/lit/ - Literature

[Anonymous No.3249753]

I spent years.
And i mean every minute of them.
Building you this... huge house inside of my heart.

It had many little rooms where we could be silly, or naked, or sweet-sap corny. Or maybe we could just talk or fight or be together in silence.

Nothing was missing.
Except you. So i waited.

But you never arrived, and the house started decaying. And i, i just couldn't stand it.
And so i burned it down and demolished the whole thing with a steamroller.

And suddenly... here you are, with your little suitcase.
You find me standing among the ruins.

And then you ask me why i'm so sad.
And then you ask me why i'm so angry.

[Anonymous No.3249772]

Please tell me you're posting this as an example of how not to write and not because you think it's good.

[Anonymous No.3249779]

>>3249772
nope

[Anonymous No.3249783]

Horrendous. You just know the pinhead who wrote that comic never experienced a moment of significant thought in his life.

Doesn't matter, though, because even less talented and less experienced people will find it poignant.

[Anonymous No.3249791]

>>>/co/

Maybe somebody there will think the writing isn't crap. You won't be so lucky here.

[Anonymous No.3249799]

>>3249791
Are you kidding? You guys are nice compared to the reaming /co/ would give me.

[Anonymous No.3249835]

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