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Anonymous Fri Nov 22 23:18:03 2013 No.4296276 [DELETED]

Hello, /lit/.

Anybody feel like reading my work? It's not too long and I could really appreciate some feedback.
English would be my native language but I'm not well educated in it since I have spent most of my life in Indonesia but that's not an excuse for the quality of my writing.

Please and thank you.
https://www.mediafire.com/?b9vt0fpx9bq331u

>>	Anonymous Fri Nov 22 23:23:02 2013 No.4296285 thats not the pic i posted?

>>	Anonymous Fri Nov 22 23:50:49 2013 No.4296360 guys?

>>	Anonymous Fri Nov 22 23:53:49 2013 No.4296365 >>4296285 but it fits perfectly?

>>	Anonymous Sat Nov 23 00:20:37 2013 No.4296441 >>4296365 is that a critique on my writing or my post here?

>>	Anonymous Sat Nov 23 00:23:37 2013 No.4296448 >>4296441 your post, you can post the text here. no one is going to download shit

>>	Anonymous Sat Nov 23 00:49:08 2013 No.4296500 File: 19 KB, 450x450, I don't know what the fuck is going on.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>4296276 >.jpg >Moves like a .gif

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