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2716692 No.2716692 [Reply] [Original]

I'm home at last from a long hard day
I unclasp the time which has kept me bayed
Oven ready meals, a delicacy for the poor
Of epicurean splendor, I am to savour.
And to the world wide web, I am to partake
Of debates, musings, and other's mistakes
Is this kind of life, the new Arcadian way?
Is this the way of paradise in the modern day?
Of harmless trolls who incur great rebuke,
And intellectuals whose minds are in fluke.
Does one need to be stripped of all worth,
To make one realize what is the source of mirth?
I say no, and I count my blessings,
and I ornament my chicken burger in all the dressings.


This poem was written by Roach-Slayer.

>> No.2716714

>>2716692
Not bad, could be better. It has potential

>> No.2716721

>>2716714
I wrote it in 5mins.

>> No.2716728

>>2716721
Ok, for a flash-poem it's pretty good.

>> No.2717024
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2717024

>>2716721

Bragging about such a petty thing, child? 5 minutes, 10 hours, it is still the same: it has potential

>> No.2717040

>>2716721
No shit, we can tell from the clusterfuck of syllables. Do you even know how to write poetry?

>> No.2717383

>>2717024
>it has potential

Thank you beauitful man (even though your post was a bit cunty).

>> No.2717520

cute.

>> No.2717525

Congratulations, you almost just barely qualify as a rhymester.

>> No.2717528

>>2717383
I think I started writing "warmed up" near the end, hence why it got much better after half-way through.