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four leaves on
the river flows down
get away

>> No.3894633

wind flows thusly
over yonder
through the bush

>> No.3894640

Aye, lemme holla
Aye girl, you with the fat ass
Aiight, fuck you then

>> No.3894647

too juicy
right over the mark
cant i be whats dark?
slow too slow to hark
can i be whats in the dark?
no i fly away too fast
excrete the future
not the past
not the wind
not the boat
im coming
dont be late

>> No.3894669

bitches on my dick
some niggas on my penis
my meaningless life

>> No.3895843

The river is wide
I can't step it
I love you girl
I can't he'p it.

17? Is it 17 for a haiku?

>> No.3895868

>>3894630
I was browsing /lit/
I then saw this dumb thread
OP i a fag

>> No.3895875

Haiku my smaiku
Emphasis of a wooden brick
can't be ignored

>> No.3895896

If it is to be only an element of a whole
To hide behind others and form the eclipse of mind
Ignominious and pale

If it were to one having nothing to tell
This would equal a state of being the one
Ignominious and pale

Fallen in the abyss of dignity
Doubt does not exist
Or come into being pale

Incarceration of personality is the sad inception of self denial
The one that denies the inner self flees into deception

>> No.3895902
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3895902

In a land of things
there are many many things
lots and lots of things

>> No.3895905

tripping on woodrose
watching fractals explode
vasoconstriction

>> No.3895909

haikus have 5,7,5 syllables.

>> No.3895912
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3895912

>>3895843
5-7-5, 17 syllables in all, yeah

I'm out of pudding
I think I will go make more
This is my weekend

>> No.3895984

attack ships, c-beams
all lost like tears in the rain
it is time to die

>> No.3896013

I'm a Haiku Genius
I Break the Rules, because I can.
A problem with that? Punk?

>> No.3896034

Cycles can rewind
In grounded murmurs blessing
Thanks to the based god

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3896141

Haiku's in English
No Japanese Syllables
It's not a challenge

When you make words fit,
Without much difficulty
In tight sets nicely ordered

The rules of English
Come with their own arrangements
For you to defeat.

Working against these
Under pressure comes beauty
Lines of refined Thought.

>> No.3896147

I've got to study.
I'm going to fuck my course.
I'm such a fucking.

>> No.3896149

a stream is gentle
like a maternal mother
in the open wood

>> No.3896152
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3896152

>>3896147
Do not fuck the course,
Go out and fuck your teacher
Giver her D. get A.

>> No.3896170

Attempting Haiku
What, I don't know what, I am
am I even doing?

>> No.3896175

>>3896170
Can I not even,
can I not even count to
a seven count?

>> No.3896182

>>3896175
This to my ego a
small crushed butterfly under
my tried ineptness

>> No.3896183

>>3896170
>>3896175
>>3896182
Ok I am done
I will spare the choir of
my failures of /lit/

>> No.3896191

This poem is wrong
"Haiku" has THREE syllables
Ignorance is bliss

>> No.3896194

>>3896191
Oh hot shit nigga
That goes to show how much I
know about poems

>> No.3896198

>>3896194
In retrospect
I probably should have known
Hai- a- ku it is.

>> No.3896208

>>3896198
Japanese is weird
Their syllables are proscribed
Diphthongs don't exist

>> No.3896230

>>3896208
Dialect problems
after having learnt five
unique accents.

East n' mid of A.
Australia and NZ
United Kingdom.

Everything I know
from my childhood are all___(Ignore this one part )
lies mixed in lies__________(it makes no sense in any place)
________________________(that speaks English )
This was bad, now made
worse by my attempts to
improve, I give in.

>>3896183
>>3896194
>>3896198
I take all the blame
This is a shameful try at
what should be beauty