/lit/ - Literature

[Anonymous No.6686971]

I finished my book. It's 130,000 pages long.

[Anonymous No.6686979]

>>6686971
it's bad isn't it

[Anonymous No.6686981]

>>6686979
No, it's okay.

I meant 130,000 words, I'm sorry. My OP probably sounded like a joke, but I'm really content right now.

[Anonymous No.6686989]

>>6686981

Care to share ? What's it about ?

[Anonymous No.6686990]

>>6686981
I thought it was a joke.

[Anonymous No.6687001]

>>6686989
It's about a magical surgeon girl and her friend and their adventures in a (this) post-apocalyptic world.

[Anonymous No.6687012]

>>6687001
Seems really well thought out, I hope it does well.

[Anonymous No.6687018]

>>6687012
T-thank you, anon.

[Anonymous No.6687047]

>>6687018
Hey anon. That seems like a fun book. Would there be any way to get a signed copy?

Love, me

[Anonymous No.6687054]

>>6687001
Seems like you put a lot of work into this. How long have you been writing? Will you try to get it published?

[Anonymous No.6687056]

>>6687001
Sounds dumb but at least you wrote a book and did something you really enjoyed, more than I can say.

Still sounds retarded tho

[Anonymous No.6687059]

>>6687001
So is there an actual story to it or is it literally just LOL LETS GO ADVENTURING XD

[Anonymous No.6687062]

>>6687047
I h-haven't published it or anything yet. I finished it at around 4 am this morning and I don't really know what to do.

>>6687054
I've been writing it since I was 14. I started the current draft when I was 16. I'm 18 now.

>>6687056
t-thanks anon

[Anonymous No.6687065]

>>6687059
>LOL LETS GO ADVENTURING XD
what's wrong with that?

[Anonymous No.6687070]

>>6687059
T-they're trying to stop the ancient remnants of France from taking over the world.

[Anonymous No.6687075]

>>6687070
is there a Napoleon equivalent in your story?

[Anonymous No.6687079]

Seems pretty autistic but good job nonetheless.

[Anonymous No.6687080]

>>6686971
Good. Now read it.

[Anonymous No.6687081]

Some googling revealed this

http://4chandata.org/lit/I039m-writing-a-first-person-science-fantasy-adventure-novel-about-a-magical-surgeon-girl-who-goes-on-adventures-with-her-unlikely-a597376

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UrasBxiMQKSIfLmpsSeDE7jMzatp4k3rdauLz8V043E/edit?pli=1

[Anonymous No.6687082]

>>6687075
No, the enemy as it is is a horde of Southern soldiers with ancient forgotten technology. The antagonist itself won't show up until the next book.

>>6687081
uwaa!!!!

[Anonymous No.6687112]

>>6687081
This is surprisingly competent.

[Anonymous No.6687146]

>>6687062
>>6687081
So is this that draft? How much has changed?

[Anonymous No.6687163]

>>6687112
T-thank you, anon!

>>6687146
N-no, it's the current draft. The first draft is almost an entirely different story.

[Anonymous No.6687171]

>>6687001
I'd rather you worked as a game designer in BioWare, Obsidian, Bethesda or some other major company.

I don't understand why's "lore" appealing in written texts. I don't enjoy lore-laden genre literature, but games feel fine enough. I'm aware that there are a lot of people who like fantasy fiction novels, but I don't know, I'd be much happier if your project was that of a game.

[Anonymous No.6687181]

>>6687171
I don't have the resources to make a game. I plan to one day, though, if anyone would indulge me.

[Anonymous No.6687190]

>>6687181
Anyway, this 130k word novel and the detailed fictional universe of yours could be a good incentive for companies to hire you. I'd say, pursue that career. Study game design or something similar if you can.

[Anonymous No.6687195]

>>6687181
How did you manage to write that much? I find it impossible to write more than a paragraph at a time.

Also, how did you build the whole plot? How do you integrate (or resist the temptation to) all the subplots / ideas you come up with while thinking about your world?

Also, how did you make the map? I find it impossible to decide on the geography.

[Anonymous No.6687222]

>>6687062
>Gamenkat kil lang.
:^)
>Oieykaie yieieoeoeie.
Ayy lmaooo
>Mahammadir
Saleel al sawarim

My question is... Is there any "theme"? I mean, this world obviously parallels our world. But is it a metaphor? Or is it just a copycat?

