What does /lit/ think of my poem? "The Leviated Man" Big nose Tiny eyes (Barren) Dull face Unkept hair Cheap tattoos Long arms Shrunken torso Lose hands (Dangling) Crooked feet (Leviated) Thin meat And a vulture neck (Broken)

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Anonymous Mon Nov 16 16:46:32 2015 No.7360016 [Reply] [Original]

What does /lit/ think of my poem?

"The Leviated Man"

Big nose
Tiny eyes (Barren)
Dull face
Unkept hair

Cheap tattoos
Long arms
Shrunken torso
Lose hands (Dangling)

Crooked feet (Leviated)
Thin meat
And a vulture neck (Broken)

>>	Anonymous Mon Nov 16 16:47:27 2015 No.7360018 >unkept stopped reading here learn to unkempt

>>	Anonymous Mon Nov 16 16:56:02 2015 No.7360044 >>7360016 I think it belongs in the critique thread.

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>>	Anonymous Tue Nov 17 15:04:54 2015 No.7363238 test: >>>/lit/thread/7362954

>>	Anonymous Tue Nov 17 15:05:56 2015 No.7363242 test: >>>7362954

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