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Because tonight is Christmas eve, here's a little something I just wrote to get you in the right mood and remember what's most important.

It's the latest chapter from "Practice what you Peach", about a peach farmer who hates peaches.

Enjoy. And have a merry Christmas.

>> No.7500303
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7500303

>new paragraph and indentation for dialogue

>> No.7500347

a peach wouldnt fall to pieces from hitting a gravel driveway 2bh F A M

>> No.7500418

>people not appreciating the best /lit/-produced work since taipei

>> No.7500427

>stationery
le_penn_trash_meme.jpg

>> No.7500477

>>7500281
this is nonsense. it doesn't make any sense and is quite incoherent. i have no idea what the characters are talking about. that's not how actual people communicate and that's not how to communicate to a reader.

>> No.7500490

>>7500347
It would if it was a shitty peach you retard

>> No.7500578

>>7500281
>me at first
Mira's going on a fun trip?

>me at end
Well fuck

>> No.7501661

>>7500281
This just made me a good kid of depressed. Perfect after christmas dinner with my family.

>>7500477
Makes perfect sense to me bub. Maybe subtlety just isn't your thing.

>> No.7501687

>>7500281
Thanks, I appreciate your stories, all of them. Be sure to publish them as soon as you have a decent collection. Keep up the good work.

>> No.7503094

>>7500578
>Well fuck
My thoughts exactly.

>>7500477
Have you tried reading it twice? Lmao

>> No.7505257

Have a christmas bump.

>> No.7506788

>>7500347
Do you even lift?

>> No.7507897

>>7501687
Thanks man, will do.