[Anonymous No.6687225]

>>6687195
>How did you manage to write that much? I find it impossible to write more than a paragraph at a time.
I wrote that over two years. When I wrote, though, I wrote ten pages a day.

>Also, how did you build the whole plot? How do you integrate (or resist the temptation to) all the subplots / ideas you come up with while thinking about your world?
The entire novel is made of subplots. Each person who speaks has a story of his own and a world to match it. I've set everything completely impossible to bring up aside, and I put the most minor interesting bits into the intermissions.

>Also, how did you make the map? I find it impossible to decide on the geography.
It's a real-life place, so I never had issues with geography.

>>6687190
I have a very specific concept for a game in my mind, and there wouldn't be a way for me to do it for someone else. It's worth an idea, though.

>>6687222
It's set five thousand years in the future.

[Anonymous No.6687238]

>>6687222
>>6687225
A-also, 's' is a sun letter, so it's 'as-sawarim'.

[Anonymous No.6687247]

>>6687238
Yeah, they indeed say "saleel as-sawarim", but I thought "saleel al sawarim" would be more memetic since most Youtube videos are either named "Saleel Sawarim" or "Saleel al Sawarim".

>>6687225
Then it'll be difficult to find funding and workforce to make your game. Go for it, if you have the resources though.

Also, on a general level, why do you speak like shy anime people?

[Anonymous No.6687254]

>>6687247
>why do you speak like shy anime people?
I'm a shy anime person.

[Anonymous No.6687274]

>>6687254
OK, so...

You still haven't answered my older question. I mean... Do you point out anything important about the real world in the book? How does your universe function as a commentary of the world and time we live in? What role does your novel carry? Does it exsist in order to entertain? To teach? To imitate? To criticize?

[Anonymous No.6687295]

>>6687225

Would you like reading a paragraph from my work in progress? My world is about elves mostly, it's entirely fictional.

[Anonymous No.6687303]

>>6687274
It is what it is.

>>6687295
Honestly, I'm a really principled and picky critic. I'm worried I might bully you on accident.

I wouldn't mind trying, though.

[Anonymous No.6687306]

>>6687303
Okay, here goes.

Surul, suma vìeţilor a nenumăraţì elfì, a mâìnilor lor pline de noroì, spălate apoì de apă, apoì în aer şi în fum zbenguinde, nostalgia unor pâlpâirì de făcliì nu prèa îndepărtate, casele altora, mister de traì necunoscut adăpostit de limita canalelor fastùate de atâtèa şi atâtèa bărcì, fiecare cu scop proprìu ce putèa fi ghicit privind pe ceì vâslinzì: straìe, fie colorate, fie cenuşiì, cârpe de tot felul acoperind pòate mărfurì valoròase, doì cupiţì împărţind un drum, un singuratic gondolier amăgindu-se şi el cu astfel de depărtărì, scene imposibile zilniculuì.

[Anonymous No.6687310]

>>6687306
That isn't Romanian, anon.

[Anonymous No.6687312]

>>6687001
I'm gonna steal this for my novel but change some names around because I hate doing world building, hope you don't mind. Thanks anon.

[Anonymous No.6687315]

>>6687310

It is Romanian, with my own spelling reform. It's now way more accurate from a phonetical point of view. :)

[Anonymous No.6687316]

>>6687312
I-I'd prefer if you didn't ch-change anything, b-but okay.

[Anonymous No.6687321]

>>6687001
congrats, bro. All the best to you.

[Anonymous No.6687335]

>>6687315
W-well, whatever it is, I think it's a bit too condensed. T-that's just my opinion, though!

[Anonymous No.6687338]

>>6687001
>>6687062
You're made a world more complex than the majority of fantasy I've read - maybe you should stop selling it as a magical surgeon girl's adventure. Unless that's really all these is to it.

[Anonymous No.6687342]

>>6687335
Wait, you understand Romanian?

[Anonymous No.6687349]

>>6687338
OP said "The entire novel is made of subplots. Each person who speaks has a story of his own and a world to match it. I've set everything completely impossible to bring up aside, and I put the most minor interesting bits into the intermissions".
So it seems that's not all there is to it.

[Anonymous No.6687354]

>>6687316
Too late.

Just made my main character, he's Prince Alfonso the Blue, heir to The Baroum Emirate.

[Anonymous No.6687356]

>>6687001
Sounds retarded honestly. Which of course means it'll probably get published.

