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Since original OP has gone into hiatus, I will provide these platforms and check with them regularly.

Part I is open for suggestions/corrections in this document, we will follow in chronological order: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TIdoWxLOs7tVlO8MHISFAm1stJ7FEta-fL0dBe88J1g/edit?usp=sharing

Suggestion mode is a temporary fix, please feel free to swear and vent in the thread. For newcomers: please refer to the literature provided in the archived thread (Last thread: >>7191042). All illustrations, new submissions and comments are welcome and fall under scrutiny. A deadline for Part I will be announced later into the week.

>> No.7236316

>>7236283
bump

>> No.7237229
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>>7236283
I was involved in all three failed /lit/ projects (quagga, kolsti, TLOTIAT 3: Tokyo Drift, all 3 of which had way too much content for them to be abandoned but were anyway and for which I am still butthurt) and haven't browsed as much lately but coming back to see this warms my heart. I look forward to reading it and wish you all luck.

>> No.7237394

>>7237229
Thanks anon
>>7236283
COPY PASTING "ROUGH" FINALE:
1. Memaw kills Fanshen
2. Bignose gets to the tenth room
3. Death orgy
4. Return of Trump
5. Puerile King finale: the royal gala

>> No.7237398

>>7236283
For ease of access:
Part 5 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qvlkrn0P_0z4JOp4oJ9L9dKq0I382bAQqAbnLtNsmhM/edit

>> No.7237492

Can anyone look through and make corrections for typos and shit?

>> No.7237496

>>7237492
Yeah, anyone can.

>> No.7237910

Made my part 1 suggestions. Pretty simple, cut the Hardcore part (that was me shitposting) and the whole conversation about fonts and Walden.

Slavoj needs a major rewrite, especially in the first half (barely comprehensible due to shifting tenses, unclear POV).

Favorite parts of 1, wouldn't change a thing:
>tfw no big boobied high test saddlebag hips gf (both the illustration and the subtitle)
>Yoplait/Nietzsche
>2070: The turning point (Bruce/Caitlyn intro)
>Chapter 4, subchapter 1 (
>SUBCHAPTER 20, A 20th Centry Cyberpunk (DFW in college)
>Chapter X (not ten, X) (Mega City 4)

>> No.7237935

>>7237910
Part 1 is so simple and fun. I hope we can preserve that gradual shift to the slightly darker and more complex narrative that we have now.

I'll add in my own small suggestions to part 1 today, but I'm also not opposed to a fairly heavy editing process for a lot of the book, it's certainly far too long as is, and trimming feels necessary to me if we want a reader to see our "best" bits.

>> No.7237965

>>7236283
Do you think a faux-introduction would be a good idea for the book? Something an anon/we write after the editing is done, maybe just for humour, maybe just to give a rough idea to what is going on, maybe both.

>> No.7238023

>>7237935
Yeah, I'm going to be cutting a lot from my P4-5 contributions to keep that tone. I tried to draw several things together and build a sort of plot, but the result was a lot of overlong and not very fun stuff.

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7238045

let us not go to this thread it is a silly place

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Hypersphere GooglePhone E-Book PDF Edition.mp3

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Hypersphere Goodreads Review Profile Pic Anniversary Edition

>> No.7238303

bumping.

>> No.7238347

>>7237229
Who's up for a combined revival of those three, entitled TLOTIAT 3: Kolsti and the Quagga Strike Again or maybe TLOTIAT Presente: Quagga vs Kolsti. These would of course need a character named Quagga that could personify some of its traits.

>> No.7238560

>>7238023
Hey man, no effort is wasted; Bottleman chided me rightly for deleting stuff I wasn't happy with, just put it in the thread and let good ol' meritocratic anonymous tweak it.

>> No.7238572

>>7238347
One book at a time. For now.

>tfw I used to think anonymous was a genius author when I was young, because so many quotes and books we're attributed to him
>tfw this might spark a movement of bored university students shitting out their writing projects into shared google documents
>tfw my nine year old innocence could have been mildly correct this whole time

>> No.7238686

>>7238151
>>7238147
how come a bunch of nobodies on a korean imageboard make covers better than actual editors? Nice

>> No.7238736

>>7238151
why do you insist on ripping off NYRB?

