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22646845 No.22646845 [Reply] [Original]

>retards are missing out on one of the greatest fantasies ever written because its “chinkslop”
This was literally written for 4channel audience, just give it a try man

>> No.22646849

>>22646845
>unfinished

>> No.22646854

>>22646845
>because its “chinkslop”
As expected. The angloid race has been malding pretty hard recently because they just realized that they can't outcompete the chinese.
Anyways, thanks for the recommendations, OP. Why do you think anons would like this novel?

>> No.22646856

>>22646845
I can’t find the full epub anywhere to load on my ereader, if you can help the brotha out i’ll start reading tonight

>> No.22646865

>>22646854
>Why do you think anons would like this novel?
Its very Nietszcheian, free of western moralfaggotry and christcuckery.
>>22646856
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/mxjcqepdxl580/RI_all_vols
Here you go man

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>>22646845
RI is supposed to be the best of the genre but it also sucks ass like the rest of the genre. Here's the thing, I read this slop, I used to be really into it as a kid because slapping 1000000 young masters is great when you're 12. But 'greatest fantasy' is insane. Nigga even Brandon Sanderson makes better works. It's a powerwank wish fulfillment and for that reason alone it's slop.

>> No.22646946

>>22646854
Fuck off shill

>> No.22646971

>>22646880
filtered

>> No.22646975

>>22646880
>nooooo your character cant strive towards greatness and power, he has to be a weak cuck who only wins through power of friendship and love just like ones in my western fantasies

>> No.22646977

Here's the opening text. You be the judge

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Chapter 1: The heart of a demon never has regret even in death


“Fang Yuan, quietly hand over the Spring Autumn Cicada and I’ll give you a quick death!”

“Old bastard Fang, stop attempting to resist anymore, today all of the major factions of justice have combined together just to destroy your devil lair. This place is already covered in inescapable nets, this time you will definitely be decapitated!”

“Fang Yuan you damn demon, just because you wanted to cultivate the Spring Autumn Cicada, you’ve gone and killed thousands of people. You’ve committed too many unforgivable, heinous sins!“

“Demon, 300 years ago you insulted me, took away my body’s purity, killed my entire family and executed my nine generations. From that moment onwards, I hated you with a burning passion! Today, I want you to die!”

......

Fang Yuan was in deep green robes that had been torn to shreds. His hair was disheveled and his entire body was covered in blood. He looked around.

The bloody robes waved lightly in the mountain breeze like a war flag.

Fresh blood flowed from the numerous wounds on the body. Just by standing there for a short while, Fang Yuan had already accumulated a large pool of blood beneath his feet.

Enemies surrounded him all around; there was already no way out.

It was a forgone conclusion that he would die here.

Fang Yuan understood his situation clearly, but even in the face of death his expression did not change, it was calm.

His gaze was quiet, his eyes like deep pools of water in a well, so deep that there seemed to be no end.

The major factions of justice that had surrounded him were not just the experienced elders, but also young and talented heroes. Around the heavily surrounded Fang Yuan, some were roaring, some were sneering; there were eyes that were gleaming with light, some holding onto their wounds while looking on fearfully.

They did not move; everyone was wary of Fang Yuan’s final attack.

For 6 hours this tense moment went on until the evening came, the sun casting its rays upon the side of the mountain. In that moment, it was as if the place was on fire.

Fang Yuan, who had been silent as a sculpture the entire time, slowly turned his body.

The group of warriors was suddenly alerted and they all took a big step backwards.

By now the gray mountain rock beneath Fang Yuan’s feet had long been stained a deep red. Due to losing too much blood, his face had become deathly pale; in the afterglow of the sunset, it suddenly had a brilliant luster upon it.

Looking at the setting sun, Fang Yuan lightly laughed. “The sun sets above the blue mountain, the autumn moon with the wind of spring. The morning is fine like hair and night is like snow, whether you succeed or fail when you look back there’s nothing left.”

As he said this, memories of his previous life on Earth emerged before his eyes.

>> No.22646980

He was originally a Chinese scholar on Earth who chanced upon this world. He endured a hard life for 300 years and went through another 200 years; about over 500 years of his life flew by in the blink of an eye.

So many memories that were buried deep inside the heart begun to relive themselves, sprouting into life before his eyes.

“I failed in the end.” Fang Yuan sighed in his heart emotionally, yet there were no regrets.

This end result was something he had foreseen. When he made his decision in the beginning, he had prepared himself for this.

