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that feel when looking through your notes and you find a piece of writing so good and so bizarre you have to think hard until you realise, yes, i did write this, yes, this is a piece of me, and things don't seem so hard anymore

>> No.2588499

that feel
ahh, that feel

>> No.2588527

Unless you share it with us, I don't believe you.

>> No.2588985

>>2588527
Yes yes share it please

>> No.2589025

bump so the coward shares

>> No.2589030

even the insignificant text messages I quickly write are eloquent; thus, I don't know that feel.

>> No.2589031

SHARE YOU HEATHEN BASTARD!!!

>> No.2589036

op here.

god, i feel so ashamed. i re-read it and now i don't actually think it's good or worth sharing. sorry for being so talentless, everyone. i really feel bad and ashamed about making this thread, now

>> No.2589037

>>2589030
then how do u manage to fuk up so bad when u post here?!?!1?

>> No.2589042

>>2589036
good, that's all I wanted.

>> No.2589044

I reread a book report I wrote on Dracula, by Bram Stoker, and was shocked at how good it was considering I was 14 when I wrote it. That was quite the confidence boost

>> No.2589046

>>2589030

Doubt it, considering your rather awkward placement of "quickly".

>> No.2589060

>>2589044
>tfw 1st year english teacher decides to have the class write a book of short stories
>everyone else writes about war and dragon's and shit while you do a stream-of-conscious description of your first day of secondary school
>that frustrated feel when it's badly written
>wastedpotential.jpg

>> No.2589069

>>2589036
I found a song I had written maybe 2 years ago the other day and it was god awful and a complete shock when I found it. Almost like I had repressed writing such a terrible piece of work.

>> No.2589071
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2589071

>>2589046
>>2589046

little babby can't into my avante-garde writing

>> No.2589072

>>2589071
>misusing semicolon
too high brow for MY blood for sure.

>> No.2589217

>>2589036
I sympathize, OP. It's like looking at rocks and shells underwater, the colors are so bright but when you bring them to the surface they dry out. I've got tons of songs that I keep to myself because I can fill the awkward gaps in the privacy of my brain. If you keep developing those things I feel like it can become what you imagine. Or maybe it will be godawful, you know?

Also I realized the other day, that the higher the stakes are when it comes to art, the more hate something gets. Well, with high stakes the artist is also more likely to choke and make it lame.

>> No.2589704

If I ever were to like any of my writing I am certain I would be a happy man

>> No.2589711

For me it's always reopening a file of a story I thought came out decent and just augh every single fucking word suddenly seems forced and terrible and I want it to disappear but I have to keep it for senior portfolio.

>> No.2589717

>>2589071
>avante-garde
Too many, too many "e"s. Maeke ite stope.