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5220256 No.5220256 [Reply] [Original]

The story and the characters are so forgetable... The only remarkable thing was how they lived in the island and it wasn't fully developed...

>> No.5220281

An ellipsis is rarely needed more than once in a single passage.

>> No.5222214

I thought it was pretty good. He always seems jelly of/attracted to his alpha working class characters.

>> No.5222253

I dunno OP I'll always remember how musclebound the main character was, he really could pull ropes like no other