[Anonymous No.6687357]

>>6687225
>Each person who speaks has a story of his own and a world to match it
This looks like a loli ASOIAF...

I LOVE IT. Whenever you publish it, don't forget to post here on /lit/ and on /a/.

[Anonymous No.6687358]

I want a copy of your book, OP.

It comes with maps, right?

[Anonymous No.6687362]

>>6687001
>magical surgeon girl
Bonesaw?

[Anonymous No.6687367]

>>6687303
"It is what it is". OK then, let me confront you with two different questions.

Why did you write the novel and build the lore?
Why did you share it with us?

[Anonymous No.6687370]

>>6687225
>>6687357
OP, you should name the first novel as "A game of Lolis"

[Anonymous No.6687371]

>>6687362
>Bonesaw

[Anonymous No.6687373]

>>6687367
It's obviously made to entertain, you nit-picking autist.

Jesus christ, what a buzzkill.

[Anonymous No.6687376]

>>6687225
>>6687357

I hear Amazon will publish anything these days.

[Anonymous No.6687381]

>>6687373
OP didn't say so. My question included "entertainment" as a reason.

Why do you care anyway (I'm guessing that you're not OP since you didn't attach any anime girls)?

[Anonymous No.6687386]

Hey, I remember you from way back! You posted the first chapter here.

[Anonymous No.6687390]

>>6687367
The best thing in games like Dark Souls is that the devs give some hints in the item description and let the player/userbase create the lore around it.

It gives this mystery feeling that everybody loves speculate about.

[Anonymous No.6687391]

>>6686971
Aww, they're such good friends. I wish I had a Pepe friend.

[Anonymous No.6687394]

>>6687381
Because this is a literature board, so it shouldn't be hard to infer from an anime-posting, stutter-typing anon's fantasy book about magical loli doctors in the post-apocalypse that it's supposed to be for entertainment.

[Anonymous No.6687400]

>>6687001
>2015
>not living in Amant, Lil (look south)

[Anonymous No.6687404]

>>6687062
Can you talk like a normal person? Your "h-haven't" shit is really starting to irritate me. Good luck with your book.

[Anonymous No.6687413]

>>6687390
Sounds like Lost, Half-Life or Twitch Plays Pokémon.

Still, I enjoy explicitly lore based games too, like Neverwinter Nights 2: Mask of the Betrayer.

>>6687394
That would be my first inferrence. But I am somehow baffled at the effort OP put in it (the good visual design of the maps, the linguistic knowledge apparent from even warning me about Arabic phonetic relations, the evident information on general world history). So I'm trying to understand how all these fit in.

[Anonymous No.6687424]

>>6687394
Stutter posting can also mean someone just read/is reading Gravity's Rainbow cuz Pinecone uses some stuttering dialogue and narration there.

Though he wrote an animu inspired fantasy book so probably not.

[Anonymous No.6687428]

>>6687413
If I'm remembering this correctly it takes place in a future Europe thats been taken over by Muslims. The map's also in the shape of the Mediterranean Sea. It was a good first chapter too.

[Anonymous No.6687431]

Why is the map the sea?

[Anonymous No.6687436]

>>6687431
Because semen stains the mountaintops.

[Anonymous No.6687443]

>>6687428
Huh. I hadn't noticed that it was the Mediterranean, thank you for telling. Now that I look, everything is clear, Italy, Greece and Sea of Marmara.

[Anonymous No.6687461]

>>6687001
This map looked cool until I actually tried to read it. God I hate it when fantasy shoves in a bunch of weird ass words I don't know how to pronounce. Also the fonts fucking small.

It looks cool though, hope it's not generic.

[Anonymous No.6687520]

OP, how many languages do you know or can fluently communicate with?

[Anonymous No.6687549]

>1984-tier length fantasy book describing adventures of a magical surgeon grill, probably w/ some godawful prose
yeah, sounds like a lot of pain, you might get published.

[Anonymous No.6687564]

>>6687062
Did you build each language? That must have taken a lot of time

[Anonymous No.6687693]

>>6687001
Looks like that fan map of the homeworld universe.
>>6687062
I was going to complain that Mandarin Chinese has no words like Yanjyin or Zhanghwazh. But I see this isn't Mandarin Chinese so, okay then.

[Anonymous No.6687710]

>Book begins with a fictional map

[Anonymous No.6687855]

so this is a loli adventure fantasy?

where can i read it?

