Was going through my old hard drive and found a certain short story that I had done a few years ago while heavily intoxicated. It's pretentious and badly written as all hell, but I'd still appreciate it if /lit/ would tear my asshole apart over it. http://pastebin.com/EYYG6jJb

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Anonymous Thu Jan 10 23:55:13 2013 No.3344198 [Reply] [Original]

Was going through my old hard drive and found a certain short story that I had done a few years ago while heavily intoxicated. It's pretentious and badly written as all hell, but I'd still appreciate it if /lit/ would tear my asshole apart over it.

http://pastebin.com/EYYG6jJb

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>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 11 00:08:12 2013 No.3344238 >>3344198 just awful, I really don't know what else to say

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 11 00:14:12 2013 No.3344251 Titles: Various shades of gray

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 11 00:14:12 2013 No.3344252 It's an example of disgusting that 3rd person voice many novice writers fall into.

>>	Anonymous Fri Jan 11 00:15:12 2013 No.3344256 >>3344252 >disgusting that that disgusting*

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