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9188714 No.9188714 [Reply] [Original]

when is it a good idea to incorporate sex scenes and how do you make them actually enjoyable?

>> No.9188754

whenever you think it's aesthetically appropriate and by writing them well

>> No.9188779

>>9188754
>writing them well

no shit

what would make you say a sex scene was "written well"?

>> No.9188824
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>>9188779
i am becomng skilled pornographer, i will share with you a valuable tips

-the sexing is good, very vigorous and bold
-no political conversation or off-topic stuff, just sex
-it takes place in a believable way ('oh yeah', 'i like it,' 'this sex is very good', like this)
-it is a man and a woman, having the sexes both equally
-there is afterwards some food scenes, or like riding a bicycle in countryside, making happy memories and good times
-all of the sexing is in one scene, so, not like some sex in the bedroom, and then partly at restaurants or in cinema, for readers it is very confusing
-sexes are three in a book, so, you don't get overwhelmed of vigorous sluts
-personally, i like sexing scenes in places like airports, factories, sometimes famous places (eiffel tower, sphinx nose, all over the world)
-also, there is good lesson for life's journey. to having a sex is just have fun, be creative, you can do it

>> No.9188839

>>9188824
you're hilarious

thanks for the clear pointer though! really apprecciate them

>having a sex
>you can do it

y-you too

i just wrote my first ever sexual scene (no pov sex involved) , but it's in german so i can't put it in the critique thread... a shame.

>> No.9188846
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9188846

>sex scene
>author doesn't include the rimjob

>> No.9188848

>a good idea

Don't.

>> No.9188879

>>9188846
not that again...

maybe i have

>>9188848
why? i'm not writing about asexuals...

>> No.9188896

>>9188879
Maybe you're writing about ugly people.

>> No.9188898

>>9188824
>it is a man and a woman
shitlord
>>9188879
Many times sex is used by an author to distract from their shitty writing. Most of the best works of literature don't involve sex at all. I don't necessarily agree that you shouldn't add it, but be very aware of what its purpose in the story is. You're not writing about people without assholes, either, but that doesn't mean you should include a shitting scene.

>> No.9188900

>>9188846
Is Pen "Ribbit" Jillette going to be okay?

>> No.9189623

>>9188779
one that doesn't use the expressions "vagoo", "tiddies" or "weenus".

>> No.9189639

>>9188900
Honestly, who gives a fuck?

>> No.9189648

>>9188779
>what would make you say a sex scene was "written well"?
When it is unwritten.

>> No.9189663

>>9188824

>'this sex is very good'
>believable

>> No.9189706

>>9189663
t. dicklet