[Anonymous No.6687897]

>>6687001
Hey I remember you posting about this a couple years ago. Congrats on finally finishing it.

[Anonymous No.6687919]

I read legend of the 10 elemental masters and enjoyed it, so this looks like a spiritual brother in autism level.

Let us know when its published Anon i will buy a copy.

At the very least do a small self publish

[Anonymous No.6687932]

Holy crap, how did you manage to write a whole novel?

I've been wanting to start for ages but starting itself is a ball ache.

As soon as I get a concept down, another setting catches my interest.

I started on laying the foundations for a Sci-Fi book but lately I've felt drawn to fantasy. None of my ideas seem to appeal to me for longer than a few weeks.

How did you come up with & choose an idea you found it so easy to stick with? Or am I mistaken in assuming it was easy to stick with.

[Anonymous No.6687996]

>>6687710
Dune did that

Some bibles do it with depictions of what the Israelites believed the world to be

[Anonymous No.6688002]

>>6687932
I'm not OP. I think, if you don't desire to write a particular book, you really are better off not writing at all.

Just fill yourself with other people's texts until you yearn to produce that particular work that is special to you.

[Anonymous No.6688003]

[Anonymous No.6688026]

>>6688002
Strangely enough, I dislike the idea of reading at the moment as I find there's not much out there that interests me, which is why I wanna create something of my own.

Its not to say I never read or that I've never created, I've always loved crafting stories although I often did it in unorthodox and rather pathetic ways(Dictating to my mum as a young child and Role Playing).

I want to make the jump to doing serious things, however I'm unsure of how.

[Anonymous No.6688073]

>>6687001
That map looks like you just squashed the major world regions together onto an island. Why are your characters having an adventure?

[Anonymous No.6688075]

>>6687520
this, i want to know

[Anonymous No.6688081]

when you could have surmised it all with one word: fag.

[Anonymous No.6688091]

>>6688026
I see, but, as I told earlier... If you're unsure how, maybe this is not the moment for you to start something of a higher level. You had better wait and observe until something gets you agitated. It doesn't have to be one particular thing - maybe the whole spectrum of your experience will seem noteworthy after surpassing a point. Right now, you want to write something, but you don't know what it is. You may get answers if you ask people "tell me some plot and theme, maybe I'll write", but that won't be personally yours, and I doubt the product would turn out good. So, rather than something half, something inexistent is better for everyone. Just wait until you're full.

[Anonymous No.6688111]

Hold on, cool map and all whatever

but

is it actually 130,000 fucking pages?! What??

[Anonymous No.6688117]

>>6688111
>>6686981
Come on, it's in the second post.

[Anonymous No.6688123]

>>6688117
Oh, okay, my bad. In that case, good job OP!

[Anonymous No.6688456]

>>6687001

oh god you fell into middle-school core

that's embarassing

[Anonymous No.6688601]

>>6687710
It's the Mediterranean.

[Anonymous No.6688638]

>>6688456
Oh shit, is all of this "middle-school core"? Better start rethinking my map.

[Anonymous No.6688745]

>>6687062
Inverted mediterranean much?
Congrats on finishing.

[Anonymous No.6688752]

>>6687342
A little.

>>6687358
It w-will, I think, when I publish it!

>>6687357
I hate ASOIAF and have never read a single page, even though I've spent hours poring through its wiki pages and learning its lore and watching GoT. It inspires me to make something better.

>>6687370
T-there's only two lolis, n-no bully.

>>6687520
Mandarin Chinese and French, b-but I have a working understanding of the grammar of most Indo-European languages, a conceptual understanding of the Semitic languages and a vernacular understanding of three Chinese fangyan. I can't speak them, obviously, but it's good enough for fantasy.

>>6687855
see
>>6687081

>>6687932
I had months where I didn't write a single word.

>>6688745
I-it's set in the hollowed-out husk of the Mediterranean Sea.

[Anonymous No.6688765]

>>6688123
>>6688111
T-thanks, anon!

[Anonymous No.6688774]

>>6688638
10/10
unless this is a spicy repost meme

in which case 8/10

[Anonymous No.6688790]

>>6688752
What would keep people down in the em
pty basin? Why not settle in italy? >>66887

[Anonymous No.6688823]

>>6687081
i see present tense writing...

