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3058834 No.3058834[DELETED]  [Reply] [Original]

I just recently discovered that a friend of mine does poetry. I'm actually pretty impressed. What do you guys think?

if I only fall as far
as the margins on his page
I will fold myself to fit
his gray-fringed dreams

and if he forgets my name,
left in his starlit eyes,
I will erase my noise
from his flawless skies

dear,
I built a house of dancing lights
empty rooms for you to run
your fingers through

and someday I will make
you gardens, too

>> No.3058835

>I just recently started doing poetry. I'm actually pretty impressed. What do you guys think?

>> No.3058837

>>3058835

No, she's a girl who lives across the hall from me in my dorm

>> No.3058840

it reminds me of a girl I used to know. What's her name?

>> No.3058843

>>3058837
is she hot?

>> No.3058846

That is actually good

>> No.3058847

>>3058840

I don't feel comfortable with saying her name. Where are ya' from?

>>3058843

ehhh 6.1/10

>> No.3058849

>>3058847

California. Definitely higher than a 6.1, though.

>> No.3058858

>>3058849

i mean her physical attractiveness is about a 6.1/10 imo.

and woah! we're both uc berkeley students, and she's from Santa Clara County.

>> No.3058872

>>3058858

She was a Berkeley student but she's graduated. I miss her.

>> No.3058884

>>3058834
Good poetry, but that shop sucks.

>> No.3060172
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3060172

I am full of feel all of a sudden