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I really want critiques and I want you all to be honest. Tell me how good it is. Tell me how bad it is. I dont fucking care. Just help me. Leave me comments and shit. Critique my ass as hard as you can

I'm really proud of this. Its a Walking Dead cross over with Inuyasha. I worked hard.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11909828/1/Oats-in-the-Water

>> No.8069729
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>>8069512
>Its a Walking Dead cross over with Inuyasha

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8069828

>>8069512
>https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11909828/1/Oats-in-the-Water

>> No.8069917

>I'm really proud of this
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAGAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

>> No.8069922

Don't mind the other faggots OP, it's actually a pretty decent fanfiction.

>> No.8069935

>>8069512
>him reach out his calloused hand to roughly and yank her against him.
I think you meant to roughly yank her against him. You should really do some grammar proof reading before you just submit things online all willy nilly, friendo. Its actually not a bad read but the cringe is real because I know you just stole two universes and blended them together. If I didn't have this autism bias established I would say its pretty dank.

>> No.8071637

>>8069512
Good job OP.
I'm proud of you.
Keep it up!

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not bad desu

>> No.8073108

I literally jacked off to the erotic portion, so at the very least your fan fic provided me pleasure.

>> No.8073290

I really really liked inuyasha. It was the first show I watched that didn't operate under star wars logic and it left an impression on me

>> No.8073318

>>8073290
Explain Star Wars logic to me. Maybe we can save this thread with actual discussion.

>> No.8073572

>>8073318
It's when every single social interaction is part of an epic battle between good and evil and a chance to level up your powers. eg Naruto

>> No.8073702

>>8069512
Ardent to relieve the agonizing coil that wound itself into a deep unseen part of his pelvis.

Liked this are you male or female. Interesting description is why I ask