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8636768 No.8636768[DELETED]  [Reply] [Original]

>CRASH! Mom made pancakes
What did he mean by this?

>> No.8636775

>>8636768
Patirarchy, the woman makes pancakes.

I'm sorry if this is actually a serious thread.

>> No.8636785

>>8636775
holy...

>> No.8636787

that reddit guy... he's never gonna get more

it's tragic, really

>> No.8636813

>>8636768
It's a superb example of not only being concise, but providing an awesome hook. A great opening line causes the reader to want to more. In this case, my immediate reaction was "why did Mom make pancakes?" Great concept, with great contrast, and I would love to read more.