[Anonymous No.6688830]

>>6688790
The only atmosphere that exists, and the only reason breathing is possible, is projected by the Tower up to the heights of the Insurmountables. This is referred to in passing in scenery descriptions.

Also, it's cool.

>>6688456
I was in middle school when I made that map.

[Anonymous No.6688859]

>>6687081
Downloaded. Submitting to a publisher ASAP. Wish me luck guys.

[Anonymous No.6688865]

>>6688859
i anticipated this, which is why it's got my name embedded in a cypher throughout the text

[Anonymous No.6688876]

>>6688865
We'll see if that hold up in court bub. I've got 50,000 to drop on the case. This book is mine.

[Anonymous No.6688889]

>>6688876
Why do you want it so much? I don't know English too well, but the prose didn't even seem very good.

[Anonymous No.6688892]

>>6688876
i was actually born into privilege a-and $50,000 is a minute sum of money to me i k-know my writing isn't good enough to steal anyway s-so i love you anon

[Anonymous No.6688899]

>>6688892
So you're the wealthy conceited spoiled nerdy prodigy child trope we're used to see on films? Interesting.

What would make you give me 50k$? I could do almost anything for you, in return for 50k$ a year.

[Anonymous No.6688901]

>>6688889
I don't I just want to fuck with the weaboo Literally ;) >>6688892

[Anonymous No.6688904]

>>6688901
OK.

[Anonymous No.6688910]

>>6687001
I've seen you post this map before!

[Anonymous No.6688912]

>>6688899
Be a cute boy or girl and love me truly and unconditionally forever.

[Anonymous No.6688942]

>>6688912
Will you demand proof? If so, how?

I'm serious. Don't play with my desperation please. I can even start anime-posting for your approval and support.

[Anonymous No.6688945]

>>6688752
why do you abuse spoiler text and type like a faggot?

[Anonymous No.6688947]

I hope Tallis doesn't see this thread.

[Anonymous No.6688957]

>>6688912
I'm 100% sure it's completely shit because OP types like an actual fucking autist and avatarfags with moeweebshit lolis

[Anonymous No.6688959]

>>6688947
>Tallis
what, the dragon age character

[Anonymous No.6688960]

>>6688957
Where there is even the possibility of money, there I am.

[Anonymous No.6688964]

>>6688957
You don't have to assume, there's a google docs link ITT of a draft. It's fantasy garbage.

[Anonymous No.6688967]

>>6688959
No, the Arab qt patrician.

[Anonymous No.6688972]

>>6687081
Sorry OP for posting this. Did it out of interest for the map which I thought looked professional. Wasn't thinking about how people might bully or steal.

[Anonymous No.6688988]

>>6688972
I-it's okay! B-bullying is part of life.

[Anonymous No.6688998]

>>6688988
god I wish you would stop being such a fucking insufferable faggot

[Anonymous No.6689004]

>>6688988
W-why don't you answer me? o(╥﹏╥)o >>6688942

Gib moni onegaiiii

[Anonymous No.6689013]

>>6689004
Your ancestry isn't good enough!! I'm sorry!!!

[Anonymous No.6689017]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UrasBxiMQKSIfLmpsSeDE7jMzatp4k3rdauLz8V043E/edit?pli=1

>“You're a little, uh, young to be doing this kinda thing, right?” He scratches his neck as he speaks in his immigrant-tinged Uytrimelan. “I, uh, got to you because the guys said you're, uh, the go-to guy, uh, girl for this sorta thing.” I get ready to make an incision, rubbing the area gently with some antiseptic solution. He seems Aimelan, but it seems like a fair precaution.

This book is shit.

[Anonymous No.6689021]

>>6689013
W-why do you think my ancestory is bad?

How do you know?
Let's work this out.

[Anonymous No.6689036]

>>6689017
>“I, uh, got to you because the guys said you're, uh, the go-to guy, uh, girl for this sorta thing.”
holy fuck

[Anonymous No.6689050]

>>6687001
>>6687062
Anon this looks fantastic. What's it called so we I ow when it's released.

[Anonymous No.6689063]

>>6689050
U-uh, the name of the whole thing is 'Ocilentra', but I'm not sure what the book itself is going to be called yet.

[Anonymous No.6689072]

>>6689063
shit better get published fan, I wanna read it

is it kiddy style hair or is like ASOIAF sex and Gore?

[Anonymous No.6689089]

>>6689072
It's very moe.