To be a demon is to be merciless and cruel, a murderer and destroyer. There is no place in heaven or earth for such a thing – turning into an enemy to the world, still having to face the consequences.

“If the Spring Autumn Cicada that I have just cultivated is effective, I shall still be a demon in my next life!” With this thought, Fang Yuan couldn’t help but let out a big laugh.

“Wicked demon, what are you laughing about?”

“Be careful everyone, the demon is going to attack before his final moments!”

“Hurry up and surrender the Spring Autumn Cicada!!”

The group of warlords surged forward; at this moment, with a loud bang, Fang Yuan was engulfed in a blinding surge of energy.

>> No.22646989

>>22646977
>>22646980
Translation is obviously hot garbage but this piqued my curiosity
>>22646975
If you want to shill your chinese anime slop at least don’t be so openly hostile anon

>> No.22646999

If this faggot gets to make RI standalone threads then jannies should keep him out of /sffg/

>> No.22647004

>>22646845
Dropped it at the zombie arc, around the time when he entered the ocean zone because the arc was dragging on a bit too much. Plus, CCP already banned the novel, so it won't have an ending.

>> No.22647006

>>22647004
What did they ban it for?

>> No.22647012

>>22647006
Because chinese serial stories are just like japanese serials but instead of fighting God, they fight Bureaucracy

>> No.22647015

>>22647012
What do Western serials fight? Boredom?

>> No.22647016

>>22647006
Author was not so subtly criticizing the CCP, very harshly. Surprised it didn't get banned earlier and made it as far as it did. Pretty sure finding it on the chinese internet is almost impossible now.

>> No.22647019

>>22646977
Soulless bugslop. Shan’t

>> No.22647044

>>22647004
Imagine reading 20,000 pages and then dropping a book, you are a literal retard

>> No.22647063

>>22647015
Antisemitism

>> No.22647099

>>22647044
It wasn't 20000 pages though, more like around 6-8 thousand pages. Besides, even if I had kept on reading what's the point? It's not like there's an end or climax.

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Sorry anon but this is now a Paladin of Shadows thread. Get gud.

>> No.22647279

>>22647231
OP here, qrd? Cover looks interesting

>> No.22647307

>>22646977
>Looking at the setting sun, Fang Yuan lightly laughed. “The sun sets above the blue mountain, the autumn moon with the wind of spring. The morning is fine like hair and night is like snow, whether you succeed or fail when you look back there’s nothing left.”
This reads like a parody of Chinese dialogue.

>> No.22647322

>>22646845
someone post the excerpt where he burns alive children in a statue’s mouth or whatever to gain powers. this shit is satanic as fuck

>> No.22647941

>>22646856
Use webtoepub or lightnovel crawler

>> No.22647988

>Mu Gu Gai Pan tittered triumphantly, "My penis is the wind in spring and your asshole, a banner of surrender." He stoically hailed Hitler and commanded his Pokemon to eviscerate 10,000,000 children and kittens. The ritual empowered Gu Ga Bing Bong with enough roiling chi to ascend the 8000th level of Winter Spring Cumfart Enlightenment. With this awesome power, he had finally achieved the power necessary to stand up to the mean black kids at school. Legend even foretold of the power to tell off the roasties that didn't talk to him. The quest for aryan supremacy continued for 617 more chapters.
>BASED!! BAAAASED!!

>> No.22648128

>>22646845
Is it only available as ebook?

>> No.22648163

>>22646856
https://files.catbox.moe/kpxf0p.epub

Beware there are few other versions with slightly worse translation. The one above is the official version I have not checked the others in this thread.

>> No.22648167

>>22646880
Did you even read RI?

>> No.22648175

>>22647004
dropped it right before the fate gu arc. Chapters 1300 - 1850 were the best part of the entire series

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>>22647322

>> No.22648226

>>22647099
It's about the journey, not the destination.

>>22646999
You are free to make standalone threads about your favorite feminist and antiwhite cuckold fiction, hugo and nebulas etc (instead of shitting up /sffg/ with it)

>> No.22648266

>>22646865
>free of western moralfaggotry and christcuckery.
This.
Having fantasy without any religion is a breath of fresh air.

>> No.22648488

>>22648128
Yes

>> No.22648566

>>22646865
It's Nietzschean in the way a 16-year-old with delusions of grandeur interprets Nietzsche.

>> No.22648582

>>22648566
Are you 16? Did you interpret it in that way?
Fang Yuan is fairly mature character, Id say he is more mature than 90% of all (popular, dnd type medieval) fantasy protagonists Chinese or Western.

