Poetry

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Poetry Anonymous Mon Sep 14 11:47:41 2015 No.7114386 [Reply] [Original]

I made this poem a couple days ago and it has yet to get any attention. Please, let me know what you all think.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 14 11:56:18 2015 No.7114409 >>7114386 Please take some time to learn metre.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 14 12:00:43 2015 No.7114426 >>7114409 Are you referring to line breaks or meters?

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 14 12:00:49 2015 No.7114427 >>7114409 Meter hasn't meant shit since romanticism.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 14 12:45:13 2015 No.7114541 File: 57 KB, 486x651, Screenshot from 2015-08-21 10:07:36.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I wrote a poem too. Pls read and rate.

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 14 12:49:15 2015 No.7114557 File: 57 KB, 496x750, 1436230106722.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Really sophomoric but keep writing and reading and you'll get better. >tfw all I write is found poetry

>>	Anonymous Mon Sep 14 12:51:08 2015 No.7114562 >>7114427 anon I'm afraid to tell you but you're stupid

Anonymous Mon Sep 14 13:04:31 2015 No.7114588

>>7114427

Read Timothy Steele's book on Modernism. Modernism's central concern is form. The modernists don't use classical form, as in iambs and rhymes, but they knew their meter. Or, you know, actually read some Eliot and Pound essays.

A lot of major modernists worked in meter in the traditional sense, though it was often partial. See: Frost, H.D, Bogan, Crane, Cummings, Eliot, Stevens, Thomas, Auden, Bunting, Owen, Larkin, Plath, Bishop, Lowell...

You're truly a pleb if you think meter doesn't mean anything after the romantics.

Anonymous Mon Sep 14 18:15:22 2015 No.7115601

My latest creation:

Urethra, I'm beneath her;
she's sitting on my face.
The muscles, contorting;
for piss myself I brace.

My throat is at attention;
my hands, stretched left and right.
Enveloping her giant ass;
her folds cause me no fright;

A discharge - is splashing
and bouncing off my tongue.
Inside of me its flushing;
all around its being flung.

I think there's somthing brewing,
an extra chewy goo.
I hope in just a moment
my mouth will fill with pooh.

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