[Anonymous No.6689097]

>>6689063
Huh, you're still ignoring me (I'm the money guy).

I'm starting to suspect that you are in fact not of privilege.
Have some live-action, rude person.

[Anonymous No.6689098]

>>6688945
Judging from his use of anime images, spoilers and stuttering he's probably from /v/. They talk like that all the time over there. It's super fucking annoying.

[Anonymous No.6689102]

>>6689097
I don't negotiate with terrorists.

[Anonymous No.6689123]

>>6689102
Why do you assume that I'm a terrorist? Do not lie. Do not resort to memes. Please, if you are going to, sincerely and honestly dismiss me, pointing out your reasons, whatever they are.

[Anonymous No.6689144]

>>6689123
We're shitposters off 4chan. It would never work out.

[Anonymous No.6689160]

>>6689144
You don't seem to want to believe me, but with money, it could work out, whatever you're planning. I'm not a 4chan shitposter anyway, I lurk /lit/, that's all.
You said it was a minute sum of money. Why all this reluctance? You don't have to ask for anything colossal anyway. Just give, and demand some kind of satisfactory reward for yourself.

[Anonymous No.6689169]

>>6689160
It's my father's money, not mine. I don't want to ask him to finance shitposting.

[Anonymous No.6689179]

>>6689017
>>6689036

[Anonymous No.6689194]

>>6689169
As I said, I'm not a shitposter. Beyond that, you won't be supporting shitposting, you'll be supporting what you'll get in exchange. You tell me what to do with the money (apart from spending it for basic needs like sheltering and nourishment), and if I agree, deal happens. We could at least negotiate. If it is indeed a minute sum, I'm sure it won't be too difficult for you to convince him, so, the only one who needs to be persuaded is you right now.
It's simple. You don't lose anything - just a trivial amount. I win a lot. And you win something too, just ask me. What's wrong with this?
My loyalty is to myself, and I need money. If you need trust, there it is. You can trust me that I will stay loyal to myself, and the money you give.

[Anonymous No.6689239]

>>6689194
Money is an impure motivation, though.

[Anonymous No.6689243]

>>6687710
I have a copy of Ulysses that has a map of Dublin in it.

[Anonymous No.6689297]

>>6689239
Huh? Non-anime attachment?
Anyway.

Money could be an impure motivation (which is actually irrelevant), but my actual goal is not money. I don't desire excess money. I solely yearn to live the NEET life I've always adored. I want respite from wageslavery. A dollar is worth triple in my country - you can't imagine what $50k means to me. That would suffice to keep me going on without doing anything for years, in a village. Is this motivation impure too? To part ways with the captivity that comes with societal relationships, while not relinquishing my most basic comfort standards? Even if it IS unseemly, please be understanding enough as to grant me my wish. You lose nothing, I gain a lot. It's simple, but magically realistic. Thereby multiplies happiness and your divinity emanates in this barren world of capital and those whose mistake of existance are capitalized on.

[Anonymous No.6689315]

>>6689297
S-stop, you're making me sad. I c-can't just give money to people on the internet, anon, I'm sorry.

I g-guess have an unoccupied home in Makati s-so you can be NEET if the country you live in happens to be the Philippines, b-but that's the most I can do!

[Anonymous No.6689364]

>>6689315
>>6689297
sorry to interrupt your cringe worthy conservation but can we talk the book please?

[Anonymous No.6689369]

>>6689364
Of course! I'm cringing too, but for a different yet overlapping set of reasons.

[Anonymous No.6689417]

>>6689369
130,000 pages seems too long for something to be published. Do you plan on spiting this into multiple books?

[Anonymous No.6689425]

>>6689417
I meant words, sorry!

I originally meant to write even more into this book (up to around 300,000 words), but I recognised an opportunity to segue into the next book and decided to take it.