>> No.22648583

>>22648582
No, haven't read it.

>> No.22648598

>>22646845
I just finished book 1 and holy fuck this shit is fire. I do wonder if ending or no ending would of really mattered? Each story feels very self-contained and there's Ren Zu's stories passing on Zhen's thoughts of the world.

>> No.22648613

>>22648583
That is often the case. People see power fantasy, evil mc, progression, cultivation tags and they instantly think ...anime, for kids, some dumb naruto shit. And often it is but not in RI case.

>> No.22648667

>>22646977
Holy fuck this sounds like a boring powrr fantacy. Either that or some slop romance novel posing as an action novel like Witcher.
>

>> No.22648683

>>22648667
>Either that or some slop romance novel posing as an action novel like Witcher
A well-read anon...

>> No.22648926

>>22648209
Wtf

>> No.22649772

>>22648598
Ren Zu's stories are actually better than the main story.

>> No.22650304

>>22648613
Okay, I'll check it out.

>> No.22650374

>>22649772
They're more notable since they're supposed to be styled as short chinese mythology stories (and good ones at that), but the climaxes on the main story hit just as hard

>> No.22650404

>chinsects are now openly shilling to anon weebs with such trash taste not even /a/ wants then
Damn, the economy must be worse than I expected.

>> No.22650410

>>22650404
Shill for who though?

>> No.22650419

>>22650410
>OP literally trying to pass off his garbage as "gretest fantasies ever written"
>hurr durr shill for who THOUGH???
Chang pls

>> No.22650431

>>22650419
It's pretty good though, have you read it? Besides, the Author doesn't get anything since the novel is banned. Seriously, shilling for who?

>> No.22650459

>>22647044
it's slop
so once it stops being enjoyable you do immediately
not like anything of value will be lost
t. dropped a few dozen chapters in

>> No.22650461

>>22650431
Good afternoon in beijing sir

>> No.22650499

>>22650431
>It's free so it's not a product, stupid westerner! Pls ignore Facebook and a million other big examples.
>Also pls read it read it READ IT!!!
You posted excerpts in the thread already, and I found them to be offensively bad: why would I read more?
Also, do you mind discussing why the CCP would ban the "greatest fantasies ever written"?

>> No.22650631

>>22646977

The opening text is kinda weak - better a couple chapters in with the awakening ceremony, or FY's first kill. Or bullying his fellow students at the academy.

>"But sir elder, that child is just too arrogant. He blocked the entrance; this is obviously not acknowledging our existence as guards! Being ignored isn't the main problem though, the important matter is how the clan will think of our academy. To actually allow a small petty C grade student make a fuss in the academy and not stop it. If word goes out, we're afraid this might affect your reputation, sir elder." The guard squinted as he said this.

>"Hmph, in reality is that because you all were disregarded by the boy, so your own dignity feels challenged?" The academy elder was not too happy. He sneered and shot a gaze as sharp as a sword edge at the guards. They all lowered their heads, all of them disagreeing.

>"What's wrong with fighting? As long as lives are not lost, it will stir up the competitive side of the students and temper their will to fight. To stop this kind of fight is to stifle the student's fighting passion! Was there no fighting in the past batches? Every batch had their own battles, and it happened very often. The only difference was that it usually happened in the latter half of the year when the students had already mastered some means of fighting. With strength they itched to fight, and at the same time it is an aggressive age. Why didn't you stop those people back then?" The academy elder questioned in a cold voice.

>"Maybe it was because the fights in the previous years were all single battles, there were rarely huge scale fighting like this one. But this Fang Yuan is really good at creating a disturbance!" The chief of the guards replied.

>"No, no, no." The academy elder shook his head, "That was because you all did not dare to stop it. Because after half a year, a Gu Master will have the ability to fight beyond a mortal's strength, and with your petty mortal bodies, how are you supposed to stop it? Right now you all want to stop Fang Yuan, perhaps it is because he just started cultivating, so he doesn't have enough power. It's also because you feel that he ignored your existence and offended your dignity. But you must all remember, these students all bear the surname of Gu Yue! They are my Gu Yue clan's clan members, your masters! Even if they are still of young age, no matter how weak, they are still your masters!"

It's misleading because of all the terrible things Fang Yuan does he doesn't actually rape anyone in the main story, no "took away my body's purity". He absolutely has the opportunity to but refrains. Maybe in his past life he did.

