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682713 No.682713 [Reply] [Original]

what do you guise think of my poem

THIS IS JUST TO SAY

I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold

>> No.682719

best

>> No.682720

I can't help but think of it coming out of Hitler's mouth because of your pic. You should call it Domestic Nazi Bliss.

>> No.682725

hi william carlos williams. or should i say, zombie william carlos williams?

>> No.682728

it's absolute garbage

>> No.682732
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682732

ALLL ABOOOOOOOOOARD THE TROLLERCOASER EVERYBODY

>> No.682904

I hate all you idiots who can't appreciate that academically acclaimed poets don't write super-cerebral dense shit all the time.

>> No.682999

what do you think of my poem, OP?

so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens.

>> No.683011

>>682999
samefag here.

i was really nervous about showing it to anybody.

did you like it?

>> No.683030

>>683011
Is it because the wheel barrow is used to transport the chickens after you've slaughtered them?

>> No.683070

What is a man? Miserable
little pile of
secrets strewn lazily,
lustful sheen glinting
in sun our
golden horde.

>> No.683079

wonder
friends in the light of a new morrow
we will follow the sun
until it becomes unbearable

sweat on our backs...
the ecstasy of defeat...

will bring us home...

>> No.683084

did anyone else notice that op's poem is actually written by william carlos williams? just sayin'.

>> No.683088

>>683070
It's like Dracula wrote a Flaming Lips song.

>> No.683090

>>683011
Copy-paste much? Published poem is published

>> No.683105

>>683088
Compliment? Or rebuttal. I'll take the first and skip the seconed