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Hey guys, i need a title for a poem i wrote - I know it isnt anything special, it's just a normal school assignment (had to be a romantic or post-modern poem). English isnt my main language either, so if you spot any obvious errors.. yea

Any ideas? Poem:

The constant drive of the burning forge
A product from beneath the searing gorge
The hellish remnants of most ancient lore
War at its core

The darkest essence of the mortal world
A chance for blackened hearts to unfurl
The earth dimmed by sword and spear
Fear ever so near

The uneasy tremble felt in the ground
A primordial omen we try to drown
The bleakness and bareness of human mind
Confined to be blind

The intimate reality we refuse to see
A glimpse of a world yet free
The power of mountain, forest and sea
We can never decree

The staggering hope always followed by dawn
A beacon of light urges me on
The depressing reminds me of the pressing
The blessing of expressing