/lit/ - Literature

[Anonymous No.3247401]

Had to do a sonnet for my lit class how'd i do?

Pic unrelated.

Your eyes, green as rolling emerald fields.
Your crimson hair, running down your shoulders.
Tis my love for you that no other wields.
You are a goddess with vibrant composure.
Your curves blind men like they stare at the sun.
Magnificent in the eyes of all men.
Beautiful you are, stunning everyone.
I come back always each time and again.
Love of my life, my angelic lotus.
I would move heaven and earth through and through.
God’s radiant girl, his magnum opus.
I give my undying love now to you.
Elegant lady, let me set you free.
Come my love, so we can together be.

[Anonymous No.3247444]

I don't like it. God's radiant girl, his magnum opus. Really? The couplet is even worse. Not to mention the rhyme.

But then again, it is a sonnet.

[Anonymous No.3247456]

I accidentally misclicked /fit/ and came to /lit/.

This sonnet is garbage. Even though this is probably a bait thread and was written by some renowned faggot.

>your curves blind men like they stare at the sun
More like your curves blind men like the glare of the sun
>magnificent in the eyes of all men

Men used too often.
sage for shit thread

[Anonymous No.3247474]

[Anonymous No.3247722]

>>3247401
it's about katarina
/thread