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Anonymous Sat Mar 13 16:41:27 2010 No.423568 [Reply] [Original]

Criticism, please? It would be appreciated, thanks. Here it is:

Well I was just standing here, and Tom Cruise locked himself in the closet
I asked myself why won't Tom Cruise just come out the closet?
Nobody has no answers, and so I pull out my gun!
Tell my why Tom Cruise in the closet or else I'm gonna shoot someone!

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 13 16:43:27 2010 No.423574 Critique on your joke? I laughed a little.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 13 16:44:00 2010 No.423578 sage for idiocy

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 13 16:44:06 2010 No.423580 Is this supposed to be funny? It's not a rage-troll so what joy could you possibly get out of this.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 13 16:46:05 2010 No.423586 >>423580 here >>423578 Nevermind

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 13 16:46:20 2010 No.423587 Is this from South Park?

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 13 16:57:51 2010 No.423611 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jyvzfgxY0kc

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 13 16:58:41 2010 No.423612 >>423587 Yes. Word for word. He didn't write this.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 13 17:01:00 2010 No.423619 take it to deviantART. God damn.

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