>> No.7238935

>>7238560
Bottleman here. I sense my flavor is a bit harsh on the communal tongue, so to speak.
Remind me what your stuff was, Anon.

>> No.7238975

>>7238935
Did the Aristotle comic, killed off Trump, wrote the Wittgenstein piece, God's therapy thing, that numbers introduction for part 5 etc.

Currently taking a break for "work".

>> No.7239037

>>7238736
They've got a great style.

>> No.7239109

>>7238975
Just realized I owe you a heavily dialogue I had with you when I was stonedlmao. I will actually do that because I hate to break promises.

>> No.7239117

>>7239109
>heavily edited

>> No.7239230

>>7238736
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parody
Google image TLOTIAL. it's funny to me that there should be a bunch of covers for the book, in various styles (existing and otherwise), as if ingratiating it into literature
>>7238686
:> thank you

>> No.7239233

>>7238347
There are about 90 usable pages from TQP, might as well use those plus anything remaining from the other books, just mash it all together and publish it as if it were a collection of novellas.

>> No.7239272

>>7239230
theres nothing in your design spoofing anything, it's just copying the design. did you even bother to put actual meaning in the text in the back or did you just google an image and slap i on there? it's a nice clean design, but it tells me nothing and its a blatant rippoff of nyrb.

>> No.7239328

>>7239272
you're overthinking it. it's just a Hypersphere cover in the NYRB cover format. and yeah I just pasted the japanese text, I don't read japanese.

>its a blatant rippoff of nyrb.

yes

>> No.7239482

>>7239233
I was thinking we pool TQP, Kolsti and Tokyo Drift content and construe a narrative that brings all their ends together. Call it "On the Amalgamation of Postmortem Niceties" or summat.

>> No.7239750

>>7239328
nonetheless its nice

>> No.7240477

>>7236283
bump

>> No.7240535

Holy shit this is still going on?

Is my utterly terrible Gore Vidal/William F. Buckley shitposting still somehow a component?

>> No.7241114

>>7239233
There are also 90-100 pages of Kolsti. I don't think Tokyo Drift has much of anything other than ugly formatting and shitposts. The Kolsti character was pretty much an action hero detective spy hacker genius so I think a post-pulp "Kolsti vs Quagga" would be great.

>> No.7241411

>>7241114
There's some funny stuff in Tundra, I'll comb through it and take some stuff out.

>> No.7241531

>>7240535
absolutely, they recur

>> No.7241787

>>7241411
Question: are we putting this stuff into Hypersphere or will those documents be the table d'hote for our next novel(la)?

>> No.7241815

corrected and put notes/changes on the bignose/Tyrone excerpts

>>7241787
don't dump 90 pages of unrelated shit into the hypersphere

>> No.7241833

>>7241787
Leave it separate, the whole point of these thing is they're organic, this document is long enough already.

>> No.7242049

>>7236283
can someone please put some of the cut stuff and compile it into other novellas to be referenced in HS? I think that might be cool. no need to actually publish it just dump it somehwere online where it can be found by name. maybe some clueless people wil actually believe the references.

>> No.7242157

>>7242049
they could look like scholarly papers and studies too.

>> No.7242463

OP here, who thinks next Wednesday is a good deadline for this? Afterwards, I'll set up another thread for Part II which, understandably, will take more time.

>> No.7242515

TLOTIAT: Kolsti v Quagga (Tokyo) is a separate work that will begin when hyper sphere is done.

>> No.7242540

>>7242463
Seems okay.

>> No.7242557

>>7242515
We will call it "The KQT"

>> No.7242697

>>7242557
I think the words "Kolsti" and "Quagga" need to be in there just for name recognition and general board enthusiasm.

If you're worried about having TLOTIAT in the title because Quagga and Hypersphere are separate works connected to it, we could make the series title "The Quagga Project: Kolsti's Adventures in Tokyo"

>> No.7242707

>>7242697
I think we can come up with a better title without three meme names in it.

>> No.7242720

>>7242707
Tokyo barely got off the ground so we can discount that. We just need a basic amalgamation of "TLOTIAT Presents: Kolsti's Adventures in the Everglades" and "The Quagga Project." Including Tokyo is overkill.

