Help creating a short story (existentialist protagonist)

[Wipitiwipi No.7367000]

Hi, im looking for people who shares the same passion as me for write stories, this time i want help to write a short story with the existentialist style of the stranger (Albert camus), however i want to make the protagonist despicable and still manage to sympathy of the readers to feel sympathy for her. Intro: The main story revolves around "that woman" ,a hikikomori, She is feared by all her neighbors as the witch of the last house, she was once very beautiful and attended to the be a beauty queen, however one day her husband for unknown reasons attempted to kill her, she survived but her face was disfigured along with her psyche, now she uses a barbie mask to hide her disfigured face and her only purpose in her life is to kill him, so what do you think she will do next?

[Anonymous No.7367079]

get the masses on her side through propaganda that sound strangely like leftist political views

[Anonymous No.7367090]

She needs to determine a method and form a plan. Does she hope to get away with it or is she driven by wreck less hatred and rage?

[Anonymous No.7367099]

hopefully kill the author of such a hack story

[Anonymous No.7367110]

hm nice idea op I'm gna steal it ;)

[Anonymous No.7367320]

>>7367000
How can a human look so perfect... the face just.. hnng..

nice trips btw

[Wipitiwipi No.7367426]

She have a cold mind and is very calculator, also i guess that should be fine if she have some kind of partner

[Anonymous No.7367721]

>>7367426
I love when my grill is a qt3.14 calculator

[Anonymous No.7367894]

I feel like she will have problems to kill her husband, because she is a hikikomore. Maybe she will get better ( from being a hikikomore) trying to kill him and realise that everybody is just like her husband and go on a rampage, but at the end she sees that she must die ( she became a monster by jugding like a god.... sorry for my eng and for my bad story >.<

[Anonymous No.7367901]

she uses her witch powers to steal faces

[Anonymous No.7367910]

>>7367426
>She have a cold mind and is very calculator

[Anonymous No.7367953]

>>7367901
king of the witch realm is former husband who tried to avert this terrorist activity

rest of story is king of the witch realm's existential crisis of creating the very thing he tried to extinguish

king sends witch assassins to clean up this mess

hikkokimore realizes that one of her hikki animay shows, about a witch who wants to steal other people's faces but is hunted down by a group of pre-pubescent cutey witch hunters with scanty clothing and big guns, was actually about her

she commits suicide upon realizing that her life is inane and cliched enough to be serialized on japanese television

[Anonymous No.7367955]

>>7367894
>She have a cold mind and is very calculator
I love you, I got a good chuckle from this.

[Anonymous No.7367958]

>>7367320
it's because she's underage.

[Anonymous No.7367976]

>>7367000
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[Anonymous No.7368678]

How is Calculator grill? Is she ok?!?

[Anonymous No.7368768]

>>7367976
S M E D J E B A C K E N
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[Anonymous No.7368914]

>>7368768
Borta bra men henna bäst

[Anonymous No.7368943]

>>7367000
plz lern engls

[Anonymous No.7369186]

This is hillarious. I am worried about calculator grill still.

[Anonymous No.7369206]

Her husband leaves her and then goes to some other country, she tries to track him down by contacting his colleagues but within that she discovers something more dark and mysterious, her husband has been cheating on her, he have been unfaithful to her and when she discovers his affairs she goes on a killing spree and murders his girlfriends but then, FBI takes a look into this case and sends their best detectives to find the killer, so thus ensures a hunt for a killer and that killer's hunt for her husband, who will find who first? Who will die? Who will live? Well that is upto you.

[Anonymous No.7369533]

>>7369206
AND HIS NAME IS JOHN CENA DOODOOO

I want more details on calculator grill. What are her functions? What model is she?

[Anonymous No.7369541]

Read Use of Weapons for ideas on how to make a despicable person sympathetic.

[Anonymous No.7369553]

>she witch
>she bad
>she no like anyone body
>her face look like shit
>a teenage grl comes to her house
>she sells cookie
>she very shy and has acne
>witch say "ur face fucked up"
>"like urs isn't lol" the grl replies
>they becom friends
>come to conclusion that they like that bcuz men
>want stop male opression and take over country
>watch out obama
>hillary gon b presidenté

[Anonymous No.7369556]

>>7367426
>very calculator
Hard bodied and good at mathematics?
Sounds like my kind of girl xd

[Anonymous No.7369573]

>>7369553
still a better love story than twilight
>>7369556
This too, is also a better love story than twilight.

[Anonymous No.7369800]

>>7367000
You can't write existentially and expect the main character to inspire a moral response.

[Anonymous No.7370694]

>>7369800
Tell that to calculator girl you lil shit

[Anonymous No.7371800]

that is the most beautiful face I've ever seen

[Anonymous No.7372009]

>>7367958
It's because the laws are not lined up with biology. 18 is sub optimal. Before the modern degeneracy, we'd all be marrying young and staying together for life. We're pushing against our own nature and it will be the downfall eventually.

[Anonymous No.7372806]

>>7372009
The average age of marriage in northwestern Europe has been in the early to mid twenties range since like the 1500's. They didn't marry 14 year olds and they produced some of the greatest civilizations ever.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hajnal_line

[Anonymous No.7372834]

>>7367000
>and still manage to sympathy of the readers to feel sympathy for her
Don't bother. Just make the writing and story engaging enough.

[Anonymous No.7372915]

>>7372009
I think fucking kids is a little more degenerate than not.

[Anonymous No.7372923]

>>7372915
No no, we used to fuck kids through our entire history, that's tradition. Tradition is good. Now progress, that shit is degenerate and scary.

[Anonymous No.7372969]

>>7372923
Praise Evola