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437080 No.437080 [Reply] [Original]

Three expired condoms
Are all that remain
Of a love that was
Supposed to last for
A thousand years
Like the Third Reich.
And in its glory
It was equally impressive.
Together we were like
Thousands of storm troupers
Marching in synchronicity
Amidst the awestruck
Hordes of common humanity.
The iron eagle soared,
And the massive torches blazed,
While we were steeped
In an infinite potential.
But you forced me -
My love - to die because of
Your lack of commitment
And your refusal to
Build something perfect.
Now I lie dead in
An anonymous bunker,
While you're getting
Raped by the Russians,
Raped by the Russians:
I cannot imagine
Anything more obscene.

>> No.437101

Wait, what?

>> No.437106

Grindcore lyrics.

>> No.437119

You don't need to say "like the third reich". It's obvious what you're alluding to from the rest of the poem. Also congratulations, this is better than 95% of the attempted poetry I've seen here.

>> No.437125
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437125

>>437080

>> No.437157

>>437119
>>437125

thank you both.

>> No.437259

>>437080

you win the prize.

>> No.437290

ossum