>> No.22650648

>>22650461
wazzup beijing

>> No.22650650

can someone actually explain why this is worth reading? the same faggot has been going on for months about how tbe character is a sociopath llike it’s never been explored

except the excerpts are childlike depictions of powertripping that any highschool student could write

does it have any merit aside from ‘mc is bad boy’

>> No.22651073

>>22650650
It's worth reading if you already like wuxia slop or other forms of amateur web-lit. If you're a normal person who is accustomed to reading normal books, you'll find quality of the translation and the depth of the narrative to be sub-standard and off-putting. Like that guy said above , it's fairly good when compared to others within the genre, but novels of this kind are the literary equivalent of junk food. Litslop, if you will.

>> No.22651136

>>22650650
In a 2300+ chapters main characters powertrips maybe a handful of times

>does it have any merit aside from ‘mc is bad boy’
Mc is not 'bad boy', he is very well written, author manages perfect balance between down to earth attitude and ambition.

>> No.22651142

>>22651073
Have you read it?

Like several people said above it's worth reading just because it's fairly good and there is also not a trace of modern western trends (sjw, liberalism etc), also no moralfaggotry, no religion bs.

>> No.22651169

>>22651142
>there is also not a trace of modern western trends (sjw, liberalism etc), also no moralfaggotry, no religion bs.
The only reason you are getting any of these is because you went out of your way to read them.

>> No.22651175

>>22651142
I have obviously read it.
You are quite dislikable.

>> No.22651178

>>22646977
>>22646980
This is terrible even by fanfic standards
Why is it getting shilled so much?

>> No.22651190

>>22651178
It's all the hard work of a single autist.

>> No.22651196

>>22648209
What the fuck, now I know why this shit got banned. Edgy as fuck

>> No.22651200

>>22651169
No, most modern fantasy (and even fiction in general) is full of it.

>>22651175
Why?

>> No.22651234

>>22648209
whats the gu

>> No.22651249

>>22651234
https://reverend-insanity.fandom.com/wiki/Gu

>> No.22651257

>>22651234
It's a small worm or an insect that can do magic once the wielder (human gu master) supplies energy to it. Like fire gu (worm) will create small fire when gu master supplies his internal energy to it. There many different gu that can do different things

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>> No.22651617

>>22651200
>shill without any subtlety nor shame
>cry about le cucked western morals when posting shit so edgy a 13yo would cringe at it
>WHY DO YOU DISLIKE ME???
You're pretty much a parody of a weeb given life.

>> No.22651652

>>22651617
What is your definition of 'edgy' ? The stuff that I have posted (and the novel itself) isn't edgy at least according to mainstream definitions of edgy

>> No.22652580

>>22651617
idk man with you and that guy going back and forth you come off as way more dislikable

>> No.22652597

After seeing this post yesterday I read like first 30 chapters and it got me hooked so thanks OP. Fang Yuan is pretty well done as an evil, rational ubermensch. shame about the shitty translation

>> No.22652971

>>22646845
It looks cheap

>> No.22653288

>>22646845
I would have checked it out by now if there was a physical copy. I don't like reading fiction on the computer screen. I can handle non-fiction on the computer screen though.

>> No.22653297

>>22648488
Then it's not a real book :)

>> No.22653420

>>22653288
>was
were*

>> No.22653538

>>22652597

The translation improves somewhat later on. At the start it's done by a fan and is a little awkward. Later on some professional shows up and takes over, so we get a bit more consistency.

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>>22646845
post AI art of any cool or fun moments

>> No.22653696

>>22653618

If that's supposed to be Bai Ning Bing, it looks terrible. Still, my attempts at the Reverse Flow River scene look far worse.

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>>22653696
it was just that she was supposed to be disguised

Do show your efforts

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>>22653745

Oh good point, I forgot about them using disguises. That actually works really well then.

My AI art is all dogshit, I have to steal prompts from other people and edit them to get anything decent. But RI stuff is all so specific and hard to manage.

Best I can do is a slightly fucked up Little Hu land spirit. She's supposed to have a fox tail, not fox ears.

>> No.22653945

>>22653745
Kino image

>> No.22653977

>>22651142
>there is also not a trace of modern western trends (sjw, liberalism etc), also no moralfaggotry, no religion bs.
The absence of these things does not make something automatically good when the end result is still cringe. From the excerpts that have been posted here, this is some school shooter wannabe edgelord power fantasy. Absolutely juvenile.