>> No.7242734

>>7242720
i liked >>7239482 's suggestion but maybe something more witty

>> No.7242745

>>7242734
It just seems too hypersphere-ish. Kolsti is a TLOTIAT project. It's more obnoxious, more overtly memey, more extreme when it comes to metamodern oscillation. The title should reflect this, in my opinion. It's a wild genre fic pastiche, whereas Hypersphere feels ever so slightly more high brow.

>> No.7243079

>>7236283
bump

>> No.7243108

Is there anything i can contribute to the editing? I did the GodPaladin63 parts by the way.

>> No.7243117

>>7243108
Parts 4 and 5 are up for editing, but I suggest augmenting to the first part since first we're closing up submissions in a few days and second its underdevelopment.

>> No.7243121

Also sind the Death Orgy isn't really working (or am i overseeing something?) should i rewrite my Death Orgy Part so it's only in a black hole for the used characters?

>> No.7243475

>>7243121
Do whatever you think's necessary, mang.

>> No.7243630

im sensingthat ppl are sick of this

>> No.7244191

>>7243121
keep the orgy section thats there right now as is, foreshadowig for when we come back to it later >>7237394
>>7243117
are we adding to Part 1, not just editing it? it's a nice introduction to the story proper, a light prologue, does it need to be longer?
>>7243630
speaking for myself, im enjoying it. and the wrapup is going nicely. but i'm a retard

>> No.7244211

>>7244191
You can save introducing the Paladin to Part 2 or 3, but I'm struggling to understand *what* exactly *can* or must go into Part 1, or by what standards do we try and approach it,since it's a bit distant from all the action occurring late into the novel.

>> No.7244250

>>7244211
i dont think it needs to reflect the later parts more. each part introduces major and minor parts that are playing into the endgame. the way the story is structured is so that it's constantly being moved forward by contained and smaller stories, i dont think the GodPaladin thing needs to be moved up to part 2/3 just because it has a major endgame scene. the p5 GodPaladin segment is the vehicle for that larger story thread, so it's not a jarring late introduction. it's just a fresh face for an old plotline

>> No.7245142

trump

>> No.7245200

i really love how many footnotes there are in part five

>> No.7245394

>>7245200
me two[1] bby[2)[3][4]
[1]: meaning too
[2):"baby"
[3]: bet you caught the mistake, teehee
[4] select all tricycles

>> No.7245720

Is there a reason part 1 only has 14 pages? Weren't there like over hundred?

>> No.7245775

http://eye.swfchan.com/flash.asp?id=153863&n=bones+III.swf

>> No.7245875

>>7242463
I think that's a good idea, just to keep momentum to it.

>> No.7245949

ATTENTION
>>7245780

>> No.7246741

>>7245949
Ok..?

>> No.7246746

>>7246741
people in this thread might know about projects that i have missed dickweed

>> No.7246778

>>7246746
And what, exactly? There's like twenty projects /lit/'s undergone.

>> No.7247045

dag, I made my Part 1 suggestions in the original doc and not the Xanadu one

>> No.7248061

>>7247045
whoops

>> No.7249239

bump

>> No.7249284

I think part one is pretty much done with the suggested changes. Part X doesn't need rewrite, it's great. Moving the first image hurts by heart but it's pretty shit tbh

>> No.7249292

>>7245720
I too remember is was longer, but maybe it was something people cut out?

>> No.7249307

>>7249292
it used to be 17 pages, a couple of conversations/ramblings between anons were deleted.
>>7249284
>There, pleasure became ideology

>> No.7249479

just got the 3pac reference someone put in Part 1

>> No.7249610

OP here, I see a whole lot of objections to the picture. Anyone care to create something else to replace it, perhaps? Something more hypersphere-y?

>> No.7250230

What happened to Wucie?

>> No.7250404

>>7249610
Its perfect. we need to focus on the editing now.

>> No.7250487

>>7250230
She was forgotten about.

Kill her off or something, but she (and probably a list of all other forgotten characters) should make some kind of appearance at the Death Orgy or the Royal Gala.

>> No.7250555

>>7250487
Sounds like a good POV for the death orgy

>> No.7252156

stump

>> No.7253148

>>7250230
Wucie was in Part 1?

>> No.7253160

>>7236283
Reads like a Discworld novel but with more swearing tbh.

