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9063909 No.9063909 [Reply] [Original]

How do I stop my writing from becoming repetitive?
>and then, I verbed adjectively, as he
I want to eat a gun.

>> No.9063966

>>9063909
Vary your comma use, sometimes cutting them out of sentences entirely. Throw in some semicolons and em dashes even if you have noidea how they work. Try to describe things or talk about them longer. Figure out how to do more than just saying what happened in a way that doesn't feel awkward or forced to you.

>> No.9063975

>>9063966
thank you

>> No.9063977

>>9063909
>adjectively

You're a lost cause.

>> No.9064444
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9064444

There are literally whole books written about this.

Sense of Style
Spunk and Bite
The Art of X-ray Reading

The writer walked briskly to his local bookstore, as he pondered the helpful tomes that awaited him.

>> No.9064552

>>9064444

>unnecessary comma

you're never gonna get published, kys