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[ϟ ＺＨＫＮＤ ϟ !Ry9.MAY90A No.2842534]

http://gawker.com/5929016/2012-grrm-thrombosis-induced-coma-game-of-thrones

[Anonymous No.2842538]

>>2842534
you really should post a long comment

[Anonymous No.2842546]

>>2842534
nigga i hope your still composing that really long comment, because i can't see it yet

[Anonymous No.2842576]

>>2842534
wuts wrong with you. y u no deliver?
'-'

[Anonymous No.2842597]

>SHE WAS FIVE POINTS OVER HER “IDEAL” BODYMASS INDEX.
Bodymass index is not an "ideal" measure of physical fitness or health.

>SHE WAS STROKE BY A LIGHTNING.
Either you are referencing something I am not familiar with, or your command of English has suffered a lapse in quality.

Furthermore, you are inconsistent with your usage of em dashes (—). Sometimes you have one space to the left of the em dash, as such:

>CIGARETTE —“BENSON

Sometimes you put the space to the right:

>100’s”— UNDER

The correct usage, according to most style guides, would be to not surround your em dashes with spaces.

Additionally, you should place punctuation inside quotation marks if you adhere to American English.

[Anonymous No.2842612]

>>2842597
bumping for more in-depth analysis of OP's body of work

[Anonymous No.2842704]

>>2842597

He uses em dashes accurately. And punctuation marks inside inside quotation marks look bad.

[Anonymous No.2842748]

>>2842704
>He uses em dashes accurately.
No. No, he does not.