I am trying to make an awful story. Please help me make this worse and decide if I should continue.

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Randy Sandwhiches Sat Sep 5 03:54:43 2015 No.7074050 [Reply] [Original]

I am trying to make an awful story. Please help me make this worse and decide if I should continue.

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 5 04:00:55 2015 No.7074058 You probably don't need to do this. Just use some of your regular writing instead.

Anonymous Sat Sep 5 04:06:33 2015 No.7074063

>>7074050
Dialog isn't nearly autistic enough.

The humor is actually somewhat coherent and even clever on the last line.

The opening is pure trash, though, so good job there.

Descriptions are pretty bad, grammar is occasionally wonky. You're on the right track, I'd say.

>>	Randy Sandwhiches Sat Sep 5 04:10:59 2015 No.7074072 Instead of thank you I am going to say fuck you >>7074063 Fuck you Keep going or?

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 5 05:49:51 2015 No.7074202 >>7074050 You're going to make something so awful it's impressive and then regarded as good; an achievement of awful

>>	Anonymous Sat Sep 5 06:00:03 2015 No.7074215 >>7074072 keep going please

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