[Anonymous No.6689427]

>>6689315
That's a very generous offer, but as it happens with high possibility (related to world population percentages), I am not living in Philippines. I maybe could move there if my travel was funded, though. Still... I still don't understand why you can't give money to people on the internet. We'll make contact, and I'll give you a bank account and you'll apply a transfer and all will be finished. How am I, someone whose persona shines through your monitor, different from anyone who you happen to meet on the street or share a classroom in school? I am still human. For you, this shouldn't be different from giving a beggar some change you have on yourself by chance. My father, despite our low to middle class standing, knew charity. He would feed a homeless a dinner when asked for booze money, or give a needy person all the cash he carried at the moment. He didn't feel waned - he felt grown. For you, money is not a valuable material, there is no reason to leash it so ardently. It doesn't have meaning when stagnant. You seek higher values, as is apparent from the production you've given yourself to, and the learnings you've mustered. Now, maybe it is time to do something unconventional and open the gates of flood for a bedouin like me. Perhaps it will grant you immaterial luxury.
Again, I'm very grateful for your tenement offer, but I want you to know that it is not in fact difficult to give to a stranger. The only thing in the way is you, and the chains of construct wreathing your psyche.

>>6689364
I know this is against the rules of the board, but money is the master signifier of all the signs gleaming with a red tint of half an apple, among all things that my prospective plight is composed of.

[Anonymous No.6689455]

>>6689427
I don't think its a good idea to beg for money on the internet. especially 4chan of all places.

[Anonymous No.6689474]

>>6689427
I don't g-give money in general. My last act of charity was when I let a homeless person I met off /lgbt/ stay at my home in San Francisco for a month and a half before she earned enough money to live on her own. My mother has let a foreign worker stay in her unoccupied condominium in Singapore for over three years before he could buy real estate in his homeland and go back.

Pecuniary aid has never been a healthy custom.

[Anonymous No.6689476]

>>6689455
Why, what could happen? I've begged for money in worse places (worst being Omegle). Still, to no avail.

It's curious how people will give loads of money to you for scholarship, but for actual sincere reasons, they won't. I'm trying to overcome this social predicament by pushing on relentlessly.

[Anonymous No.6689518]

>>6689474
Alright, then. I pray you change one day. You can even fall for some ideology, if you like. Communism, socialism, anarchism, Buddhism, whichever's your catch. Still, benevolence doesn't have to come with ideology. Anyway, I don't have any power, I won't have any influence, so there is no reason for me to speak as I am now.

I apologize from /lit/ for the hideous series of entreaty. I wish you become successful, OP - in what I consider success.

[Anonymous No.6689533]

>>6689518
A-alright, anon. B-bye!

[Anonymous No.6689567]

someone delete this fucking weebshit cringefest thread already holy fuck

[Anonymous No.6690848]

>>6687070
Lmao that won't be hard

[Anonymous No.6691517]

Bump

[Anonymous No.6691953]

OP is everything I hate.

>stuttering weaboo faggot that probably erps
>bourgeoisie who inherited his wealth
>sounds like he's pretty bright but completely wastes his potential writing fan fiction tier novels and watching anime

[Anonymous No.6691959]

>>6691953
>OP is everything I hate
>gets attention and praise while you get none for the shit prose you write

Jealous/10

[Anonymous No.6691962]

>>6691959
>implying I write fiction

[Anonymous No.6691972]

>>6691959
>accuse others of being jealous
>include nothing about self
You're below age 20

[Anonymous No.6691979]

>>6691962
>implying anyone cares about you write, at all.

[Anonymous No.6692197]

>>6687001
So give me a comparative run down son:
1) Do the green states like Al Misr al-Purus and The Saroum Caliphate represent the Islamic world?
2) Based on the fact it's a caliphate, does Islam still exist? Do any old world religion still exist? What do the new ones believe?
3) Does the Aimelan Administration represent Rome or some other autocratic bureaucracy like the USSR or the British Empire?
4) What's with all the city states and confederations? What is politics like in this world compared to our own?
5) What's the wildlife like?
6) Is there any ongoing wars?
7) What's that brown strip of land between Aimelan?
8) Can we get a post war history into how these states came into existence?
9) What part of the world is based on? I don't recognise the shape.

[Anonymous No.6692417]

>>6691953
>STOP LIKING WHAT I DON'T LIKE REEEEE

You're not an adult.

[Anonymous No.6692593]

>>6691953
>stuttering weaboo faggot that probably erps

How is this a bad thing?

>bourgeoisie who inherited his wealth

Almost everyone would be a trust fund baby if they could.

>sounds like he's pretty bright but completely wastes his potential writing fan fiction tier novels and watching anime

There's no such thing as wasted potential if you personally find an activity meaningful.

I congratulate OP for what he's accomplished. Except for one little detail.

>qu'n'av

Two apostrophes in one word? Holy shit. Next thing you'll be telling me the Shaka analogue is called D'indu Na'feen.