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Post the first line of your story, others criticise/comment on it.

>I fear I have angered the Sizwe peoples.

>> No.4782465 [DELETED] 

>"Hi. Is this seat taken?"

>> No.4782472

>My mother could see the future.

>> No.4782474

>My mind is out of place.

>> No.4782475

>I lost control, I disappeared completely.

>> No.4782484

>He had this dream about a gigantic woman asphyxiating him between the folds of her body.

>> No.4782669

>>4782472
7/10
>>4782474
7.5/10
>>4782475
8.5/10
>>4782484
8.7/10

>> No.4782747

>The stack of books at Nazzard's side seemed to cast unreasonably dark shadows.

>> No.4783167
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4783167

>I would later conclude that in a sailboat splashing along at twenty knots, heeled over 30 degrees in tumbling seas, there is no more important use of mature judgement than the consideration that then may not have been the best time to engage in oral sex.

>> No.4783199

For sale: used fleshlight, never cleaned.

>> No.4783221

And then another was coming on. The doctor asks do I know this woman, and I don’t.

>> No.4783226

>>4783167
You don't need to say 'used'. The fact that you say 'never cleaned' implies that it was used.

>> No.4783228

"Nigga what?" he said whilst rolling his blunt

>> No.4783230

Why does everyone think "good" opening lines are quirky sorandom shit?

>> No.4783234

>>4782429
8/10
>>4782472
7/10
>>4782474
7/10
>>4782475
6/10
>>4782484
6/10
>>4782747
6/10
>>4783167
7/10

>> No.4783237

>>4782429
What the fuck is up witht the special snowflake names

>> No.4783238

>>4783226
I think you meant:
>>4783199

>> No.4783453

>Dear diary.

>> No.4783466

>A mysterious loner (Rhyce Karêi) who looked like he might be a vampire arrived at the mouth of a large volcano.

>> No.4783477

I will teach you. I am the best teacher you will ever know. I have walked the Earth round thrice; I have founded countries; I have learned to sail, fly, and know a thousand reasons to run.

>> No.4783521

>>4783238
That is correct.

>> No.4784960

>>4783237
It's the beginning of a story that's written like an exaggerated journal of an 18th century explorer in Africa, but set in a fantasy-ish world.

>> No.4784963

>>4783466
is this america's next best seller?
cuz it looks like shit

>> No.4785737

>>4784963
>cuz it looks like shit

Oh come on, give it a chance. Here are a few more lines:

- “Lavafire city...” Rhyce grunted. “I haven’t been here since I last visited.”

He entered a staircase cut into the rocks, and then through some holes in the volcanic rock he noticed from the corner of his eye a green skin with scales.

- “I hate dragons…” Rhyce grunted in a here-we-go-again kind of way.

>> No.4785770

Oklahoma clouds rolled above a young Lucy Boyd, supine in Pa’s flax field and Mary beside her not talking at all, grinning at the low white skies.