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What's a better way of saying "the next morning" or "the next day" or something of similarity?
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>> No.7480845

>>7480790
What's the setting before this statement?

>> No.7481527

>>7480845
Describing how somebody likes to read. They have just eaten dinner with their family.

>> No.7481545

who is this ovum totem?

>> No.7481572

>>7481527
Describe the next morning in the same sentence, like "The next morning arrived accompanied by bright sunrays throught his window" or some shit that somehow ties into the scene.

>> No.7481581
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7481581

If something seems pointless to point out just don't. People can uderstand elipses without help. If you mentione breakfast, or sunlight, or waking up or anything related to the morning in your paragraph people will know it's probably the next morning.

>> No.7481592

show don't tell
show don't tell
shoop don't tell
shoop da tell
shoop da woop

>> No.7481611
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>>7481545
Jack Kilmer