>> No.7254572

>>7253148
yeah. last time he was seen is in Part 3, iirc, when he meets Geibacca in the Netherrealm. then in Part 4 there's the Damian chapter (Bruce's lover)

>> No.7255062

morning bump
strump

>> No.7255217
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7255217

Bottleman here. I updated my intermission so that it will allow "sidecomments." Everyone feel free to put whatever nonsensical crap you want. Here's a pic of what it looks like (borders need slight alignment, I get it) and borders are temporarily black just for visibility.

Document is in Part 4: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IVWhB7ZOgM-fSNypkSsahx2tU1tvNCZ7VOrp4zn5kjI/edit

>> No.7255412

>>7253160
Let's get rich! I really want this to be published so that I can buy it and say "Oh, that little thing? It's just a post-modern fragmental collaborative fiction I collaborated on."

>> No.7255437

>>7255412
>that little thing
>350+ pages

>> No.7255475

>>7255412
>"Oh, that little thing? It's just a post-modern collection of memes, anime pictures and sexual fantasies involving Donald Trump alongside small children. Yeah, I helped write a lot of it."

>> No.7255497

>>7255217
this was supposed to be like a chapter from Figgenans Wake right?

>> No.7255537

>>7255497
Well, somebody bothered changing the format and the idea just popped up.

>> No.7255538

>>7255412
>It's just a [...] fiction I collaborated on.

>> No.7256013

Suggestion: table of contents, but no change with regards to chapter headings within the text. I don't really want to impose a strict organization on the story, I'd rather just divvy up/clearly label the passages in the ToC. Make things easy to find but preserve the flow and irregularity of the book.

Example/suggested divisions of Part I and II
>ch. i. x, y, z
x, y, z denotes different stories, as well as everything inbetween. Fold connected/proximitous stories into one chapter for convenience.

Part I
>section i
ch. i, "The hypersphere is a big fucking place kid", Bignose 1 (sent to second room), Tyrone 1 (shot by police)
ch. ii, Yoplait/Idol Nietzsche
ch. iii, 2070: The turning point (enter Caitlyn)
ch. iv, Tyrone 2 (founds the hyperniggas)
>section ii
ch. v, "You want to know more about the hypersphere kid?"
ch. vi, The slacker's nest, Detective Jones and Siree Bob
ch. vii, Contrarian asshole, Arthur Rimjaub
ch. viii, Bignose 2 (third room), 20th Century Cyberpunk
>section iii,
ch. ix, Abducted by skeletons, the mining colony, the mining colony pt. 2
ch. x, Slavoj erotica, dog and Rhinestone cowboy
ch. xi, Three Tripfags, O star of many beauties (puckered asshole)
ch. xii, Mega City 4

Part II
>section i
ch. i, Explanation of hypersphere and hyperspace, Hypercube, Subchap1 (Menhearently...)
ch. ii, Puerile King intro, Excerpts real and fake from Wilkenssburg's journal, fraudery disclaimer, Puerile King Diary 1, Ephemeral Golden Age, I like Isis, Excerpt from W. 2, PK Diary 2
ch. iii, Matrix review, ad hominem captain, story summary, Trump awakens, PKD 3, W. 2, Shakyamuni, All sense is lost
ch. iv, Detective Jones 2
ch. v, Sagacious King memo, PKD 4, Sagacious email to PK, Trump and the ninth room
ch. vi, Brucie Wucie
>section ii
ch. vii, Nixon and Trump, Pubescent King Diary, third room skeletons, Prudent King Diary, Nixon and his son
ch. viii, Russian alien pods, hyperniggas in the third room (death of D Nuffin)
ch. x, Inspector Friedrich Dawkins and Detective Thomas Jefferson
ch. xi, Princess PowerP-chan
ch. xii, Luger Foucalt 1
ch. xiii, Bottles 1-12
ch. xiv, Jonestown 2k17, Diary of Phoebe Caulfield, climate change
ch. xv, Reason for Bottles, Serbian Bottle Market
ch. xvi, Slovak on Tour
>section iii
ch. xvii, Why we type, Bryce the Coward, short blue poem
ch. xviii, To George Newman (lab instructions)
ch. xix, Emma Zizek Diary, "Because I could not stop for hyperspeed"
ch. xx, Takbir Taskforce (enter Ben bin Al-Aflecki)
ch. xxi, Harold D. Munch
ch. xxii, font thoughts, "Nature doesn't recognize cruelty", "implying whites can't suffer"
>section iiv
ch. xxiii, The Rape of the Lock, schoolgirl Sappho
ch. xxiv, Red Spider Mite, Garrison Keillor DOTA2
ch. xxv, Top secret classified intro
ch. xxvi, TFW no jutsu, Reptilians and conspiracies, Camel, Nelson Mandela
ch. xxvii, William Buckley, Hulk Hogan 1
ch. xxviii, Chapter alphabet

