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3515861 No.3515861 [Reply] [Original]

Here, I tried and failed to emulate e.e.cummings. What do you think?

in outermost songstricken eyes curvaceous words is autumnal sunlight and your choral laugh whose effervescence echoes nubile in and out of weeks and wrapping around cobwebs in my clockwork heart and O my spider my cogs turn even as your glorious venom thunders through my veins

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>> No.3515905

I'll try the spacing for you, OP.

in outmost
songstricken eyes curvaceous
words is autumnal sunlight and
your choral laugh
whose effervescence
echoes
nubile
in and out of weeks and wrapping around cobwebs in my clockwork heart and
O my spider my
cogs
turn
even
as your glorious venom thunders
through my veins.

>> No.3515915

>>3515905
thanks, anon!

>> No.3515917

>>3515884
>I tried to emulate e.e. cummings
Do you even poetry?
Do you even e e cummings?
No punctuation, no real capitalization.

>> No.3515921

>>3515917
>implying e e cummings is poetry

>> No.3515927

>>3515921
Let me guess,
>Two Kay Thirteen
>Shiggy Diggy Do

I wasn't at all implying that e e cummings' work is poetry, I'm just asking you people to read my "work"