl;dr: fuck outta here nerd bird
one word to describe my knife game...YOSHIMITSU

this isn't a novel about American Indians exactly, but the first hundred or so pages of James Michener's "Chesapeake" concern Indian/European interactions and it starts off with a interesting look at Indian tribe interactions as shown through an Indian character's view

he is a filthy cis white boi though so i guess if you're closed-minded and don't acknowledge his meticulous research you won't ~investigate that route~ fucking faggot

why do you not watch battle rap?

why do you not have head ice on your list of favorite poets?

why do you make threads on /lit/ showcasing your drunkness and posting off-topic material concealed by an on-topic veneer?

no, seriously, why not be a fan of ice? he bodies all the ones you mentioned

also fuck off and get reported for starting these asinine "discussion" threads that go nowhere

i don't get reading about awkward people and shit

i mean it's alright but it's just kind of boring really and that's all tao's got going for him in his books, those sorts of interactions

character interactions are kind of gay anyway