Parts 1 and 2 are really the only wonky-looking ones. Huge leap from 2>3 in terms of formatting and focus

>> No.7256024

>>7256013
Holy shit, thank you.

>> No.7256155

While I'm at it,

Part III
>section i
ch. i, Ayy Lmao
ch. ii, Hulk Hogan 2, Riko and Maki, Ayy Lmao recs, Bryce the Second, Hulk Hogan 2 reprise
ch. iii, Ch9/11 2 (first was W. Buckley), Letter to Oxford Girl, Hulk Hogan 3 (it's just Hulk Hogan 1 again?)
ch. iv, Divisible Thirds
ch. v, kill me fam (enter Timmy Tingler), Bottles Return
ch. vi, Before the royal gala
>section ii
ch. vii, Emma Diary, PD-81 instructions
ch. viii, Berryman Logical Imaging Technique
ch. ix, "Why not try to write something good", Fat Man and Little Boy, oriental supremacy
ch. x, Anonymous collective shitpost
ch. xi, In Which A Space Marine...
ch. xii, the role of bottles in a Christmas tree
>section iii
ch. xiii, Dawn of the Final Day (masketta man)
ch. xiv, Dear Diary, Author's Diary, "you didn't build that"
ch. xv, Red Ropes of Mars
ch. xvi, ISIS fight Captain America
ch. xvii, Meanwhile in the Netherrealm (Wucie)
ch. xviii, Interlude: collect the blood, i'm in hella pain, Buzzfeed Social Anxiety Hacks
>section iv
ch. xix, Luger Foucalt 2
ch. xx, A guide for when you're in the fucking hypersphere, So you're in fucking hyperspace, the giants of the west
ch. xxi, Scene Change
ch. xxii, Sam Murphy Jonestown Massacre
ch. xxiii, generousbuisnessjewISRL
ch. xxiv, Prof. Ozymandias Mansnake 1
>section v
ch. xxv, Bertrand Russell investigations
ch. xxvi, Skeleton island/skeletons vs captain ad hominem
ch. xxvii, Hyperspherical Poetry, Ext. Prison-Day-Past
ch. xxviii, Damian's story
ch. xxix, Dust
ch. xxx, Emma Zizek (Big T with the Big D)
>section vi
ch. xxxi, hyperspace, Ant chapter
ch. xxxii, wrapping up bottles for christmas, Hephaestus

>> No.7256191

>>7256013
>>7256155
This is impressive, Anon.

>> No.7256299

Reminder that Emma Zizek got herself pregnant with Bern (Bernie Sanders), who Trump was certain she would raise to overthrow him

