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please tell me i'm not the only one who finds this person's writing horrifyingly bad?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k30RM-9yu1MQghp0aKbo6k1lz7_UoFhj5YK5_QX6xTI/edit

>> No.8666614

that's a lot of dialogue, Alex

>> No.8666619

>>8666614
someone on discord who thinks they're a "good writer" posted this. Alex is just my friend who's criticizing it with me

>> No.8666629

>>8666619
I'm regretting reading this shit right now. I'm too sober for this, but its like a train wreck, you cannot look away from the nightmare that this logical inconsistency is.

I've had better ideas better executed whilst commuting to and fro than. whatever the hell this is.

>> No.8666639

Addendum: Clearly I should asked Anon to put up a health warning. Caution: Do not consume sober.

actually, don't consume in the first place, not if you value your anything.

>> No.8666660

OP here. "Mazefire3609" is the writer.

>> No.8666819

I only read a couple of sentences but it seems really amateurish.

>> No.8666902
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8666902

>"YAHOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

>> No.8666907

let us edit faggot

>> No.8666915
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8666915

>actually putting stuttering in dialogue

my sides

>> No.8666932

This is terrible. It's almost so terrible that it becomes readable as a parody.

>> No.8666962

>>8666915
Pynchon did it. Though this guy is definitely no Pynchon.

>> No.8666974

I read a few sentences, and it already sounds like fanfiction written by a 14-year-old

>> No.8667039

....I need brain bleach after reading that garbage.

>> No.8667053
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8667053

I read this all
It hurt.
I tried talking to the guy.
It hurt WORSE

>> No.8667070
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8667070

I agree with the triple facepalm. I agree so very much. -_-

>> No.8667139

>hurr durr looks how shit this random kid's writing is

who cares? kill yourselves

>> No.8667147

Fucking hell that's pretty bad. Honestly my writing isn't good, but at least it isn't this bad.

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8667179

I dont always shit on people's writing

But when i do its atrocious and generally gives you an idea of what kind of idiot you're dealing with.

>> No.8667468

Wow, somebody on the internet can't write? Who would've thought. You can stop samefagging now.