>> No.22654073

>>22653977
The edgy excerpts aren't even the main attraction of the story. It's the muddled juxtaposition of Righteous and Demonic way of thinking, the hypocrisy and similarities between the good guys and bad guys, and especially Fang Yuan's definition of evil during his growth. Yes he is evil, scheming, a general piece of shit, but the world is also hostile and the society he was born in practically considered him to be below dogshit. Plus he doesn't find it orgasmic to do what he does, being purely pragmatic about it. There's also Ren Zhu's stories which to me seem to be the author's opinions on the concepts of human life.

And while it may be a power fantasy, characters intelligence or the power system isn't buttfucked by MC plot armor. He was quite literally going to die in the end of chapter 200 if it wasn't for the power that was established at the beginning of the story

Just read it instead of calling it cringe and arguing with "le SJW bad" shills. Speaking of which, there's plenty of powerful females and a main character becomes a tranny through magic.

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>>22646880
I just tried reading this crap. "Give me the Spring Egg Roll dirty devil you robbed my boy hole!" Gookslop.

>> No.22654231

>>22654118
So you haven't actually read it

>> No.22654366

>>22654073

Said main character's whole arc is about trying to turn back into a man, not really a true troon. Or consider the rapist gang who get turned gay by ZLY and are completely distraught about it, losing their great joy in life. Author writes with a degree of heteronormativity that's basically unknown in the West these days. It's so obvious, as far as he's concerned that men are men and women are women, that men and women are supposed to be together. Everything else is an aberration, a joke.

Anyway, the real meat of the story is about the conflict between duty and being true to one's self, making one's way in the world, searching for freedom, perseverance, overcoming fate.

>> No.22654373

>>22654231
>Read it
>Don't like it
>UUUH YOU DIDN'T ACTUALLY READ IT

>> No.22654380

>>22646845
>Dragon Ball: Le Book
Grow up retard.

>> No.22654386

>>22650631
>Maybe in his past life he did.
In my past life I was a rapist, and in my next I will again be, but in this one I'm merely a lowly carpenter, with an extreme foot fetish.

>> No.22654483

I started in January, and just reached chapter 600 a few days ago. I'm loving it.

>>22646856
I had the same issue, needed to use calibre to split it into 4 parts. Works fine after. Look up EpubSplit

>> No.22654603

>>22646977
I bet this reads really well in chinese

>> No.22654609

>>22648209
The bear feeding scene at the intro village cave was way worse desu

>> No.22654613

>>22654373
yeah you didn't. go seethe somewhere else kid

>> No.22654702

I was curious to try Xianxia type novels. Picked out Renegade Immortal after seeing some posts about it a year ago. I really tried reading it, but dropped it after 50 chapters or so. While it wasn't a bad time per se, and it had so many alien concepts to me, which intrigued me, it was ruined by terrible translation. Like, you constantly are not sure of things you read in any given chapter - you read a chapter and you at least have 2-3 questions (I'm not talking about in-plot mysteries, but about what should've been clearly stated information). I honestly would liken it to machine translation levels. When even of the most mundane and basic things leaves you with questions, it makes it not worth reading in English imo. It seems like it would be a good read if you knew Chinese, but now reading passages from Reverend Insanity, just confirms my suspicion that almost anything in this genre will be badly translated. What's up with that? Also, I remember googling "Renegade Immortal bad translation" to see if translation gets better later, just to find reddit posts defending the translation as "great". That's when I gave up. Currently I'm learning Japanese. I wonder if Chinese to Japanese translations are just as bad, if they exist.

>> No.22654789

>>22654702
Read Reverend Insanity, Martial World, Otherwordly Evil Monarch, Sovereign of Three Realms.
Er Gens novels are quite bad desu

>> No.22655046

>>22654789
I'll try giving one a shot, when I'll have more free time. Part time job and learning a language eats up a lot of my time, these days.

>> No.22655231

>>22654366
nvm, listen to this guy >>22653977

>> No.22655527

>>22654789
Other than Martial World and Reverend Insanity, the rest you suggested are generic trash. Even Martial World is generic trash, but at least it's not as repetitive. Er Gen is kino.

>> No.22656240

>>22655527
They aren't bad and fairly entertaining. I mentioned the other two novels becausev previous poster complained about poor translation, the sovereign of three realms and otherworldly evil monarch have pretty good translations (and are also entertaining)

>> No.22656254

>>22653977
The presence of these things makes something automatically bad.

>> No.22656329

>>22656254
That this is what RI shills have resorted to is all you need to know about how shit it is.

>> No.22656372

>>22656329
It's pretty good, you are just angry because there is novel that has none of that modern progressive sjw schlock, no moralfaggotry and no religion nonsense.