>>7256024
no problem

Part IV
>section i
ch. i, (no bingo), Poureth out of foolishness (bad marriage), Chuck Pahlaniuk
ch. ii, Waiting Room 1 (Chomsky, Zinn, Hitchens), On Culture and Comfiness
ch. iii, Det. Jones 3
ch. iv, Othersong, "Swing, Aelius!", Ben bin Allahflakes 2
>section ii
ch. v, Bottle Intermission
ch. vi, Message from Corporate Control Central, Worship Nascar, AudioRec transcription
ch. vii, Good Old Fenian Range
ch. viii, Aelius Maximus, Bottleman on Aelius
ch. ix, 4-teen (Bruce and Det. Jones), your head it swurls, One day the FBI..., Jhonn
ch. x, Dick Michigan, On the Sidewalk
ch. xi, nonchapter, everychapter
ch. xii, Killer Queen B, Alphabet of Ass, Varroa Mite
ch. xiii, Agony Aunt
ch. xiv, Editor's note, Buckley and Vidal 1
>section iii
ch. xv, wordwall, tender nothingness
ch. xvi, Le Moral Man, Bottleman apology, "It is collapsing", Russian/Japanese, "Place this hyperskin upon my hypermind", Cat ownership
ch. xvii, F.A.M (Tingler 2)
ch. xviii, The spirit of our time is indignation (origin of Dr. Hijo Maize)
ch. xix, The trouble with England, one-dimensional poem, Critical response to "heart lined with knives", Last of the Space-Mexicans (redacted with credits)
ch. xx, Borges mirror spoof, Sierpinski gasket
ch. xxi, Emma-Trump email correspondence
ch. xxii, never unwanted, Mypecuthers 1
ch. xxiii, burry burry them all, Norman Mailer's mind, Vocaroo cringethread, Trump sex chapter
ch. xxiv, Our quest continues., Last of the Space-Mexicans 2/Trump disappears from existence
>section iv
ch. xxv, "(what's the difference anyway?"), formatting has gone awry, flavor country
ch. xxvi, Sexual Harassment Policy, "I wanna talk to you", Marry a waitress (Frasier)
ch. xxvii, Ant chapter 2
ch. xxviii, When the bombs fell, SOME MORE, Musical interlude (Etude 16)
ch. xxix, to whom it never concerns (zodiac)
ch. xxx, Buckley and Vidal 2, Hypersphere Blues,
ch. xxxi, hypergatory, Scene Change 2
ch. xxxii, Memaw 1
ch. xxxiii, Tenth room/tenth page, "what kinda room do you want fam?" (hella pain/Ant 3/Tingler 3), Life in the Netherrealms (D Nuffin/Fanshen 1)
ch. xxxiv, W. Journal 3, Trump minutes
>section v
ch. xxxv, Memaw 2
ch. xxxvi, S'Jara
ch. xxxvii, 15 Facts about Infinite Jest. c+p'd mentalfloss article

>> No.7256336

Part I ~14 pages (17 before editing)
Part II ~50
Part III ~70
Part IV ~100

Part V (the most long stories, the longest short stories and the fewest small inbetween pieces): ~135 and counting. Damn

>>7256191
thanks

>> No.7256344

Newfag here, what is this and how can I read it, in the right order?

>> No.7256391

>>7256344

Here:
Part 1 (REVISION): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TIdoWxLOs7tVlO8MHISFAm1stJ7FEta-fL0dBe88J1g/edit?usp=sharing
Part 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cZU53DxV4I5-AvdzwTRMp1sick80VuFRHEkUolK1vvE/edit
Part 3: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11rUoy3gqL2ERiZscfc5cWrt8uMNykOTLi45rG3sbJks/edit
Part 4: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IVWhcB7ZOgM-fSNypkSsahx2tU1tvNCZ7VOrp4zn5kjI/edit?pli=1
Part 5: (IN CONTINUATION): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qvlkrn0P_0z4JOp4oJ9L9dKq0I382bAQqAbnLtNsmhM/edit

>> No.7256441

>>7256013
>>7256155
>>7256299
I am in awe of you, anon, and also just how ridiculous/ambitious the whole mess looks in summary form.

>> No.7256448

>>7256391
Thanks, bro. Looks like someone messed up the first link.

>> No.7256557

>>7256391
>Part 1
lmao who did this

>> No.7257804

>>7236283
bump

>> No.7258103
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Woke up in the middle of the night impelled to rewrite part of Gewehr Foucault's story. Namely making him a sort of ladykiller making his son Luger's impotency as a man all the more tragic. (As fated by his Virgin Conception)

>> No.7258107

>>7236283
Guys should we discuss themes with the ending coming up?

I feel roughly there's some heavy absurdist/nihilist overtones, a lot of stuff dealing with personal identity and a weird anti-capitalist message. That's just from stuff I've written and read though. Any more?

>> No.7258845

>>7256391
The part 4 link doesn't work for me, here's one that hopefully does:
https://docs.google.com/document/u/1/d/1IVWhB7ZOgM-fSNypkSsahx2tU1tvNCZ7VOrp4zn5kjI/edit?usp=docs_home

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>>7256336
The letter to Rousseau and Kolsti's note should be used strategically to break things up.

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>>7236283
bump